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Alex LeBlanc

Right at the beginning, it should be "may or may not have been based," to keep the tense consistent.

Subliminary

“I want to finish the final fight in two chapters” huh?? Lool. Thanks for the chapters though, looking forward to the finish!!

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. At least it isn't scorn.

Chris

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Azuolas Korsakas

Really hoping you change the last word from want to something.... something more. I donno. Lust or redemption or something that is more grande

Aldhere

It made me think of the Throne of Want from Dark Souls II, personally. You don't always need something grandiose, as sometimes, the simplest terms are the most accurate.