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Elijah was disgusted.

Part of it came from the situation, and rightly so.  The notion that someone from Argos, of all places, hated him enough to participate in an assassination attempt against him gutted Elijah in a way he couldn’t quite explain.  For as long as he could remember, his relationship with that population had bordered on hero worship.  They’d loved him almost from the very beginning. 

And yet, the girl thief whose name he still didn’t know had hired Gunnar to kill him.  More troublingly, the Daughters of Deianira had originated in the Greek city.  Had he done something to offend them?  Had he inadvertently caused them some grief?  The questions haunted him as he traversed the Undercity.

The setting was the second part of his loathing.  For all that Isaiah had created a beautiful and vibrant city on the surface, the bowels of Seattle were even more depressing than he remembered.  Everywhere he looked, he saw just how much the population had been mistreated. 

And the worst part was that the people weren’t overtly mistreated.  They had food.  They had shelter.  They were given jobs that might allow them to rise above their current stations.  Yet, it all felt like a mirage.  Or a bandage concealing a rotting wound.  Healers were at a premium, the food was no more than a nutrient delivery system, and the jobs were backbreaking and would never lead to anything but more labor. 

In short, it was the sort of dystopic city that usually only showed up in movies and books meant to satirize capitalism. 

Did it work?

Assuredly, it did.  The people went to their jobs, worked their long shifts, then returned to their government-issued hovels to rest up for the next cycle.  They weren’t even that productive.  People with appropriate classes would have done the work far more efficiently.  And Elijah suspected that the system only existed because the government knew they would need to support the population anyway.  So, they’d decided to get at least some return on their investment.

It was a cynical way of looking at people, but Elijah couldn’t deny that it was an effective means of control, both of the city’s production and of the people who made up the bulk of its population.

But the subterranean complex was so sterile and disconnected from nature that he couldn’t help but look at it with that now-familiar feeling of revulsion.  Would it have killed them to plant a few trees?  There were plenty of varieties that could grow underground, as evidenced by Elijah’s experiences in the Hollow Depths.  But that clearly wasn’t one of Isaiah’s priorities.

Not that Elijah thought the leader of Seattle was solely responsible for the state of the Undercity.  Isaiah was a lot of things, but he was not overtly cruel.  If he knew a better way, he would have taken it.  And besides, it wasn’t as if he was in complete control of his city.  He obviously wasn’t, as Gunnar’s reports had made clear. 

He knew all of that, just as he suspected that the Undercity’s existence represented the government’s best efforts at dealing with an unprecedented situation.  But that didn’t mean it was acceptable.  They needed to do better, though Elijah was at a loss how to fix it. 

Ultimately, that was the issue.  Most people were entirely capable of recognizing when something wasn’t working the way it was meant to.  The problem came from a misunderstanding as to the factors that led to the problem in the first place.  And that complexity meant that fixing it was anything but simple.

For instance, Elijah was well aware that many of the Undercity dwellers had chosen unproductive classes.  Many more were simply unwilling to do what they needed to do to be successful.  Some chose a life of drudgery, either consciously or through their refusal to pursue self-improvement. 

How, then, was the government supposed to deal with them?

In a place like Easton, they’d simply chosen to leave them to die.  If someone wasn’t useful, that government would not support them.  It was a twisted version of survival of the fittest, and it completely ignored the notion of human compassion.

Or long-term benefits, but that was an entirely different issue.

Like most people, Elijah found that practice revolting.  But one of the alternatives was a system like he saw in Seattle’s Undercity.  Put them to work and let them earn their keep in an effort to allay the cost of their existence. 

Was it just?  Certainly not.  But it was better than the path Easton – and presumably many other cities – had taken.  Even Ironshore had standards for who they would admit into the city as citizens, and they weren’t shy about turning people away.

It was just another reminder that they didn’t live in a utopia.  Perhaps they never would.  With the touch of the World Tree came unprecedented opportunity.  People could achieve things never before possible.  And yet, that didn’t come without a cost.  Earth was now a brutal place, and there just wasn’t much room for those who refused to help themselves. 

But Elijah didn’t accept that they were all lost causes.  That was one reason he’d had Atticus create the Hartwood Foundation.  Most of their efforts were dedicated to helping children and healing the sick, but they also fed the hungry.  Seeing Seattle’s Undercity added another item to that list, and he intended to talk to Atticus about strategies to help the downtrodden.

For now, though, he had other things on his mind.

Like the bound girl thrown over Gunnar’s shoulder and the organization to which she belonged. 

After leaving the safehouse, which was located on the lowest level of Seattle’s Undercity, they’d set out through the hollow slums to the first ramp leading upward.  There weren’t many people living that far down, but there were enough that they drew quite a lot of attention. 

Elijah and Gunnar ignored it.  Those people knew better than to get involved, and not just because doing so would put them in the middle of a conflict they didn’t understand.  In addition, they could feel Elijah’s power.  Perhaps not consciously, but even the weakest among them knew that he was well beyond the scope of their strength.  That had always been true, but he’d stepped so far above them – either through his cultivation or because he’d fully become a dragon – that they could sense it without even trying to.

Elijah likened it to seeing a grizzly bear in the wild.  Doing so elicited a primal urge to run.  To flee from such a powerful creature.  He expected that the residents of the Undercity felt something similar when he walked among them.

And they weren’t willing to chance his ire by interfering in a situation that didn’t concern them.

Elijah and Gunnar climbed the ramp as it switched back and forth for a few hundred feet.  They reached the next level, which was only slightly better than the last.  The response from the population was nearly identical, so no one barred their way for the next three levels.

It was a minor miracle that, upon building the Undercity, which delved thousands of feet into the Earth, they hadn’t reached the Hollow Depths.  The only explanation was that the planet’s layered interior realm rested a little deeper beneath the desert than it did in other areas. 

In any case, each level they climbed came with a bit more life.  Not in the traditional sense.  There still weren’t any plants or trees.  The concrete buildings were similar as well, though many were adorned with colorful awnings, vibrant signs, and a denser concentration of luxury goods. 

Or what the denizens of the Undercity might consider luxuries, at least – which was a depressing realization all its own.

It wasn’t until they reached first level that they halted their climb.  Elijah found himself facing a dozen soldiers dressed in tactical gear and toting rifles.  Luckily, they weren’t pointed in his direction. 

“Elijah Hart?” the leader asked.  She was a petite woman, but he could see the bulge of muscles beneath her black outfit.  Despite her pale complexion, she reminded him of Carmen. 

“That’s me.”

“We’re here to support your mission,” she said.

He nodded, though Gunnar was obviously surprised by the development.  He had no way of knowing that Elijah had already met with Isaiah and told him the basic gist of the situation.  At least as much as Elijah knew before he’d arrived in Seattle.  And with their newfound dictate of cooperation, Isaiah had chosen to lend Elijah a little of his authority. 

Not that it was needed.  It was appreciated, though. 

Or rather, it was better than having to carve his way through a bunch of low-level soldiers, should Isaiah have chosen to be less than cooperative. 

“Gunnar, tell the captain where we’re going,” Elijah ordered.

“I’m not a captain,” the woman said. 

Elijah ignored her statement.  Gunnar didn’t acknowledge it either, and instead explained their goal.  It didn’t take long, and soon enough, they were once again on their way.  Though this time, they had an escort of guards to send most people scurrying away. 

Probably a good thing, considering how messy things were about to get.  Elijah would have preferred otherwise, but he knew there was very little chance of a peaceful solution.  And if he was honest, his preferences weren’t quite as clear-cut as he wanted to believe.  After all, the Daughters of Deianira had tried to have him killed.  He couldn’t ignore that. 

As they traversed the level, which was at least as large as the city on the surface, Elijah saw more soldiers evacuating the locals.  For all that Seattle didn’t particularly value the dwellers of the Undercity, the government was committed to protecting them as best they could. 

And the rising tension hanging in the air told a story of coming conflict. 

When they drew within a quarter mile of their destination, Elijah recognized that more soldiers had been mobilized to cordon off the area.  The Daughters assuredly knew they were coming, and it was paramount that they not be allowed to escape. 

But the fact that the guards had mobilized so quickly and accurately was a testament to Isaiah’s skills in surveillance.  When Elijah had met with him, he’d not known the location of the Daughters’ headquarters.  But Isaiah had discovered that information in the time it took Elijah to head down to the lowest level and meet Gunnar.

If properly utilized, Isaiah’s abilities could be incredibly valuable.  After all, no one ever lamented having too much information. 

In any case, the cordon was arranged in three concentric circles.  The first was about a quarter mile out from the headquarters, while the second was nearly halfway between.  And the final layer encircled the building with more than a hundred soldiers, each one with a decent amount of levels under their belts. 

Elijah stopped in front of the warehouse that functioned as their headquarters.  Like every other structure in the Undercity, it was made of bare concrete.  There were no windows.  Only three entrances, one of which was a loading dock with a series of rolling doors.  Those were well-guarded.

“How many are inside?” Gunnar asked.

The girl on his shoulder squirmed.

One of the new group of guards spoke up.  “More than two-hundred.  We think they’re mostly Thieves and the like, but we don’t know their levels.”

“How?” asked Gunnar.

“They’re a criminal organization.  They have skills to keep out surveillance,” the man answered without hesitation.  “Only reason we know as much as we do is because we caught one of them trying to escape.”

“Veracity of the information?” was Gunnar’s next question.

“Not high.”  The man turned to Elijah and asked, “How do you want –”

“Wait out here,” Elijah interrupted.  “Gunnar, with me.  Bring the girl.”

Without pausing for a response, Elijah stepped forward.  He could already feel the interior of the building via Soul of the Wild, but the picture it gave him was blurry.  Almost like looking through stained glass.  Doubtless, that was the result of the abilities to which the guard captain referred. 

It didn’t matter.

Elijah knew that, no matter how prepared they thought they were, they couldn’t really threaten him.  Perhaps that wouldn’t have been true before his latest advancements in the Broken Crown, but it was certainly the case now that he’d upgraded his core and gained enough levels to put him on the precipice of becoming a demi-god.

As he stepped forward, he felt no fear at all.  On the other side of that front door, the situation was assuredly different, and rightly so. 

Comments

Dan K

Was hoping he was going to turn into a dragon and rip the roof off.

John Gray

Need the absolutely panicked POV from the daughters perspective like I need air

Achis74

Was hoping he will shroom everyone 😢😢

Viria

SHAPESHIFT INTO A DRAGON FIRST ELIJAH PLEASE !!! It's time to aura farm.

thomas johnson

Elijah is forgetting his greatest weakness: Domains. A thieves' guild that cloaks all who are inside is the perfect place to have a domain. Pride comes before the fall. If an organization can span between two major cities and exist, I am sure they have agents in Ironshore.

Knyko

Hes so strong the world hes on cant even support him, i think it doesnt matter atp

Dan K

Most of those effectiveness is based on cultivation. Being tier 4 he should be able to resist anything made by anyone on earth right now.

guillaume nguyen

I think he can counter with his Mantle of Authority.

Axel Fremen

OH COME ON, NOT TWO CLIFFIES IN A ROW. If tomorrow's chapter is a change i pov I'm going to leave mean comments >:(

Sébastien Kingsbury

He can break domains though, and I doubt whatever a thieves guild has is the equivalent of what a seal of authority would give. Or even the domain around a branch of the world tree, and he broke one of those way back before his first primal realm. Domains are strong equalizers, but they still require a certain amount of power parity to be effective

TreeReader

Just shift to a dragon and watch them faint lmao

L. K. Minaget

Maybe it's a sicky fan club, mad because they are not recognized by Elijah

Dan K

I would accept the perspective of the daughters that are about to be smacked.

Xavier Tademy

This chapter was a whole lot of nothing. If we are being honest

Davis

The pacing through 13 chapters of this book is rough.

thomas johnson

Most of the domains he has faced are from a single person; he struggled vs. the war elves due to their united synergy. Thus, he had to prepare. In this situation, he is blindly strolling into an enemy camp. without the element of surprise.

Samuel Davis

So to recap 13 chapters. 1. Elijah went to new york and then set up an arrangment for protecting his trees and even convinced Isaiah to help. Although that has not been finished since Atticus is working it out for him. 2. Elijah went to Atticus to get his stuff appraised. Soil is called reclamation soil. His gloves give him a grab ability. 3. Elijah is now taking a more strong geo-political stance of power instead of neutrality. 4. The world can no longer support Elijah without him being weakened by it. It's stated that the last levels to demigod take as much expierence as all levels up to level 240 combined. 5. Sadie's group are using Miquel and a porter to end the PR and are still not done. They have been inside over 10 months. 6. Elijah went to Seattle to deal with the Daughters who are apparently from Argos. 7. Elijah is waxing poetic and introspective in his head in almost every chapter about the world and how strong he is.

Samuel Davis

Ultimately, besides 1, 2, and 6. Nothing new has happened in the book. Everything else was already stated in book 11. The plan for Sadie's PR was already established just hadnt started. The majority of most of these chapters have been 7. Just like in this chapter, hes mainly just talking in his own head. Same for the New York chapters. Theres also been what 3-4 POV shifts in 13 chapters ? I know we had the porter's POV and Isaiah's , but maybe one other, I think the hunters walking up on a sleeping dragon ?

Samuel Davis

I love the story and check in for chapters daily, but there is nothing of substance happening right now, I commented about 7 chapters ago saying I was just being patient , but this is just looking like a ton of filler. If this was a anime Id be skipping to the next actual progression arc and not the time with them sitting around baking cakes and playing games in the fields. The background is already laid, we get it, Elijah is strong now, hes a dragon, and hes tying up loose ends before finishing the final PRs and demigod. With him so powerful he should be able to steamroll these issues quicker, I personally want to see some progression. Hell he hasnt even given the soil to Nerthus yet.

Samuel Davis

So whats next ? A POV shift for the Daughters chapter. A Elijah chapter thinking about / doing the same stuff with the daughters. Then another chapter on the island , potentially giving soil to nerthus. Then a chapter of him moping about friends and family in Sadie's group / them coming home ? Then from there he either moves to the next PR if they arent back, or if they are out, then he has a reunion ? I mean i dunno, Im estimating another 5-10 chapters before hes even moving to the next objective to save the planet. Maybe more. All in all this book just kinda feels like the close out book for the Earth arc. Tying up plot threads and such. Which im still greatly enjoying. Just nothing is happening in any real speed. I mean do we even really know what all his forms look like after the core upgrade ? I know what the dragon form looks like but not sure about the others.

Samuel Davis

Either way, love the story, and will keep subbed. Just my thoughts on the book so far.

DeadSlime

Got to admit that whole chapter was just Elijah walking up stairs and commenting on the state of Seattle then leaving us on a cliff hanger.

Samuel Davis

Just double-checked. We know what his base human form and his dragon form look like. We know how the other forms have felt since the core upgrade. And maybe during the big fight with the spider in the last book some appearance was stated on the turtle or raptor form. It was mainly about the forms capabilities because he was running for his life.

Viria

The first chapters of this new book are for world/tension building. I enjoy those chapters. I agree the change of pace is jarring after the epic ending of the previous book. But it makes sense since this is a new book. It can't all be epic action all the time, that gets annoying fast. And, story-wise, Elijah needs to recuperate before jumping in another primal realm. Plus, in the end, those chapters will probably be ~10-15% of the book (which are often 100 chapters long). And that's perfectly acceptable.

Lessthan

Seattle isn't a subtle critique of socialism, is it?

Samuel Davis

POV shifts in 13 chapters. 1. Hunters on sleeping dragon. 2. Isaiah's 3. Gunnar with his prisoner. 4. Porter in Troll PR

Samuel Davis

Tension is already built, has been built. This isnt creating tension, theres no new plotlines here. The daughters and Gunnar's is a plot thread thats being ended most likely. What tension has been built ? The world has been established in the last 11 books for lord's sake. We already knew the state of Seattle and New York, same for Argos, the only new information about the world we gained was how his grove is progressing with the tall trees and the reef being created by the sea elf. All the gear he has ? Already had that. Still hasnt used it either, same for the soil. Hell there was a entire chapter with him sitting around bored and whittling wood. Another where he was just sleeping.

Samuel Davis

If anything a critique of capitalism , since you know those guys could pull themselves up by the bootstraps and get to the upper levels of Seattle, if they just work hard everyday ! Well they have a chance anyways. Socialism would be everyone has equal share. ( Please keep in mind im just commenting because even in the chapter Elijah mentions capitalistic and not socialistic. )

Lessthan

Good points. I'm just bumping on the "equal chances" and "these people just don't want to work" tint I'm getting from the descriptions.

Ron Whitlatch

Well it isnt worker ran or filled with unions so no? It much more closely resembles a critique of capitalism 🤷 forcing people to provide capital for food and shelter? Thats capitalism. Having industry leaders who have massive political influence? Capitalism. Having a police state is authoritarian so not necessarily an economic policy.

gray matter

Any thoughts on what Elijah did in Argos to make them mad at him? Or maybe he didn’t do anything and he was just the right target for the right job.

Pordgy

Think it's realistically more a reflection of human nature. Every system, be it capitalism, socialism, communism etc. theoretically works perfectly, in a vacuum. What we end up with in practice, however, is always something unkind, unfair and a mockery of its own design

Jeff T D

It could be possible the Daughters were contracted by someone else to arrange things, someone with no love for Seattle or Elijah. It could also be from someone like the airplane lady, whose name I forgot (Madeleine?), who dislikes him for something he didn’t do, as she didn’t think he went to rescue the others in an expedient fashion, so maybe someone whose had a family member die after Elijah left Argos heading for Seattle.

Flakes

Atticus's wife. Angry because Elijah is a bad influence on her husband. He keeps taking him carousing.

Bolts

Yeah this book has too much chapters with nothing really happening, just Elijah monologuing a lot of nothing to fill the word required for a chapter. Author it's better if you just take a break and organize the flow than this bunch of nothing chapters. Waste of chapter really.

BaguaBrady

Well said Viria! Some of us value characterization and opportunity to zoom out from high conflict and pace. Breathe in breathe out. And the scenes have been super engaging, loved the pizza, loved the leader meeting, enjoyed seeing him return back to his grove. Samuel, I couldn't disagree more.

Kayla Jordan Andrews

So excited for tomorrows chapter! I'm really loving that we are getting closure on this plot point before Sadie and Miguel get back from the PR and things get wild again ☺️

dovpak

its a book. The pacing would be awful if he tried to cram a climax into every chapter.

bcd051

100% agree. I enjoy the pacing, especially after the PR, elijah needs time to explore without worrying about becoming an incubator for wasps

Samuel Davis

Your talking about slive of life moments, and sure those are fine , in moderation. Its been nothing but monologuing and barely anything has happened. Again chapters of him just whittling wood and sleeping. Thats not entertaining even in slice of life terrority my dude.

BaguaBrady

It's been more than just monologuing, that's just false. Lots of character interaction and shifts of scene. I'm talking about slice of life, world building, yes some minor introspection, and future plot point seeding. You are entitled to not like it, but it's part of any good storytelling

Blackking👑

You do know that the chapters are written like it's a book that was published months after the previous book that you've just read. The beginning of the books are gonna be slower paced

Blackking👑

The war elf's where stronger then these guys and had class tech that would make sense for these guys to have

Corey S

Pacing seems off because you’re reading a chapter a day. Might be better for you to wait till a lot have been released and then catch up. I’ve had to do that before as well with other books

Corey S

They probably just tried to use him as a tool. I doubt they would have expected Gunnar to be successful

Samuel Davis

In what way has the world been built beyond the framework already established for 11 books ? Please clue me in. Character intercaton does not prevent story progression and if you believe it does then you have been reading too many RoyalRoad stories.

Samuel Davis

13 chapters of fluff is not entertaining and sad to say but honest critique is people would likely put the book down. If they even made it this far in the series. Its a great series, but this has been the slowest book start in the entire series. Stop grandstanding and defending and just realize im providing honest feedback. Because this reads badly. Read all thirteen chapters again, might take you a half hour, its not entertaining.

Samuel Davis

Pordgy , as a solider for many years, I have seen alot of crazy shit when it comes to governments and honestly I'm with you. People make all the systems suck usually, not the system itself.

BaguaBrady

Nah man, try reading the actual chapters, the world building and plot seeding is right there. You're just spewing negativity all over this comment thread with gross exaggerations

Laszlo Katai

I have the same thoughts on it. But that is why he is not a pro writer. He is good with words and bad with actual story telling. I support him with my sub so he can stay motivated and improve. He has talent.

Samuel Davis

It's not a gross exaggeration that as a fan and patreon , a paying one , that I'm disappointed in the story thus far