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heyo peeps, another hero's heart update is up! apologies for the lack of star interactions, we had a hard time putting everything together this time and we couldn't fit both story and interactions. We'll be sure to have them come back next time. Again, apologies!

Hope you like the update nonetheless!

as always putting this here: meek made another FAQ for people curious about how the CYOA works, you can find it here:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RheNU7chJ0uj2CibdtBbjvElLzJOE5k_1G5JaprsH0I/edit?usp=sharing

also, something mysterious, regarding branching paths, and their abrupt end…

https://forms.gle/mLCaLG4oijKfBWqy8

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Redpanda X

What will happen next I wonder?

Schrödingerz Lion

Things happen it is understandable!! Don't know what I'd put for comment in this as like....the next actions I cannot see so.... probably just the constellation again for me 😅😅😅😅

Everett Telos Gale

GARGOYLE STAR (to Behemoth): Ben! Can I call you Ben? Before you do anything, please! Tell us everything you know, starting from when Red became court wizard and ending with our ring in your possession. ACTION: As Gargoyle Star asks Behemoth, he will transform Wolf into a towering, musclegut gargoyle, complete with a sizable junk matching Behemoth's. (Maybe even dumb him down as well, in case he tries to stop Behemoth from revealing everything.)

HimboBarret

Second times the charm i suppose. Hedonism Star To Cleric & Kurt Congratulations You hot horny meat bags on your little bonding moment! But I think you could both be closer~ Action: Fuse Kurt & Cleric into a new Super Leather Daddy Stud! (in a Similar way to Gem fusion from Steven universe or Fusion from dragon ball, the fusion will be their own person with traits from Kurt & Cleric and will a be temporary fusion)

cherrydad

HUNGRY STAR (to Cleric): "Hear me, for Drom cannot see this void. The "God You Know" was responsible for your rejuvenation. Your stout, muscular adventuring body was given to you by Red. Your son. Your faith is built on the lie the Gods restored your body, when they didn't. Cherry needs your faith more than any other." INTENT: Unravel the lie in Cleric's past, if Cherry is to have Kurt and Cleric's support in a divine sense -- clarity of the past should be made known. Cleric is here because of Red, and the power that brought him back is with Cherry. His devotion is owed to Cherry and Cherry alone.

Hinner

Star of Lost Causes: Maybe Kurt would feel better if he came handsfree...

Cross

Father Star: Prodigal son returns? For some reason, I don't feel like that's the one we ought to worry about...

Alan

Librarian Star: (Sorta adding onto the sentiment, but directed at Cleric directly) Your faith is not reciprocated by the Gods who claim dominion over your world. Your worth comes from you and those that actually return your love. Whilst your chains are broken, a choice needs be made.

HimboBarret

Behemoth might be onto something. Totally not agreeing with him because I want him to keep me as as sex slave 🤤🥴

jaquane patterson

R.N.G Star: (To behemoth) Do you still remember a love for speedy boats big one? Well take the helm, and ride your joy. Action: Ask behemoth if he still has a love for super fast boat rides. Then enchant the ship to sail super fast.

Becquerel

Fisherman's Star: (To Milo) Milo dear! Still as sexy as ever I see. This is still a great look for you! How about flexing those muscles for us? Bounce your pecs, place your arms across your chest like an Aldunyan Pharaoh, raise your arms and head towards the heavens. We want to see it ALL!! ACTION: Have Milo show off his sexy body for the Stars. From his handsome face to his muscular bare feet, let him model for us. ^__^

Rob

I hope kurt ends up as a happy slut when this is over he deserves a chance to cut loose and get pounded

ItsHypnoFuckBees

Memories Star: "I remember our last meetings not going so well, beehemoth. Let's just open with 'don't hurt or turn anyone and we'll be fine', okay?"

Fe5ter

For nearly TWO years (May 2024), the MRI results are finally revealed!

AnotherMeekOne

Remember that you are paying to support BC's work, and getting a comment into the story is a privilege, not a right. Sometimes as things are being outlined, we realize that we need to afford the time to develop--if you do not care about the comic outside of using it as a playground, I apologize, but the characters and plot will always come before trying to fit in Star interactions. Obviously if we knew ahead of time that Star actions weren't going to get in, we would've informed everyone in the last post. We've done it before. This go-around we wanted to focus on giving Kurt and Cleric some characterization before you guys try to break their brains, again, and that consequently meant we couldn't fit in the Marston stuff. It happens. Making a comic is already hard without it being a CYOA. I'd ask you--and everyone else--to please afford us some grace. Thank you for reading.

AnotherMeekOne

Remember that you are paying to support BC's work, and getting a comment into the story is a privilege, not a right. Sometimes as things are being outlined, we realize that we need to afford the time to develop--if you do not care about the comic outside of using it as a playground, I apologize, but the characters and plot will always come before trying to fit in Star interactions. Obviously if we knew ahead of time that Star actions weren't going to get in, we would've informed everyone in the last post. We've done it before. This go-around we wanted to focus on giving Kurt and Cleric some characterization before you guys try to break their brains, again, and that consequently meant we couldn't fit in the Marston stuff. It happens. Making a comic is already hard without it being a CYOA. I'd ask you--and everyone else--to please afford us some grace. Thank you for reading.

BearParadox

SAGA STAR: “All of you… neither the gods nor the Ministry care about you. They use you as pawns and food. There is a path beyond the hedonistic ego death of the Lost or the agonizing self-denial forced on you by the gods. And the only way to realize that path is for all of you to unite behind Cherry- not Zenion reborn, but Cherry wielding Zenion’s power.”

BearParadox

ACTION: Show everybody in the room a vision of a paradise under Cherry’s guidance: a world where the Heat is tamed, and people gain the mutability of the Lost without losing their identities, where they can express and explore their feelings and desires openly and without shame.

Blade G Shepherd

Desires Star To Kurt: "Ye daein awright mate? Allow me tae provide the pleasure an relief yer so desperately cravin handsome. Let's put oan a few inches tae that gut!" Action: Give Kurt a tartan kilt that gives him a VERY thick Scottish accent. The kilt fattening his body up. He also gains a strong gainer kink making him prideful about being fat and wanting to throw his weight around

Manicorn

(ugh, Bee tail-snapping Milo, AND Dr. Cleric threatening to put Kurt over his knee, AND Kurt acknowledging he needs to be disciplined right after? How can I choose which way to go with all these options!) DISCIPLINE STAR: Welcome to the party, Behemoth. You've got good timing. Half these guys have admitted they need a good spanking, and the other half--in the way of all bratty boys--just needs one more for NOT admitting it. It's a buffet of hero ass. *when and if Wolf assumes the position Bee outlined the last time they talked--silent, respectful, bent over with his ass in the air for inspection--the others will be temporarily coerced to do the same* (hey, if he can work out his frustrations via spanking he won't do any more serious damage, right?)

Glitch the Iron

Iron Star: High ranking Minstry personnel detected! Detainment activated! Action: Wrap Beehemoth in black iron chains.

MorianderQ

Sloth Star: "Oh man, this is so not cool. Things were just quieting down for a bit. My dude, let's not be too hasty here." Action: Try to knock out Bee with A pleasant smelling sleeping powder. If he doesn't get knocked out, at least he might become drowsy and less effective, giving our heroes a better fighting chance, should it come to that.

Saber

(The plot thickens ! a more story-focused update feels nice sometimes) Stained Glass Star :"Anger breeds violence, thus rendering the circle unending. We must break the cycle." Action : constellation with Iron Star to prevent Bee from starting a fistfight, adding some prismatic locks to the chains to enforce em.

deersarecool

I'll just run my last command again. Maybe something about it will heighten Beehemoth's curiosity? Velvet Star: "Supes, I think Levi is just stressed out right now, so take comfort in that. How close is he to the gods, anyway? We see he has a zealotry check, as Cleric has restraint, & you, as we just found out, have forensics."

Jr7LuckyCoruki

Performer's Star: Bee dearie, wonderful to see you again! Do hope you're here to just have a chat and also as a fellow performer. No need to wear a veil when us stars can see through it, when we aren't trying to play along. Unrelated this is just a precaution, you understand sweetie, huhuhu~ Action: Various hands move around Beehemoth. Like a mime making an invisible box, except containing someone else inside the box! My hands slowly make a durable, prismatic see-through box containing Bee and like a magician's box there is always a trick, that being a door to exit the box behind him ironically. Hopefully he doesn't figure that out till the conversation’s concluded. Performer’s Star: You do look like a figure in its packaging like this. Accessories would be nice, but looking good as is Bee dearie, huhuhu~

Dark627

Dragon star: (To Kurt) we may not know what happen to your wife in this time line but perhaps we can give you some of her power(if she had any). Death can be hard but the soul live on forever. *summon a undead dragon hand from the floor and offer Kurt a small piece of her soul, granting him some dragonic power* Perhaps fusing the with the cleric could awaken it too. He should be able to sustain it since he a little effect by the Lost.

rawr7

I understand that the comic comes first, and I’m not saying comment inclusion is an entitlement. What I was getting at is that it’s frustrating to use a comment on something that was already unlikely to make it in, only to find that out once the relevant story moment has passed. I’m not upset that Marston didn’t happen. I’m asking for clearer guidance beforehand so readers can make comments that actually fit the update’s scope. That seems like a reasonable ask, especially since this has come up before.

Robert Smith

Update thoughts! It's interesting seeing a more relaxed and playful Beehemoth - we've seen the iron fist, so the velvet glove is an interesting addition to the character. And the fact that he and Milo, despite being diametrically opposed, do share more than Bee is willing to admit - a single minded purpose, destructive tendencies, kept in check by an equal libido. And both corrupted by the Heat - interesting that Beehemoth notes that, without a Patron, Milo will be overwhelmed by the corruption he has been granted. I wonder if that was from blood descent, or something else? And I feel like we saw the same with Sylvia as well - both are in real danger. And hey, we see the weird twisted duality of Beehemoth - both somehow still in love with Wolf, and wanting to destroy him. Interesting his view of the Ministry seems the weakest of all of them - 'Brotherhood is overrated', after all. And even that is proven a lie, with the clear way he holds back from his mission to watch Dr Cleric. The Zero Four may not be as broken as it appears. Poor Dom - he is trying to be what Cherry needs him to be, but it's dangerously close to tearing him apart at this point. Cherry needs him to be the dashing, carefree Orc - but in reality he is a lot deeper than that, and I worry what will happen when those two impulses collide. A real meaty discussion between Kurt and Dr Cleric, which I love. Kurt's simmering resentment has ebbed and flowed, but it does kind of highlight how... brash he has been in front of Wolf, almost trying to cover up the deep seated anger for a brother who is constantly obsessed with the past rather than the future. I wonder if Kurt knows that Red is aware that Dr Cleric's son? Certainly, Cleric certainly reacts to the words, but is callous enough to know that the otter he raised is flawed - linking to his wish that he had been more there for Cherry. So the inside of Cherry seems like he is starting to take on Zenion's role as full of souls, especially those who have become Lost to the Heat? At least, that is my first take. I wonder if it is connected to the Carcass as well - eternal alternate versions of his friends suffering horny fates without end. Perhaps the Kurt that is seen in there is the Lost version of Kurt, part of his very soul shaved off? I am interested to know more. And damn, Kurt's breakdown. It makes sense, in a mildly self destructive way - at the end of a Vidoran life, one of the Gods is taking you to their private Heaven or Hell. Zenion's living afterlife is at least a guaranteed fate - one where your soul can't be used as leverage. But, I hope there is another way forward for them all. And glad that Dr Cleric stopped him - and that Sue cares for her fellow Council member. Interesting to see Drom's powers - puppetry and stigmata, almost like a twisted taxidermist. And, later, we see that his powers DON'T extend to Beehemoth's location, which I assume is the Carcass. Makes sense, that is Red's domain, which means the power of another divinity - and from the clash of Mord and Frederik they seemingly can't interfere too heavily in the realm of one of the other Gods. Poor Wolf - it must be painful to witness through a filtered perspective his betrayal of everything that makes him 'Wolf' - especially his attack on Cherry, and attempts to betray them all. But again, we see the thing that Kurt hates about him - that desire to look backwards and internally, rather than empathise. To self flagellate rather than to make amends. And I suspect, what Beehemoth hates too.

Robert Smith

Windchime Star: Satyr Daddy - talk to Beehemoth, to your friend and ally. I think he's wavering, on a precipice, having been brought back... And, he's been watching you, not turning to violence but with longing for times gone by. This doesn't have to descend into bloodshed. Action - Use my power to put weight to Dr Cleric's words, forcing Beehemoth to hear them in his heart, no matter how much he tries to ifnore.

pastorp

Reusing my old comment from last week: Alright, Contention Star, I'll help prime Wolf for this to see if we can force a particular Bad End to appear. Movie Star To: Wolf "Wolf, pal, think back at your time when you and the others were at that Chateau in the mountains, where Cleric Bred you silly. That night, did something happen?" Light, Camera, Action: Flashback! Send the target's mind down memory lane. Constellation with Contention to try to trigger a Bad End involving Marston so we can ride it back down Marston's memories instead.

rawr7

Reuse my comment on the last update: Alright. I'm torn between Behemoth and Marston. But I think I can fix Marston. Ready? CONTENTION STAR To: Marston "Actually, there was a place where you and Wolf might have met in a timeline. You were in the mountains escaping Mord's forces. Below that mountain was a Chateau the Zero Four stayed at. Now-and my logic is shaky on this-if there WAS a bad end there, soldier, we piggyback on it and try pulling Wolf into your memories. Brace yourself, soldier." Action: Attempt to manipulate Wolf's next orgasm trigger to hit a bad End involving Marston meeting the Zero Four back in the day. I need help for this, this is a major luck roll here. Also, BC/Meek, shorten it however you want. I know I went way too long. So the theory is that perhaps in THIS timeline, no, Marston NEVER went to the Chateau at the bottom of the mountain. HOWEVER, in the nigh-infinite time loops, I'm banking on at least on loop where he DOES venture down to shelter in the chateau and relies on his psychic powers to jedi mindtrick people into just, you know stay and forget he was ever there.

Gatlin

Nexus Star:(To Cleric) Bee is more willing to listen to you even his current state. He still see you as a good friend, let him know that you do to. (To Wolf) And Wolf, remember what I said before, it's best to face your problems head on instead of running away from them. Listen, even if it hard to talk about or admit, the problem won't go away and will only get worse unless you confront them and get this off your chest. And also, remember these words, we ALL done things we're not proud of.

Rodney Talon

Iwapele: remembering your funeral and time with Cherry was bad?

Rodney Talon

Iwapele: (to all) I do not forgive you. You have not repented. I do care for more than what is useful or pure. Dominick. I am sorry. May I know your what your obligations are, so I may understand your heart? Action: Get people to deconstruct their negative feelings in hope to master the 'corruption' so love a sublime fuel not a corroding poison

Monu

Peace Star: "You aren't allowed to help us, Dr. Cleric, but the ministry of sin is also an enemy of the gods. I'm sure there is nothing wrong with defending yourself agaist him. If you need to heal someone, maybe you can draw healing magic from us instead." Intent: Just in case Cleric might not have helped because of Drom, giving him a loophole to fight Action: allow Cleric to draw healing magic from the ring instead of relying on Drom's

Sven's Shop of Wares

You and Meek are doing a great job with the comic so far, BC! If you guys have to develop and characterize the characters before stuff happens, thats all good ^^ I honestly do love it when you guys do that

Everett Telos Gale

I feel like the Power of Friendship might become important in the coming scenes by the by!

WorgenRouge

The Golden Star: *to Wolf* Hold a moment before you dash off; the dream isn't over. Marston is still adrift in his own head, and has asked us and you for assistance. Take his hands, look him in the eyes, and share one last dark vision. Let him see the worst of himself, so that he can settle his mind and return to the now. *The moment Wolf makes eye contact with Marston, send a burst of pleasure into Wolf's prostate, with the goal of getting him to climax and trigger a ruin vision with his ruined bottom trait. One last attempt to show Marston his Lost self as he asked us to in the previous update.*

Sven's Shop of Wares

FRIENDSHIP STAR (to Kurt): "Now's as best a time as any to repair the bonds you strained. Prove your loyalty to the others." INTENT: Nudge Kurt to keep Sue, Cleric and Dom safe by holding off Behemoth to the best of his ability.

WorgenRouge

Update thoughts: A) This has been percolating for a while but I believe the in-between that Milo is trapped in, that Bee is frequenting, that it's actually Zenion's Dungeon. Changed by the heat, emptied of all personal effects since his demise, but still connected to him. Note that despite the addition of Zenion/Cherry's blood the the MoS ritual in Port Zero (a ritual that Chimamanda insisted has NEVER required his blood before), Bee APPEARS to be a standard MoS member, as much as any of them can be called standard. The one major exception to this is his connection to this in-between dimension, and his ability to craft portals to, from, and within it. That, combined with the fact that the entire MoS was caught off guard when they were sucked into it, makes me think that adding Zenion's blood to the MoS ritual gave Bee a connection to Zenion's own dungeon. He is tied to it, can access it, and can enter and leave on demand. That would also explain why Drom's tether to Cleric was severed when he entered, as his influence as a god certainly can't reach into another god's dungeon. B) Very tantalizing info for Kurt and Cleric. For Kurt, we learn more about his current feelings on Wolf. Despite what we might have thought, he's not REALLY holding onto a childhood grudge. It colours their relationship certainly, but his REAL issues are way more recent and pressing. The fact that Maeklyn died so recently is new info to us (we didn't know the timeline for certain), and while you can sympathize with Wolf for being lost in his own tragedy, it must feel horrible for Kurt to have to walk on eggshells and listen to him eulogize a man 20 years dead, all while Maeklyn goes completely unacknowledged. And then for Cleric to chime in and remind us and Kurt that he lost a SON (Red), this is the first time we've heard him mention that in the present, and puts things into perspective. Also Kurt going completely over the edge, preparing to turn lost and take Cleric with him, that is a serious escalation and hammers home just how dire his mental state is. C) Bee and Milo stuff was cute and horny. Milo, I feel like this is at least SOMEWHAT an act from him?? Maybe not a total con, it must be at least a little honest, but there's no way he's turned totally flex and laid back on a dime, I think he's trying to appease Bee until he can find a way to break out and continue his mission. I mean he did literally say as much, but I get the feeling that he might be even more dangerous than he's letting on. Just waiting for the opportunity to strike.

Robert Smith

Oh also I forgot to comment on Maeklynn being dead... I wonder if that is because she became a statue, or she just... fell apart when her child was taken away?

Schrödingerz Lion

Paradox Star (To Wolf): Use this Climax to guide Marston to their most Ruined outcome so that our dear Gnoll can return to us. Without him, current possible outcomes for this party are quite bleak. ACTION: In that brief instant of contact...creates a Kaleidoscopic Field of possibilities to allow multiple Orgasms at once...allowing for multiple Bad Ends to lead to the one Marston needs to regain their full selves

Protean

(Just gonna repost my last message with a brief edit...) Advisor Star: "Ahh, before we're taken away... I would like to assist the Fragmentis on what he asked. He wished for an... ending. One where the stories of all involved are cut short before they reach their rightful conclusion. I... think I might be able to assist with this." Action: Retrieve from Advisor Star's pages a tale of a Fragmentis's warning ignored. Something that lead to a tragedy. And after a bit of corruption, a bit of temptation, wouldn't it be better if everyone just *listened* to what he said?

Sandpuppy

Ill second this constellation and take some of his lost blood om the sly. Freedom Star (quietly): "Don't mind me. . " Action: I will strengthen those chains and sample some lost blood from behemoth using a syringe with a little anesthesia then pass some to Dom and Supes.

Hupadup

Gluttony Star with Desires Star: If you're going to make this himbo swagger around then he'll need to padding to match his new pride. Action: Give Kurt a hefty hairy gut and massive cheeks to match his new frame!

Beword

Daemon Star: Multiple falsehoods have you stray from the true path you should be walking on, my dear Satyr. Faith is but an illusion the gods want you to perpetuate in order to keep the status quo. Time for you to break free from it then Action: Since we're talking about the lies in Cleric's past, I would like to help unravel them and show him the truth as it stands

Everett Telos Gale

GARGOYLE STAR: Oui oui! And as you learn ze truths that had been denied of you for so long, perhaps you might just turn, shall we say...devilish~?

Pochi2k

Medicinal Star Then perhaps I shall lend my own hands for this endeavor, if I may? I'd hate to see a fellow doctor be barred from helping his comrades. 

[Action] Coat the cleric’s hands with a rubbery substance that forms into surgical gloves, all the while changing his attire into doctor wares, with the inclusion of a teddy bear head pin on the lapel.

NethGooRat

Midnight Star: (to Marston) After the glow? The darkness of Midnight. Clarity return to you, savior of Wolf. (action: cause Marston to cum SO hard, that he nuts out the stoner toxins from his body, giving him the best post nut clarity focus buff one could get, courtesy of a star of the mind. since some other stars are causing Wolf to cum too, maybe sync of their pleasures, causing them to nut simultaneously, and multiplied by each other's orgasms!)

Fe5ter

Lodestone Star: "Bee were you the one who implored Cleric to leave you behind? The Zero Four were grievously wounded and The Satyr only had enough strength to escape the Dungeon with a single ally."

Ironstream

Oooh. I'll aid with this. green goo can be an adhesive

Rycanrok

Chance Star "I agree, our star pupil need a little get together, a bit more brawn couldn't hurt~"

DJ peace maker

Guardian star: to aid in your moral support I gift you the instrument that will carry on in your journey. Action: gives Kurt a bagpipe that when played not only boosts ego/confidence to the user but also those that listens to it resulting in others to become fat Scottish folks.