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Mark Morris

“ ...unleash a sharp strike mental strike...” remove the first “strike”

Mark Morris

Great couple of chapters this evening. Love the way the story is progressing

Thaco4

Thanks for the Chapters!!

Chris

He should have thrown him into the nexus. Let him see the true horror that awaited expira without him. It could have been an interesting side story to follow Garret as he tried to adapt, learned of the threat then tried to grow enough to actually help expira. He is deluded, but not really evil. What he was about to do was evil that he believed would bring about good.

Jamarr

Delilah was already deathly afraid of Randidly, now she's going to be haunted even further.

Charble

I loved the root throne from the previous chapter and randidly just leaning against the building looking up when garrett comes out. Nice touches