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Jonathan Thornton

I'm not hiding at work reading this after my break is over while trying not to sob, you are.

Patrick Short

I'm not crying. My eyes are just sweaty

Raikazzen

Helen's death hitting even harder :(

Alric Good

For helen 😥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥🍺🍺🍺🍺🍺

Athena Alexandria

Well done. Beautiful chapter celebrating the life of a beautiful character, and mourning her passing.

nethernight11

Tha... Goddamit puddles that hits hard, spear straight to the heart

SunderGoldmane

My eyes were too blurry to see any corrections needed.

Hampus Steinvall

When it happened, it hit me hard. I could barely work that day. And yes, I'm crying. I'm going to miss her.

Luke Preston

thank you so much for this story

kyle

Felt incomplete and complete at the same time....how?

Sanairb

His speech was a little awkward, and rambling, and disordered, and full of emotion. It was perfect.

Qrystof

The dialogue was perfectly fucked. Absolutely broken up. I just wish his emotions had ended up gushing out mid speech and really punctuating the moment.

georppy

I'm not crying you are

InsaneHyde

Randidly should give Charlotte back the paintings Helen stole from her.

Ben Andrews

Powerful! This chapter, Randidly, Helen, their relationship, the loss, and my experience, shared so well by my fellow commenters. 🔱