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Heralded by an earthquake that very nearly brought the building down around Elijah, the world broke.  He barely managed to escape before the structure completely collapsed in on itself, but in his haste, he almost skidded over the edge of a cliff that hadn’t been there when he arrived.  He spread his wings to arrest his momentum, but he was forced to use Cloud Step to reverse course. 

Once he came to a stop, he peered over the edge to see nothing but darkness. 

Another earthquake ripped through the landmass, sending the crack arcing down an avenue and into the distance.  Suddenly, the two halves drifted apart, telling Elijah that his convalescence had come to an end.

He wasn’t entirely recovered, but it would have to do. 

He ran, reaching a sprint after only a moment.  Then, he bounded high into the sky and extended his wings.  Flapping them a couple of times, he was on his way.  And that told him two things.  First, his wings in his human form were not really meant for all-out flight.  If anything, he mostly just glided.  If he wanted to truly fly, he would need to let himself assume his full dragon form or shift into the Shape of the Sky. 

But for now, it was fine. 

The second thing he realized was that the Broken Crown had truly shattered.  Everywhere he looked, pieces of the landmass had broken apart, and he feared that the chains had been severed.  If that was the case, he had no idea how he was meant to reach his destination. 

But there had to be a way.  He just needed to find it.

Banking to the side to avoid another falling building, he initiated a shift into his dragon form.  His body grew, and in a very different way than when he cast one of the spells tied to his bestial forms.  Those were a product of ethera.  With his dragon form, it was more like letting himself expand. 

Soon enough, he was flying along, and in doing so, his suspicions were confirmed.  It wasn’t as fast as Shape of the Sky.  Somewhere between his maximum footspeed and that purpose-built form. 

Either way, the landscape flashed by, and it was only a day later that he reached the chain.  Fortunately, it was still intact, though judging by the deep groans coming from those massive links, that wouldn’t be the case for much longer. 

That wasn’t the biggest problem, though. 

As soon as Elijah saw the thousands of wasps buzzing around the chain, he banked, hoping to hide his presence.  But it was extremely difficult to conceal the arrival of a fifty-foot long, emerald scaled dragon.  And the vespirans responded exactly how he’d expected them to.

Thousands of them took to the skies, and within a moment, they’d darted among the ruined buildings.  Elijah immediately knew they were faster than him.  Not a surprise, considering he’d seen them fighting dragons since the first day of his arrival into the Broken Crown.  His only option was to fight.

He banked around a corner, then climbed.  Two beats of his wings took him all the way to the top of the building, and he immediately flipped over into a dive.  Tucking his wings close, he timed his attack perfectly, hitting the vespirans the second they rounded the corner.

The first creature exploded on impact.  The second was ripped to pieces by Elijah’s massive claws.  And the third found draconic jaws clamped around his abdomen.  The crunch of carapace followed a moment later, and the wasp-men plummeted from the sky soon after. 

Then, the battle was truly on.

Elijah ripped through the swarm with claws and teeth and sheer size.  The creatures fought back, but their stingers were incapable of piercing his durable scales.  There were no demi-gods among them, after all.  And by that point, those were his only real threat.

Lightning danced around his wings as he cast Lightning Domain.  The tendrils of electricity extended further than they ever had before, scouring the air for more than two-hundred feet all around him.  The wasp-men had no defense, and within a few seconds, they fell from the sky.

Elijah had killed them all in the space of less than a minute.

The power of his dragon form was undeniable, but he’d also discovered a detriment.  Lightning Domain had cost nearly thrice the normal amount of ethera to cast.  It was at least that much more powerful – probably more – so the ratio was unchanged.  But the implications were clear. 

The dragon form packed quite a punch, but it needed a lot more energy as well.

He would take the trade-off for now, especially considering just how much more powerful his body had become.  Not only did he get the benefit of his upgraded cultivation, but that was multiplied by becoming a dragon. 

He felt almost unstoppable.

Which was why, when he ran into a demi-god vespiran, he made the mistake of challenging it head-on.  The creature was fast, though.  Too fast for Elijah to track, and in the first pass, the thing ripped a massive gash in his side. 

Obviously, this was no low-level demi-god.  This was one of their elites.

And like everything else in the shattered world, the wasp-man wanted the Worldseed far more than he valued his own survival.  The thing’s attitude wasn’t quite as extreme as the ones that had directly assaulted the planetary core, but it definitely wasn’t rational, either. 

Elijah faced off against it, still learning to maneuver his new body.  In a lot of ways, it was similar to using the Shape of the Sky.  But it was so much bulkier.  A lot less agile, too.  It was like comparing a motorcycle to a pickup truck. 

But unlike the Shape of the Sky, the dragon form had a distinct advantage in that it had full access to every spell Elijah could cast in his human form.  So, as he layered heals onto himself, he also began channeling Eternal Plague.  However, he soon discovered that he didn’t need to release it right away.  He could let it build.

So, he did.

His chest bloated, his body straining against the ethera as one second turned into two, and two turned into three.  The vespiran bore down on him, screaming something incoherent.  Then, just before the creature hit him, Elijah opened his mouth and released the swarm.

Thousands of blue dragonflies flew free of his mouth, immediately coating the vespiran in a glittering azure cloak.  The wasp-man faltered, and Elijah hit him full speed.  Some of the dragonflies were crushed by the impact, but there were always more.  After that first salvo, he let Eternal Plague cast normally, and it ate through his available ethera with unprecedented greed. 

Elijah added Nature’s Claim to it as he ripped and clawed the stunned creature.  Mushrooms – much larger and more numerous than before – burst from the vespiran’s carapace, sending an arc of spores and viscera to pepper the sky.  The opportunistic dragonflies used the sundered chitin as another entry point. 

Meanwhile, Elijah’s claws and teeth flashed as he grappled with the wasp-man.  The wings went first, but it wasn’t long before Elijah had his jaws wrapped around the vespiran’s humanoid waist.  He squeezed.

And the already weakened creature’s flesh tore.

Elijah barely even realized the battle was over until he saw two halves of the thing plummet to the ground.  He flapped his wings to stay aloft, stunned at how easily he’d killed the demi-god.

But he’d paid a price, too.  Every spell he’d used had cost far more ethera than normal, emptying his core at such a rapid pace that he knew that if he kept going, he’d be tapped out in minutes. 

The message was clear, and it reaffirmed Elijah’s previous suspicions.  Dragons could hit hard and fast, but they lacked staying power. 

That was fine, though.  As long as it served a purpose, he was fine.  Though he had to admit that he was a little disappointed that it wasn’t the be-all, end-all form he’d hoped it would become. 

In any case, he pushed forward and onto the chain. 

This one was hundreds of miles long, and it went straight up.  Along the way, Elijah fought multiple other swarms, though none forced him to use any spells.  So long as that was the case, he could simply rely on the dragon form’s natural physicality to win fights.  However, the long flight served to highlight another issue.

The form needed fuel.

His body drank ethera like it was going out of style, and not just when he was using spells.  In addition, his stomach had already begun to rumble with hunger.  If he kept going for much longer, he’d start to lose energy from starvation alone. 

In addition to that issue, Elijah was also forced to confront something even more troubling.  The problem presented itself when, as he flew over a particularly corroded link, it snapped in two.  The sound alone sent shockwaves through Elijah’s body and very nearly knocked him off course.  But even though the chain hadn’t completely broken – the link was still hooked over another – that wouldn’t remain the case for much longer.

Elijah shifted into the Shape of the Sky, knowing he needed more speed.  That turned out to be the proper course of action because only a few moments after he arrived at the next landmass, another crack resounded through the shattered world.  A moment later, a chain with miles-long links rebounded under the massive tension and fell upon the continent sized landmass.

Predictably, that began a chain reaction of earthquakes that sent cracks throughout the hunk of land.  Elijah sped along, dodging falling buildings, swarms of vespirans, and the occasional dragon as he strove to outrun the calamity. 

Along he went, dipping and diving between various obstacles until, at last, his luck ran out.  He was a long way from the next chain when everything fell apart.  He felt it when the shield broke and a massive wave of nothingness slammed into him. 

His heart stopped.

His body froze.

His ethera ceased to move. 

Reflexively, Elijah exploded with his Mantle of Authority, and beneath the boughs of his soul, the nothingness retreated.  He could still feel it chipping away at him.  At the very essence of his spirit.  But for now, his heartbeat resumed, and he could once again move. 

More troublingly, he could see everything clearly.  Before, the shield had entirely blocked his vision, but now, the entire abyss was laid bare.  And he very much did not like what he saw.

For one, there was a massive, planet-sized red dragon in the distance.  It was thousands upon thousands of miles away, but Elijah could see every single detail like he was standing right next to it.  The glistening scales.  The flames along its crest.  The chains wrapped around its legs. 

And the abyssal monsters that had latched onto it.  They were smaller.  Weaker.  But there were so many of them, and they stuck to the Red Tyrant – for who else could it be – like leeches, gradually sucking the life out of it. 

For another, he saw the Broken Crown in all its glory.  A comparatively tiny cluster of rocks held together by the thinnest of margins.  A hundred or more rocky landmasses had already drifted away, only to be consumed by the abyss.  It did nothing to the rock itself.  But Elijah could sense that it sucked the very life and every ounce of energy out of those hunks of land. 

And any non-abyssal creature that happened to be on them.  Elijah watched as they rapidly wilted into desiccated husks of lifeless matter. 

He ripped his eyes away from the horrifying sight.

Knowing that he could just as easily find himself in the same situation, Elijah flapped his wings, but he found that he couldn’t move.  Gradually, the abyss ate at the edges of his Mantle of Authority, and it shrank a little more by the second.  He pushed more ethera into it, but the extra just spewed out into the nothingness, only to be absorbed and dispersed. 

Panicked, Elijah looked around, searching for some means of escape.

That was when he saw it.

The continent-sized city.  It was still intact.  Still connected to a chain.  And he needed to reach it, preferably within the next five minutes.  Any longer, and he would not survive.

The only problem was that it was at least five thousand miles away.  Maybe longer.

Knowing he didn’t have a choice, Elijah dug deep and gradually reoriented himself in the appropriate direction.  The second he had, he shoved as much ethera as he could into Lightning Surge.

And just like that, he streaked across the abyss as a bolt of electricity, hoping that he could make it before he was swallowed by the abyss.

Comments

Etez

Thx for the chapter :D

Knyko

Makes 0 sense for him to plod along in human and dragon form while talking about needing more speed

Auberon

Oh boi always a banger chap to look forward too

DracoDiablo

Just imagining Elijah spewing Eternal Plague as a breath is brutal and awesome

Corey S

Now Elijah, you knew you needed speed. As fun as it is to discover more about your dragon form, you should have been in Shape of the Sky this entire time😂

TheCrazyDuck

If you just gained the ability to turn into a dragon and the form was extremely powerful yet felt very natural to be in, would you be thinking clearly? Pretty sure Elijah was power tripping a bit.

thomas johnson

Why is he not using shape of sky the whole time truly not the smartest move. I really hope he doesn’t just go full dragon. The whole point of being a Druid is his versatility. Showing off his human/dragon form is a waste of time. Get out of the primal realm and stop showing off.

DrDankness

Tbh making his dragon form as a powerful but ethera hungry form is a pretty damn good way to balance it compared to everything else. Yeah its absurdly powerful (and he can fight while casting plague and nature's touch on himself constantly) but making that all burn a lot more ethera than he is comfortable with is a great way to both affirm it is strong but has its cons like his other forms.

thomas johnson

Nope. Based on the previous horrors I have seen I would imagine just being a dragon is not the end all be all. Maybe if he was from another half dragon race that had reverence for dragons but he is a human. Who has seen dragons literally eaten by wasp. Practicality is more important than pride. I hope Elijah’s character does not become too stuck on that aspect.

Flakes

Question: When you say "fifty-foot long, emerald-scaled dragon," are Elijah's scales just shiny and green, or is he iced out?

Nathan moi

Thanks for the chap, now the Djinn primal realm looks very needed, I wonder if he'll get to optimize his aethera usage before taking his next class

Doubledoor

It also makes sense from an evolutionary point of view. Humans have always been focused on endurance over raw might and I'd imagine dragons are quite the opposite on account of the whole enormous fire breathing lizard thing.

RonGAR

Damn... bad time to die. --------- Hmmm I guess his core isn't ready to handle his full dragon form, which is why everything currently costs so much. Even staying in that form and doing nothing burns more energy than normal. My guess is, he won't be able to regulate or fix that till he reaches 250. (Demi God) Then he won't burn away energy just standing there, and the cost goes back to 1to1, instead of 3 to 1. But why is that? What the hell is going on here? ----------- Where is the worldseed core in all of this? Wasn't that "Supposed" to have offset all of these magical cost? From what is written, instead of growing his power, its costing him power! His spells hit 2x to 3x harder, but they cost him 4x to 6x as much! That's horrendous! Some real B.S. right there! It's a constant drain on his resources just to maintain his (new) natural form! Which is some more B.S. Seriously... What sense does that make? Where are the worldseed absorption/hybridization benefits???? -------------- Look... if you didn't want an OP character, stop making him do OP things, then take all the benefits of those things away afterward. Thats real CHEAP... IT cheats the MC and the readers!!! #justsaying

DrDankness

I mean its likely that the form is just way too strong for him right now. The world seed probably pushed his size to well above where it is supposed to be and he isn't even a demigod. It makes sense that that level of power comes with a cost. Also in reverse do you really want it to be that much better than everything else? It would quickly get boring if he just stays in one form the whole time. We lose out on his identity as a shapeshifter then. Also it gives him enough time for his other forms to eventually catch up. After he gets demigod he can start working toward evolving them (probably in another... 3-4 books) into shapes that rival his true form and by that point his dragon form becomes relatively balanced against his other forms.

RonGAR

Yea that was a surprise... was honestly expecthing him to Blow 'real' fire.

DrDankness

It kinda makes sense. Like most humans cast spells from their hands. I guess its just normal for a dragon to breathe it out. I don't think this counts as his "breathe" spell though. That seems to be something natural to them.

DrDankness

Pretty sure thats purposeful. Notice how in his core cultivation vision the dragon's scales are described as green. Elijah's scales have ALWAYS been emerald. Even back in 8-24 Kirlissia never once calls his scales green. Always emerald 8-24 he felt her run her own fingers down the scales on his shoulder. “Emerald. A fitting development, but unexpected for an adopted member of my family,” she said with a tight smile. “That is debatable,” she said with a more genuinely amused smile. “You are a dragon. Dragons have scales. This is not the first change you will undergo. Each step forward on the path of cultivation will bring you closer to your true form. Once you reach the Lord stage of overall cultivation, you will have established yourself as a true dragon. A small and underdeveloped one, but a dragon nonetheless.” “So, I’ll look like Saraalinisa?” “She is a gold dragon. You are an emerald dragon.” “I’m talking about shape. General characteristics. Like, four legs and wings and all that.” “Of course.” Yet 11-76 while he is in the vision as the other dragon it mentions this: Elijah looked around, his breath coming in great heaves. His green scales were marred by a mass of wounds, but he could sense that none of them were serious. So its clear there is a distinction. Its possible that the more powerful true dragons have scales that are a different sheen/luster than the less powerful amongst them. It's likely Emerald scales are a higher tier than just green.

guillaume nguyen

To keep the forms useful even after the advent of the True Dragon Form, Elijah should continue to specialize them. Even if the latter is Ethera/fuel heavy and won't probably be used as the allmighty hammer, having more different skillsets is always a good thing. And to avoid having redundance of having 2 winged forms, I hope the Wyvern form can evolve into an Eastern Dragon form, while keeping the colors, that would be nice ^^ Didn't expect a bug breath when talking about a nature dragon. I expect a lightning one.

RonGAR

@DrDarkness... Again, If he wasn't ready or the author believes he didn't want an OP character going forward... Thennnn DON"T make him swallow/absorb/hybridize a worldseed, aka a planet-sized Nuclear reactor, while only being an ascended!!!! Don't make the MC do Overpowered shit, and get NOTHING for it! Make other decisions! Fight alongside the other dragons or use their war as a distraction to move quietly in the background. OR find the world seed and lead the more powerful dragons to it! Don't cheat us, the reader(s), or the MC by making him do shit that 'should' give him abilities/Powers far beyond his level, that you(the author) ultimately don't want to use right now! Because when you now realize you don't want to go in that direction, you blatantly contrive against and sabotage the character for your own errors. SMH. That's realllllll fucking cheap! #justsaying 🤷🏽‍♂️

EsoEasy

Interesting take. My impression was that the world seed fueled the transformation, but was not providing energy after the transformation. In other words, it improved the engine and every aspect of the car, but it’s not providing the gas. I need to go back and reread that chapter though.

Lessthan

I imagine that the Dragon form vs. shapeshift might be a deep plot point. The pull of the draconic attitude of racial superiority despite all the drawbacks vs. the Druid forms being specialized and superior in certain situations. A "when you have a hammer, every problem looks like a nail" conflict where the hammer is enchanted to convince you that every problem IS a nail.

RonGAR

@EsoEasy Hmmm... IF that is the case then I wish it was mentioned in a sentence or two. Im not really a fan of being led by the nose in my reading, but a conclusion like this is too vague for the avg reader to get without some assistance. #justsaying.

Aeth

Shape of sky is like nimble jet fighter, his dragon form is like a battle cruiser. Speed and fragility vs power.

Flakes

So, by my reckoning. He is going to have to do the Angel realm with Sadie. Sadie has to do it to get the difficulty increase and whatever bonus comes with completing your own heritage, and he has to come along since I doubt Sadie can handle it on her own. And to help Sadie mentally deal with the stick up your butt aspect of Angel society.

Robert Rosenthal

I think it will improve but he does not know what he is doing and as hinted at in this chapter his dragon form needs to eat. Also his ethers absorption was tied to his mind cultivation (and probably soul) which did not change. The four are related but diffeeent it was stated earlier that you could advance the core before the others it was more difficult so not recommended. Each part mind body soul and core are different. Not too mention he is heading to being right now he is fighting swarms and demigods so op for his level (likely even fire dragon) but he is somewhere ready to challenge him as opposed to somewhere ready for everyone else. It seems like the current version would be mopping up the war elves army without trouble but that’s not who he is up against

Knyko

Dragon form would have made sense, but running around in human form doesnt

guillaume nguyen

Or worse, that everyONE is a nail. Cue the reason why he let Gun live.

thomas johnson

This is what I am saying he should switch between them. Go shape of sky for lightning rush the dragon for the cooldown rinse repeat. I’m not saying don’t use it but do not become stuck on just being a dragon and not utilize other forms. He should have a faster cast time than before.

Blackking👑

I mean, it's been stated multiple times that it's a recreation of a world seed scale down as impressive as him absorbing it was it's the equivalent of him using something that is above him in power to strengthen himself,

Sébastien Kingsbury

I don't think bug breath is his actual breath attack, thats still just eternal plague

guillaume nguyen

Well yeah, but the image of Elijah being forced to brush his teeth everytime he use his breath is still funny to imagine ^^

DrDankness

@RonGAR I mean he did get something out of it. He got a super powerful dragon form that straight up ripped apart a demigod (something he couldn't do easily before). The only issue it got ethera issues. The power is there he just needs to learn to manage that. I think its pretty balanced. It gives him a reason to rotate it in when necessary and then rotate out to other forms.

RonGAR

@DrDarkness If you think so... 🤷🏽‍♂️, but I disagree. IMO, I think our boy got sold a lemon after all his hard work. But let's see what happens after he gets out of the PR, and goes over his stats! Then we'll see who is right and who is wrong.

thomas johnson

Does that mean if Isaiah wants to get his heritage, he would have to make diplomatic talks with Ironshore/ Elijah lol? Also, it would be difficult for Benedict to get access to the demon realm.

Flakes

First clear baby! And screw Isaiah and Benedict

Jeff T D

Because he hasn’t yet perfected slowing down and landing after the lightning move, he had to switch to human to heal. When he realized his human form with wings wasn’t fast enough, he switched to dragon, and now realizing he needs another boost, he will switch to shape of the sky and lightning move. I think this is more about him learning what he can do with his new form than anything else. Discovering some of that here will make his exit into Seattle’s waiting force that much easier, since I don’t think he really wants to fight them because he wants them to help prevent Earth’s excision.

MegaDragon

The cliffs the goddamn cliffs

Asterrahl

It's a nice refreshing change that he can build his Eternal Plague before releasing it. It brings some new flavour to an old favourite. Makes me think of that scene in "Bruce Almighty" where he spits a swarm of bees at some gang mobs. Always loved that one haha Also pleased with the dragon form. It's bigger than expected, and the fact it has more punch to spells in exchange for lower sustainability is exciting but reasonable too. Not a big problem, he's still a big dragon even if he uses fewer, far more incisive spells. He still has claws and teeth and many tons of bodyweight.

Kalm1234

I really like this story. I just really hate the MC. He's such a moron that would not have made it through the first book without a heaping dose of plot armor. He has limited time, but decides to use the form only half as fast as his fastest form, costs way more energy to use, and is extremely noticeable and no where near as maneuverable as Sky. For once, I really wish we had some character growth along with cultivation growth. Elijah needs a few 100 more IQ...