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puddles4263

Corrections. Oh man, I have a lot of corrections to do on this week's break day...

Sir Sloth

I loved this chapter. Beautifully done and brought a smile to my face reading the end.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. That's some steamy flirting. *waves air at face* You might need a warning for younger audiences at the start of the chapter.

Untellable

Maybe you should consider setting a minimum number of words per week instead of chapters? That way you can be flexible with the words per chapter without changing the total work per week as much.

Killer Pickle

Thanks for the chapter. Looking forward to the next one

Alexander Dupree

You know I thought i had you figured out. Eggs for 2 chapters Egg for 1 chapter. Now I am realizing that I need to pull all of your comments into pandas and build a model of your responses. Maybe I can reach a more true understanding.

Umut Numanoglu

Thanks for the chapter. Shouldn't Randidly take Derek with him to Dungeon, it would be good for many reasons. Oh, don't worry about the amount of chapters, as long as the chapters are longer it's the same as having more chapters

Christopher Sigurdson

I couldn't agree more, but I think part of the reason Vualla and Randidly work so well is that they are both very independant, so too much cooperation might ruin the dynamic a little bit. Kind of like what happened to Helen and Azriel a little bit during the second Tellus arc.