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Long Tao stared at me with a rather strange expression for a few movements before chuckling and leaving.

... what the hell?

Are their expressions not important? Am I reading too much into this shit?

Honestly, as soon as I saw the second body, something about it tickled my fancy, but I wasn't quite sure what. After a few more, I picked up on the fact that they all had extremely serene expressions, as though they'd walked into the death's doors all on their own, and were not just happy, but relieved to do so.

Seeing as how Long Tao was relatively dismissive, he probably knew what this place was. Seeing further how he never told me, it means that it likely has something to do with the scope that goes a bit too far over my head.

... seeing finally, I'm happy to exist in my ignorance.

We didn't immediately move on, settling in place for the kids to recover the spent Qi. Even though they made it seem rather effortless, Xi Zhao spent over a quarter of his Qi reserves, while Wan Lan and Dai Xiu were at about one fifth. Light spent two thirds but it made sense since she was fighting well above her realistic cultivation realm, which was now at the 9th stage of Qi Condensation.

Rayce also appeared a bit pale, though didn't meditate like others and instead immediately drew out a few sheets of paper and started drilling into them with his fingertip. Everyone gave him a bit of room as they understood the smallest distraction could mess the entire thing up.

Lao Shun was... re-examining his belief system, I'm fairly certain. Though I prayed inwardly he'd stay away, he approached me about fifteen minutes into our rest, sitting by my side.

"Tell me the truth," he said. "You lot have come from some Upper Realm and you've re-entered the Dust, haven't you?" well, Long Tao has, I suppose.

"No," I said.

"Then it doesn't make any sense!!" he exclaimed. "Having one Disciple like them would have already been extraordinary, but you... you have five. And one of them is even a Shaman!"

"So?"

"You're a cultivator!! What the hell do you know about Shamanism?!" a fair question, but I didn't really want to answer immediately as I was enjoying my bit of glee, seeing this reaction.

It looks like I've been kind of starved of it, as we always had to be low key. Well, we didn't have to and, if anything, I likely went against their wishes by forcing them to be low key, but seeing somebody finally acknowledge them and, in extension me, of course, was... oh, it was quite pleasant. And addicting.

So addicting, in fact, I feared if I let it fester, I might just keep pursuing it in the future.

"Probably more than you," I said.

"I sure would hope so, seeing as I know practically nothing!" he sighed in exasperation, leaning back into the tree as his robes crumpled. "I don't know whether it's merely a play, or you truly are ignorant but... even if other Sects may have far more Disciples than you, I guarantee there are no more than ten in this entire world that can match you talent-for-talent. Do you know how incredulous that is? Especially because, for all intents and purposes, you are a nobody."

"Hey, that's not true."

"It's not?"

"No. I was an Elder of a Sect."

"Really? What Sect? Oh, was it Heavenly Pavilion? Sword Palace?!"

"Spirit Sword Sect!"

"... what the hell is that? Did you make it up?" I groaned inwardly as he looked at me with a bit of disgust in his eyes.

"Haah. I preferred you when you were a pompous, arrogant ass who wouldn't be caught dead casually chatting with someone like me. To think this is your true personality... I don't think I've been this disappointed in something since realizing that I still have to take an occasional shit when I first started cultivating."

"Oh, you too?" he said. "When I was a boy, I heard stories that cultivators didn't need to sleep, or piss, or shit, or anything--they could just use Qi to immediately cleanse their bodies to perfection. Imagine my surprise when I finally started cultivating and realized... none of that applied to me. Must have spent the first few months absolutely depressed, but couldn't tell anyone why because I was absolutely embarrassed. So, everyone just assumed that was who I am--a glum, surly little lad."

"Boy, he sounds like a lot of fun."

"... I never did apologize for the way I spoke to you that day, did I?" he suddenly said, and I'm honestly half-expecting that the guy has been possessed at some point in our journey, because this is not the same person. "Ha ha, don't look at me like that. I did mention that you are quite young, no? Arrogance, you'll learn, will come to serve you as a wonderful shield. You are kind, that much I've noticed, but urchins feed on that like leeches. There will come a day where you'll either have helped every cultivator alive, or you will have become just as bad as I am.

"And, if we are being honest, I am far from the worst; a good number of my Seniors would have outright executed you on the spot the moment you took that tone with them. Unless they are being revered, they do not want to hear a peep out of those they deem unworthy. Which is most of the world, as it turns out."

"Sounds like I'm better off never meeting them."

"Well, if there is one person who can actually say that," he said as his eyes wandered over toward the kids who had dispersed into the nestling roots of individual trees. "Hm? Ah, we have guests yet again." he said as he stood up, with me following quickly.

The kids, too, quickly converged toward us; a mere few breaths later, shapes began to emerge from between the trees. It wasn't the people, but rather the beasts, all malformed in their own special, unique ways.

They stalked in a wide circle for a little while before lunging forward.

However, despite the fact that there were more of them, they were still individually very weak. The 'battle', if it could even be called that, honestly, was over within less than a minute.

One difference was that their corpses never got swallowed up which is a detail that I suppose does matter, but why? Well...

"AAAAWWWAAAAAAAHHHHTTTT!!!" yet another howl rang out, stirring the hanging leaves on the branches, though this one was a lot louder than any before. Or, perhaps, it was closer.

Was that really it?

The hint suggesting to follow the voice.

Was this really that voice? I mean, as far as I could tell, it wasn't even just one voice. But there was nothing else.

"... let's follow it." I said.

"E-eh?" Lao Shun was the first (and, well, the only one, really...) to show any kind of a reaction.

"What's the worst that could happen?" I shrugged.

"We could die."

"Oh. It's kind of cute that you think death's the worst fate of them all."

"..."

The kids snickered--and even Long Tao sneered--but nobody else protested. It was either that they, too, felt they had to go toward the voice for any chance of discovering the truth of this place, or they simply put the blind faith into my decisions and even if I said something horrible like, 'Hey, let's bury ourselves like those corpses and see what happens!', they would have probably done that without protest, too.

... why do I, more and more, feel like a cult leader rather than a Master?!

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Just the one chapter today.

As is the custom by now, I'd like to ask you all a question: do you like these 'slice of life' chapters where it's more about characters rather than plot progression, or do you simply 'tolerate' them? I try to strike a balance most of the time where at least something happens every chapter even if it is mostly about characters talking with each other, but I'm curious where everyone stands on it.

Comments

Deep sea enjoyer

I prefer plot progression Also, if he can stop being a coward, he didn’t need to be reckless, but if he can grow like 20% more spine.

NameGame

"a good number of my Seniors would have outright executed you on the spot the moment you took that tone with them." They probably could. It would probably not have a happy ending for them in the long run if they did so, lol. "settling in place for the kids to recover the spent Qi" Since Lu inherently (via system) gives off qi to his disciples that are nearby, even with them going back on the march at the end of the chapter I figure they're going to be topped off in not too long anyway, even if they were already partially spent. "do you like these 'slice of life' chapters where it's more about characters rather than plot progression, or do you simply 'tolerate' them?" Character development is important. It's good to me. Empty shells that just just get dragged around by the plot to smash stuff is boring. Thanks for the chapter!

Dean Anderson

These kinds of character interactions are my favourite ngl

Flippu

I like them

Van234

I am ok with them, when there are not a lot of them. You did a bit of exposition for Lao Shun so it was fine.

Dragoon

I like them, actually it's the dissonance between the chapters that drew me to your work.

Zenab Munir

I actually really really enjoy them. More than the action

SlaveToMyWhims

"... why do I, more and more, feel like a cult leader rather than a Master?!" Fun fact! In my native tongue, the word "sect" and the word "cult" are interchangeable. You'd have to prop-up the word with more garnish words to clarify that you are talking about the one, and not the other.

Midjji

I like them

Frank

I know it’s a bit late to reply to this, but I subscribed entirely for the slice of life chapters and can only kind of tolerate the plot ones

TjStorm

Another late reply, but i feel as if they actually necessary to keep the story immersive and as good as it is. A fun little aside, exploration of various characters, POV switches. No, in fact, i wholly support POV switches as wished there were more of them. Especially where we can look from a mooks perspective of how the entire protag cast is just utter bullshit. There needs to be down time inbetween the actions parts.

TjStorm

Also, I would say the disappointing chapters tend to be where the readers feel like the entire chapter is just filler, rather than taking the time to explore other parts of the story, even if it has no bearing or consequences on the main plot. Filler like; the character just thinks about one facet of an interaction, then steps up to the door and knocks, end of chapter. Nothing happens that couldn’t be part of the last chapter or the start of the next.