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David C

Thanks for the chapters!

Zak Cornell

Thanks for the chapters! I have no clue if it’s in your brain and I have no clue how the story will unfold, but it would be An amazing arc to have randidly come back from the nexus like many years later, where he’s just a name and most people don’t even remember what he looks like, even if it’s a short end of story epilogue deal, I just think the idea of him portalling back in and having some

Zak Cornell

Like haughty ghost hound academy graduate yell at him for being in his way the whole xianxia style feel 😀😅

Peter Christensen-Calvin

Isn't he taking this land away? How will a waterfall continue to function without a water source?

DevilAreBack

I’m not exactly sure, but didnt Randidly still have one or two year of frontline duty left? And he only got some six months or so of leave time? How can he go to the nexus if there’s still some time left of his service? or is the nexus the same as the frontlines?

David C

He was granted leave by Iellaya, and original Vualla was supposed to get rid of the rest of his service for him. I’m not sure whether she was able to do that without her tier 3 citizenship, but once she gets that back (I think she just needed a few of the citizenship tokens, which Rand already has?) she can completely waive his service.

InsaneHyde

Delusion would be a interesting one. Easy to understand the negative aspects but you also have to think about the base nature of "Images". It would be trapeze act to teach to kids.

R. R. Quan

Isn’t commissioner Arrietti’s first name Elmer, not Klein?

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I’m pretty sure that was why he was so exasperated by Tim’s choice and why he was not worried about a desert being an issue, cause climates/rivers don’t really follow you.

Grasenrack

Arrogance or over-confidence might be a good keystone. Not sure if it would have too much overlap with Ignorance and Weakness though, as you could argue the combination of the two creates Arrogance.