Early acess demo/update (Patronus ver :22/01/23) (Patreon)
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Hello, everyone! So, here I am with the update, and one thing I ended up changing. When you click, you'll probably notice that I changed the beginning of the demo. I thought it would make more sense and look better for this starting scene, both to provide better context for later events and to give you an extra idea of how Eleazar's mind is (And yes, his POV in the council scene for Chapter 3 is still coming. Don't worry.) I apologize for the delay. It's been busy weeks for me, and I got sick a couple of times, which definitely set me back a bit in terms of writing and work around the house. I'm fine now. I intended to update yesterday, but I had just returned from a trip, so it didn't happen. But here I am!
Anyway, I'll leave the link to the demo update here, along with the survey. So the question is: Does this beginning work better? Or do you prefer the other? Or both, with the MC's first and then ten years ago with Eleazar and the younger MC? Choose, and enjoy the update. I'll bring the rest soon, and I believe I'll have another update by the end of the month. Thanks for your attention, and feel free to talk/ask/suggest whatever you want.
P.S.: Reminder, Hayden and the others are younger here, so don't expect a super confident or provocative Hayden at the beginning or all the time. The same goes for the others who are also still young (Caio and Elia will be more present in the next update as well). Some may already be aware of what will happen, and others not. But a lot will happen in these next updates, and when I say a lot, I mean a lot. Including in the MC's and RO's lives.
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I'll bring another update soon, with much more content, and I'll also talk about elemental power and ability mechanics, which I intend to improve as well.
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