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Will, of the convictions forge.

I really love the concept of images being weak to other images. Is like those games where water is weak to fire and fire is weak to rock.

Joshua Little

Corrections: A pulse of energy spread out from his chest. His fingers tingled. The aura of life- ??? did something get half deleted or something here? I'm not sure if "His fingers tingled" really makes a full sentence... Even with his weakened image, as long as he had a few moments to recover- ???? if these dashes are abrupt changes in thought you need to put something after them or they look like half written sentences.

Misery

I thought he used his Earthquake skill when he stamped his foot. I wonder what will eventually become of it.