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Hello Gold Patrons,

Here's the Part A update of v.7.0.  It's a bit on the shorter side, but I wanted to get something out over the holidays.  I'm already working on the second part and hope to have that done in January.

For people who reject Chris, this will be a shorter update for you, since he's featured a lot.  I apologize, but that's the way it will go from here on, where some updates will feature different characters.  I like to give warnings before releasing in case people want to wait.

I added a shortcut when you go to "Start" that allows you to skip to Part 3 while answering all the questions.

I also added a "STAT" box, so you can see the general impact of your choices.  These choices in Parts 1 & 2 help shape how Part 3 will go.

This update doesn't have fireworks, so don't go into it expecting to be fully gratified.  Part 3 will have fireworks of course, but the weekend (Sat afternoon & Sunday) is mostly David and Anna coming to grips with what happened, and it sets the stage for the crux of Part 3.

Thank you for all your support and encouragement.  Your patience throughout this process is appreciated.

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Comments

dkbacon

Thank you DEV (Not going to leak it, I hope you pick up new patreons) - I have to say the build up is 8/10. DEV /team got skills with the writing, its so damn good this time. People will hate it for the lack of sex stuff, but for the story, its brilliant, bcs of the climax in the story is happening right now, so this is probably the best update yet IMO, other folks might dislike it to hell.

Adolfo

Thanks a lot.

Ancestral

Chris content without fireworks? It will fit my playthrough because I want to blueballs Chris :D Thank you for the update.

Unknown10522

What's the eta for the android version?

Bringn_Da_Pain

Alright so after a play through with enticing Chris, wow. Anna is definitely going to enjoy being a bad girl, and especially being called bad or naughty. I could see an ending where if David has done nothing wrong and Anna rebuffs Chris that Chris helps David in the divorce proceedings with the photos when sent him in the earlier weeks. Now what I think would be an awesome touch is: 1. As I said earlier David comes to one of the locations and Anna is getting railed by Chris, but he isn’t aware of who is involved. Whether it’s Chris at his place, or Anna at their house. 2. I think a subtle touch would be if David and Anna have a nanny cam or monitor and David got proof of Anna’s infidelity through footage captured through that device, much like a ring door bell showing you who is coming in and out of the house and at what time. Oh Mr. Palmer I could help you come up with some truly wicked scenarios. I mean a clearly Kendra is going to tell Jake to start pushing hard on Monday. Is it wrong to want Chris to start degrading and have Anna degrade David once they start having sex? I mean after the exchange on the couch Chris is definitely got an axe to grind against David. I have no doubt Chris is going to want some pictures of their encounters for his vault.

Mr. Palmer

Thanks! Not sure about “best,” but I’m glad you enjoyed it!

Mr. Palmer

I’ve already done two masturbation scenes, so I opted to skip this one and save the artist’s efforts for future lewd scenes that are more impactful. Really, I want to get past Saturday and Sunday which is mostly relationship drama, so Anna can get back to work Monday and Part 3 really unfolds.

Kevin Mak

Loved the exchange between Chris and Anna. Also enjoy the subtle details that the artist includes, like after Chris is done jerking off you can see the picture of Anna on his phone at the end. Love that Mr Palmer has still kept in the detail that Anna wants another child, makes you wonder who's the lucky guy that gets to impregnate Anna at the end

Bringn_Da_Pain

It's also the best means to corrupt/ blackmail her. Once any of these dudes get their hooks into her for anything, all they need to do is use it against her in how they'll help David win custody of their child, and she'll be doing all kinds of nasty stuff.

Rob

Really enjoyed the update Mr. Palmer. Your story writing is top notch, and as I've said before, your artist is super talented. Can't wait for the weekend to end and Chapter 3 to begin.

James Malaprop

Nah, I'm out. After three months you post a "small update". The game is already a gigantic tease and this Patreon is proving to be a waste of money. Good luck with your endeavors.

Nomad

That text exchange sequence was great. Loving the story and writing. I just wish the updates were faster and feel jealous for those that will experience this game from beginning to end when it is fully completed lol

Mr. Palmer

I suggest coming back in a year... should be a lot of content by then and more action, less teasing.

Soiram

I know many people here want some actual interaction.I don't blame them cauuse I want that too myself. Mr. Palmer you are a great storyteller and a big teaser too. I hope with the next update we'll get some action... Doesn't have to go all the way... it can be soft and sensual for the moment ;) When should we expect next update?

AleB

Good update thanks Mr Palmer..I hope that part B coming out in January (hopefully), will be even hotter with Marvin...as for the return to the office I think we will see it around April...

Slava

The update was very good Mr Palmer!!! can't wait to see the next one

mthb

I enjoy the story with the increasing intensity and the inner struggle, please don't let up on the quality! Hopefully the story will have some "dirty" content like swinging, cuckolding and group sex :). Please keep it up, first class work. Happy New Year to all

Soiram

Something that could have spiced up the event could have been Anna’s masturbation and Chris’s dream of spanking Anna while he was jerking off… ;) PS: No need to show us Chris’s jerking off… 🤪

Mr. Palmer

Yes Anna masturbating would’ve been hot no doubt. See my response to Jimbo’s post below about why I didn’t include.

Adolfo

Great update! Very well written. SPOILER. I love that calculating, manipulative Anna (sweet Anna is not so sweet), and Chris not allowing himself to be manipulated and demanding a price for his help. This is especially seen if Anna believes in David's innocence and is reluctant to give in to Chris. The increase in erotic scenes is consistent. Very well worked the conversations with Kendra (although there are so many crazy laughs every time a scene with her as the protagonist ends), and how Kendra and Chris assimilate the coincidences that help them (and still missing Leonard and his photo). Splendid the artistic aspect, are there any images left from Parts I and II not updated by the current artist? I don't think so. The inclusion of the states and the shortcut in Part III is to be welcomed, although now that it's complete and polished I'm going to replay Parts I and II. It would be convenient to be able to name the saves now that we are starting Part III, please, please. Finally, some doubts, when Anna decides to take the photos it does not cause any modification in the states, is that correct? Do the decisions in part III influence Anna's states or is that already established according to what was decided in Parts I and II?

Mr. Palmer

That's a good question. It's possible the states can change if needed, but for Chris, if she rejects him but still decides to send the pics, it's not because she accepts him, rather it's to use him for her benefit. So she essentially still disapproves him, and thus, you're on the Anna reluctance path with him. I've mentioned a number of times that just because Anna rejects someone, that doesn't close the door; rather, you will have a scenario where there's an option that Anna does things against her will, which is hot in itself.

Mr. Palmer

Not trying to make excuses for myself, but this touches on something... which is - I'm crafting different scenarios, which takes time. This is why it takes a long time for me to develop the story now... there are different paths I have to write for, so essentially, in some cases I have to write a scene three different ways. In part 1 I mostly had to write it one way. Not the case anymore. But that's how I want it... I want the reader to have an experience in most cases where Anna can take on different personalities and approaches for each person she engages with. Largely that's done through the writing. I'm not going to do four different scenes for each scenario - rather, I'm going to write a scene four different ways, and in some cases the artwork will vary. If that makes sense.