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I'm not quite sure what to say to tantalize this chapter... except... 

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Hana Huskovic

This is amazing! I hope we get the 16th part really soon!

Angelica

Literally on line to board a plane. Audibly squealed with excitement over this notification. THANK YOU!!!!

Sophia Barrett

Pure shock in the last few paragraphs! I literally cannot wait for the next chapter; my heart is in my throat! Thank you!

Juliana

Yessss my birthday present 3 days in advance! Wooohoooo. Thanks Haley!!!

Coffee Cup

I… Don’t have words. For this chapter. I’ll just have you know I will be obsessing over this until the next chapter and I’m not sure I’ll be able to productively live life until I know what happens next.

Alex L

I’m sorry what!? I will die waiting for an update!

spectre

tbh i was a little worried getting into this AU because i loved the original story so much but wow you really have me hanging onto every word in every update! ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Hannah Berridge

Oh my fuck! I couldn’t breathe through that chapter.

Clara Nhu

How do you, Haley Cass, makes us feel like our hearts are starving for more after every chapter. You have gold in your pen

Rachel

I both knew this is where Sutton’s head would be at and was as gobsmacked as she was at Charlotte’s response. But I suppose to change the ending to their story (in the AU), Charlotte has to have changed (and she seemingly has). I’m dying to know the fallout from here. Well done, thank you, and Happy Thanksgiving!

Tiffany Wells

I have ZERO words…. Forget being in my throat… my heart is on the FLOOR! “Then I won’t” rip me

kimberlys323

Wow. That was an emotional roller coaster. Since starting this I’ve kinda hoped they don’t make it at the end here either. Something about the almost meant to be for them fits this universe.

Juliana

Jesus!!! Wth Haley!! This was extremely intense 😱. I'm heartbroken and scared and anxious and I can't believe all this!

Jess Bullock

Okay but did you have to hurt us like that?! Good Lord my heart is all over the floor!

Juliana

Right? What she does is pure magic!

Juliana

I had to lie down on the couch and tell everyone to please not talk to me for a moment. My anxiety was above average!

Dakota Pruiss

OH MY FUCKING GOD, HALEY CASS. WHATTTTTT?!

Miranda

Ahhhhhh, what a cliffhanger!! I was so scared it was all going to end between them in this chapter, but this is honestly better! I can’t wait to see what happens next and where they go from here! How do you capture such sweet, exquisite torture in everything you write??

Noelle

Is this a dream? What in the heck!!! My heart just stopped and stopped.

Erica

The cliffhanger though 😱😭

Lexi Le

Me after finishing that chapter: WTF?! My daughter: Mama! Mommy said a bad word! Me after getting outed by daughter: it was Haley’s fault! My wife: oooo did another chapter come out?

kassandra gravel

Omg. This was amazing. I love that Charlotte is all in this time but is also ready to drop everything if that means she could be with Sutton again. I can't wait to read what's coming next. I know it won't be a smooth ride but I'm a sucker for that kind of emotional rollercoaster

Clarissa Confort

To quote one of the greatest poets of our time: RIP me I died dead

Clarissa Confort

Please post the next chapter soon, I won't be able to function until then

Dani

HALEY please tell me this is your way of tee-ing us all up for the best Christmas gift we’ll ever have 😩

Amanda

Omg stop the cliffhanger!!! Ugh I was fully expecting this to be a full breakup and I am so happy Charlotte is righting the mistakes she made in the past. I literallyyyy can’t wait to see what happens next!!! Also , obsessed with Charlotte just point blank admitting that there’s no one at this party Charlotte wants to talk to other than Sutton. Our girl has come so far :)

Cristy Kuhn

Ditto to these comments!! Cliffhanger x 100!!!! But SOOO good!!!! Thank you 🙏🏼

Dalila Ribeiro

Omg, omg, omg, omg!!! This was a roller coaster! Definitely worth it get late to work to read, but I need more! 😭😭😂😂

E

I don’t even know what to SAY!!!!

Misty

Omg!! How many chapters do you have planned for this, Haley?! Holy moly!

Erica

My first initial reaction is there's no way Sutton will agree to Charlotte not running for president and that they'll still figure everything out together (even with Charlotte running). However, the more I've thought about it, the more it makes sense that Charlotte would choose not to run and be with Sutton and Lucy. She's older and has had time/experience to realize that as great as her political career is, it isn't going to satisfy all of her needs without a partner/family.

Dani

NO! 😆 they are meant to be in every universe

kimberlys323

Haha fair enough. They are a perfect couple.

Alex L

The way I won’t sleep for however weeks/months we will wait for an update! Please put me out of my misery soon!

Noelle

I was so shocked I said stopped twice 😂

Sonia

Haley. Haley please don’t cliffhanger me this way. My groupchat can not handle the way I yell about this

Heather

The way I cackled when Charlotte wondered if she’d fallen into an alternate universe. 😂

Marissa Robinson

Another fan fucking tastic chapter!!!!!! How do you do this!? I can’t wait to read what happens next. The torture of waiting is gonna be rough! 💜

MC

Lol I came here to post this exactly.

MC

I a, shocked no one is saying anything about Layla. Am I the only one angry at Layla? At how selfish she seems? Sounds like she wants to make it about Luce but it really is all about her being worried about the scrutiny her affair might get? Urgh. Sutton grew up with a father in politics, and turned out wonderfully. I hope she can see that. Although I also absolutely loved Charlotte’s vulnerability and realization that she is willing to give it all up for Sutton. Just another incredible chapter. I don’t want the TWW content to ever end. Never ever, please! Even if it means going through this rollercoaster on a nonstop loop. I’m a sucker for these two characters and their story, in any shape, way, or form. The waiting for this chapter will be a sadness fading into madness…. (Spoiler Alert for anyone who is reading these comments and for some bizarre reason has not yet read TWW) Speaking of “Say Don’t Go,” as soon as I read the original TWW novel last week, I found myself thinking that this would be the song for the scene at the coffee shop when Sutton said “I love you” and Charlotte said nothing back. So many other lyrics in this song fit this scene so well, in my mind.

Slac1107

TWW and forever and a day, and now this ... i am so Into these characters and this story, i love them and they have changed me and my outlook on my own relationship

Dani

I love how Haley wrote it — “A place Charlotte had never met.” It’s like her vulnerability with Sutton opened a door to knowing herself more fully 😩

Morgan Kings

This has been knocking around my head for days. Initially I was shocked but can see it makes sense as the spotlight on them all if Charlotte did launch a presidential bid would be so intense. So I’m thinking Charlotte puts her political dream aside (sort of, she’d still be a senator though) and catches up, as it were, to a more cannon-like, fulfilling family life. Then, once they have another child together and both children have grown and left home, Charlotte runs for president in her 60s.

Morgan Kings

Or maybe the president part doesn’t need to happen, but I feel like at that point Sutton - or let’s face it, maybe more Lucy - would be encouraging it.

Anmol

NOOOOOO

Alex L

This lives in my head rent free. Thinking about it three times a day. Four on Sundays. Please Haley! We neeeeeeeeed more for Christmas 🎄

Amy

Haley, I love every book you’ve published, and have read/listened to them each multiple times. But, I’m having a hard time reading Midnight Rain. I think the problem is that you did such an amazing job writing Those Who Wait, and I can’t stand the thought of Sutton and Charlotte not ending up together! You made me fall in love with the characters so much that reading a story where Sutton married someone else, and they didn’t get their happily ever after ending, just breaks my heart!

Margaret Eggers

This chapter was unhinged. I keep re-reading it thinking there will be another chapter (selfishly) but then I get to the end, and bam, I’m speechless.

Chris

I agree. I love, love, TWW

Libby

But maybe they still will??

Spanglish sapphic

I'm tearing up reading this. You're killing me HALEY. THE ANGST even though I know they'll end up together.

Aiden

HUHHHHHHHH