On the Same Page pt 2 (Patreon)

Hi there!

Sorry for the late post (still on the 8th, though!) - 

I've gone through the end of On the Same Page, rereading it, and felt like there was something just a bit... off. I was unable to put my finger on what exactly it was that I didn't like.

But this afternoon - the first time I went to post this actually - it finally occurred to me what was really missing. 

Gianna's point of view. 

Given that everything we have for the narrative is Riley's point of view - which I did because I think it keeps everything moving (... in present day storyline) - there needs to be the "reveal" for Gianna and what's been on her mind, in the end. That's what makes the payoff so good, in a single pov book!

I've spend all day re-working the final few chapters to make it all work with a finale point of view switch. 

So, as we ring in at almost midnight EST, I have to say... the last few chapters are so close to being done. I was debating holding out and posting the single follow-up this weekend, but I refuse to put this off any more. 

A final post, with a true look into Gianna's head, will be posted very soon!

A note to my five dollar patrons, who lowered tiers after August - I will also post the third and final section of OtSP this weekend for you on this tier. Tomorrow, I'll be moving this post back to the right tier, though, so make sure you grab this!