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Notmyskittles

3000 years seems short for the breadth of history and size of the nexus. Im sure it was mentioned a few times earlier in the story but 300000 years or more would seem more accurate

SunderGoldmane

“Certainly, he would gain a lot of power [[but/by]] getting there, but someday, would the purity of his power draw Aether to him and crystallize it around him...? ((I think someday should be moved to the end of the sentence, but grammar isn’t my thing, just typos.))

SunderGoldmane

“...as the Head Drill Instructor in order to earn merits [[was/while]] the Nexus military...”