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Chapter 1739 (Patreon)

Published:
2021-04-22 03:21:55
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2026-06
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SunderGoldmane

I was wondering how he could see updated notifications again, now I understand.

George Hicken
>>58245332

> Its suctions was overwhelming. suction Way more errors in the first portion of this chap than normal for you - might need another period read.

George Hicken
>>58245332

> was pulled back past the point of no return was pulled past - back implies it’s escaped after the point of no return

George Hicken
>>58245332

> Because Randidly had begun experiencing the vast spectrum of light with his body, due to his Fatepiece. He peeled the light back layer by layer. Punctuation - should it be “Fatepiece, he peeled”? Or maybe drop the opening “Because”.

George Hicken
>>58245332

> he would need to soon head to he would soon need to head to (opinion - this ordering reads more smoothly to me)

Thundermike00

I bet you the new image, is an image the MC is very familiar with.