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“Stop!” came a voice from inside. 

Elijah ignored the order, extending his Mantle of Authority to its full strength.  He’d developed some control over its size, but the strength remained consistent no matter how he used it.  He was committed to working on it, though.

As he continued toward the door, a series of gasps erupted behind him as the soldiers’ ethera stilled.  Their weapons would remain unusable so long as they were under the influence of his mantle.

Meanwhile, Elijah’s attention remained on the warehouse in front of him.  There were even more people inside than the soldiers suspected.  Elijah counted more than three-hundred, and his Mantle could only extend a little more than a third of the way into the building.  It wasn’t outside the realm of possibility that there were over a thousand people in there. 

Which showed just how lax Isaiah’s surveillance had been.  Was he stretched so thin that he couldn’t watch his whole city?  Or was he just distracted?  Elijah wasn’t sure, but what he did know was that the man needed to get it together and fix the problems at hand.  Otherwise, Seattle would become a haven for all the worst parts of any society.

Perhaps it already had, given the prevalence of criminal organizations in the Undercity.  While they were headquartered down below, their influence extended to the surface, encompassing all of Seattle and reaching a host of other cities.  And given that the Daughters had spread from Argos to Seattle, their reach was obviously wide-ranging.

Regardless, Isaiah definitely needed to get a handle on his city, lest it become a problem. 

Those thoughts flitted quickly through his mind as he advanced, kicking the door down.  It flew off its hinges, hitting someone on the other side.  She didn’t die, but she sustained multiple broken bones. 

That sent everyone scattering through the building.

“Stop, or I’m going to be forced to kill you all,” Elijah said, his voice barely raised.  It still echoed throughout the warehouse.  “I’m just here to talk.”

That wasn’t necessarily true, but they didn’t need to know that.  In any case, they obviously didn’t believe him, because they continued to run. 

“Any information on who’s in charge?” he asked, glancing toward Gunnar.  The sniper shrugged, his burden still wriggling on his shoulder.  That the Mantle of Authority hadn’t driven her to unconsciousness was a testament to her strength.  Most people who’d failed to reach ascension would have been knocked out.  “What about from our friend here?”

She didn’t answer.  Predictable, but annoying.

Isaiah did, though.  Via a small, floating sphere that darted into the warehouse, he said, “Her name is Desdemona Charontis.  At present, she is upstairs, sitting at her desk.  Presumably, she is waiting for you.”

Elijah glanced at the sphere.  It was made of high-grade metal that shimmered with blue ethera and featured a small lens that he took to be a camera.  That it could persist within range of Elijah’s mantle was a sign of how much power was flowing through it. 

“That thing have any combat capability?”

“Some.  Not enough.”

“Be ready, then,” Elijah said.  “Gunnar, bring the girl.”

The sniper muttered something about not being a pack mule, but he followed all the same.  By that point, most of the Daughters had fled to other parts of the building.  Thankfully, none of them attacked.  Not a surprising development, considering they were mostly Thieves and Smugglers, but it was appreciated nonetheless.  The last thing Elijah wanted was to be forced into slaughtering hundreds of women.

He usually didn’t differentiate between male or female enemies.  With the addition of attributes, the physical differences between the sexes had become a thing of the past.  However, cultural norms were difficult to overcome, even when doing so was warranted. 

The warehouse itself was packed full of crates, many of which shimmered with powerful ethera that marked them as high-grade goods.  Obviously, they weren’t meant for the Undercity.  Rather, the warehouse was just a depot that had been chosen because it stood in Isaiah’s blind spot.

Unfortunately, the crates were enchanted, blocking Soul of the Wild.  So he had no idea what those crates contained. 

Otherwise, the warehouse was unremarkable, save for its size.  While Elijah traversed its length, aiming for the stairs near the back, he kept his senses trained on his surroundings.  Many of the women inside had taken refuge among the crates, where they obviously hoped he wouldn’t notice them. 

He did.

But he ignored them all the same.

Isaiah’s ball followed Elijah, with Gunnar bringing up the rear of their three-entity procession.  Elijah wanted nothing more than to embrace Eternal Plague and kill everyone inside the warehouse, but for two reasons, he refrained.  The first was the most obvious – he didn’t want to kill anyone unless necessary.  But the second was far more impactful on his choice. 

He needed to know just how far the conspiracy to kill him stretched.  Was it limited to the Daughters?  And if so, was the entire organization involved?  Or just the branch headquartered in Seattle? 

So, he kept his spells to himself, even though his instincts told him to simply destroy his enemies and let the situation play out however it may.  After all, he was a dragon.  They were little more than insects beneath his feet. 

But as he’d seen in the Broken Crown, even insects could pose a threat.  He’d watched swarms of vespirans, wasps, and drachnids destroy demi-god dragons.  And it would be the height of hubris to assume he wasn’t vulnerable to just such an attack. 

He was strong.  But numbers could overcome raw power.

Because of that, he approached with some caution, reaching the stairs after only a few moments.  Without hesitation, he mounted them, his feet clanging against the metal grates of the steps until he reached a catwalk that lined the right wall.  Through Soul of the Wild, Elijah could feel the offices on the other side of that flimsy barrier. 

He made his way down the walkway, feeling the cold metal ridges against his bare feet.  Then, he arrived at the appropriate door, as indicated by Isaiah’s spherical drone. 

After taking a breath, he opened the door and strode inside.  He’d half expected an attack as soon as he entered the office, but there was nothing.  Instead, he found himself standing over a slender woman with dark hair.  Her complexion – and context clues – marked her as Greek, but she made no concessions to her ethnicity.  Certainly, she wasn’t dressed any differently than most women in the Undercity.  Just non-descript clothes suitable for manual labor.

“Elijah Hart.  Gunnar Lindstrom,” she intoned, her voice slightly raspy.  Her eyes flicked to the drone. “Isaiah.  So kind of you to visit.”

She seemed entirely relaxed, though Elijah could sense her racing heartbeat. 

“You know me?” Isaiah asked through the drone, interpreting her familiar tone in the only way that made sense.

“Of course.  We met long ago, though I doubt you remember it,” she said.  “I visited your city only a short while after the apocalypse.  We spoke of trade.”

Isaiah didn’t respond, which seemed to confirm that he didn’t recall the meeting.  Not unsurprising, considering that the timeframe put it almost a decade in the past. 

“I don’t care about that.  What I want to know is why you tried to have me killed,” Elijah stated. 

“I never expected you to die,” Desdemona said, leaning back in her chair.  The girl on Gunnar’s shoulder squirmed.  “Can you release my subordinate?  She often frustrates me, but she is a good girl.”

“No,” Gunnar stated.

She sighed dramatically.  “Suit yourself, but I have a long memory, Mr. Lindstrom.”

“And a short life expectancy,” he countered.

“I suppose it might seem that way to you.”

Elijah cut in, “As much as I enjoy listening to you two trade barbs, I’m not here for that.  Why did you hire Gunnar to kill me?”

“That is a complicated question, Mr. Hart.”

“I’ve got time for you to explain.”

“So you do,” she said.  “What do you expect here?  Do you want me to go on a monologue like a bad movie villain?”

“It would help,” Elijah answered.  “Besides, it’s probably your only chance of survival.”

“Oh, I don’t expect to live through this, Mr. Hart.  Your reputation is well-earned.”

“What about your people?” he asked, not bothering to dispute that he meant to kill her.  Whether or not he did was irrelevant.  She believed she was a dead woman, and nothing he could say or do would change that belief.  But he suspected that she cared for her subordinates.  “And I’m not just talking about the ones in this warehouse.  I’m talking about your whole network.  I don’t consider myself much of an investigator, but I’m very good at killing people.”

“Of that, there is no doubt,” she said.  “Easton’s fate is evidence enough.  Bloodrock Bay as well.  The unnamed settlement near that elven alchemist’s estate.  Countless others have fallen to your vile efforts.”

With every word, her tone became more venomous, suggesting that her anger was personal. 

And Elijah didn’t counter her accusations. 

“I’m not proud of any of that,” he admitted. 

“And yet your lack of pride does nothing to restore the innocent lives you so flippantly took,” she argued.

“There was nothing flippant about any of those choices,” Elijah stated evenly.  Indeed, even though he’d long since come to terms with his actions, he still had nightmares about the things he’d done.  The lives he had taken. 

Did it matter that Easton had fallen not because of him killing Roman, but because it had been mismanaged from the very beginning?  By releasing the political prisoners, he had provided the spark that had turned into a bonfire, but the city was doomed from the moment Roman had killed Alyssa.  Probably before that.

His actions in Bloodrock Bay were a little less defensible, but he justified it via the absolute certainty that, with it gone, the world had become a safer place.  Innocents had died, but in the grand scheme of things, theirs was an acceptable sacrifice.

And he hadn’t even killed the elves outside the Alchemist’s estate.  That was Breeze’s doing. 

Even in his mind, those justifications sounded like excuses, though.  So, he didn’t bother uttering them aloud.

“I killed someone close to you, didn’t I?” he asked.

The moment that question left Elijah’s mouth, she let out a chuckle.  As she shook her head, she said, “You have no concept of the impact of your choices.  You ask if you killed someone close to me?”  She looked up, her eyes hard.  “You took everything I hold dear, Mr. Hart.  My son lived in Easton.  My daughter was here, a member of the guild of adventurers you so flippantly slaughtered.  Her name was Mariah.  An Administrator.  She should have been off-limits.”

Elijah couldn’t even remember the guild leader’s name, so he couldn’t recall killing any non-combatants during that fight.  However, that man had sacrificed his entire guild for a little bit of temporary power.  So, it was likely that she had fallen to that nefarious ability, though Elijah didn’t know enough to say for certain.

On the surface, that Elijah had been responsible for the deaths of two of her children – who lived so far apart – was a bit unbelievable.  At least until he remembered that Easton had once been a suburb of Seattle.  That proximity made it much more plausible. 

“And you wanted to hold me accountable?  That’s why you tried to have me killed?” Elijah asked.

“Of course not, Mr. Hart.  You were just a tool.  Using you brought joy to my heart.  The idea of you suffering and authoring the downfall of Seattle was pleasing in a way you could never understand,” she stated.  “But in the end, you were never my target.  I am more than capable of pushing my personal feelings aside in the name of business.”

“You were after Isaiah, then.”

“Of course,” she answered.  “I thought that was obvious.  But then again, with how willingly you walked into my trap, I may have overestimated your mental acuity.”

A moment later, something exploded outside, and a dense wave of ethera swept over Elijah.

Comments

DeadSlime

Praise the Sun!!!

Alnatura

lol, nothing they have will be able to affect Elijah.

wollomollow

Seriously again? Is every chapter a Cliffhanger? 🤣

Diarmuid McGinnity

He could literally behead her before she can blink, why target isaiah if you’re dead?

Bakerbob

Just in case I got that wrong, Elijah saw crates blocking his senses, something highly suspicious since his senses are at the upper end of ascendant, shrugged it off as unimportant, then went to speak to someone perfectly calm in front of the dragon she tried to have killed, and did not even think it was a trap? That they were there specificly to do something stupid?

John Gray

I think the idea is he noticed it, he just didn’t truly feel threatened by it or any plan she might make. There simply isn’t anyone on Earth who can really threaten Elijah anymore outside of extremely narrow circumstances

Laszlo Katai

Hmmm.... it must be hard to write a FULL chapter from start to finish 😉 Dear author! You have done it so many times that it's become annoying and stopped being a tool for creating tension.

adam1

These might be those narrow circumstances though. It will be interesting to see how this plays out.

DrDankness

If anyone wants to find out where Mariah is mentioned. She is in chapter 4-51. Shes the woman working with Bruce (the guild master) who sacrificed all 5000 members of his guild (including Mariah) to empower himself. Her (Desdemona’s) anger to Elijah is honestly misplaced.

Davis

I’m about to drop with all these cliffhangers. Write a good story, don’t fall into cash grab serial tropes.

thomas johnson

Why doesn't he just tell her what happened? I never understand why in revenge stories they never explain the mistake of the person avenging. Like ,why not tell her why not? Maybe it might give you more information. We need less monologues and more practical explanantions.

thomas johnson

Like I said before, he has too much pride. I can squash millions of ants and have done so many times through various means. Still, if I am not careful, the ants can ruin my life.

BaguaBrady

He's just looking for info presumably. Why bother explaining himself? It'll just delay getting to what he's looking for from her and she isn't going to just go "oh nevermind, should have asked, I apologize and forgive you"

thomas johnson

Also, why does Elijah keep comparing others to insects when he should understand how even his insect spells can lead to damage over time? His pride is his best and worst attribute. I wish he understood the threat of this new universe. Still, I prefer it over the whole mad scientist has to grasp for power flaw so proceed author lol...

InLucidReverie

These are normal chapter lengths by any convention.

DeadSlime

When have you been murdering millions of ants? Are you one of them people who pours metal into ants nests? 🤨

thomas johnson

If you are investigating information threats, it is usually not the best approach. If you want information, you have to exchange for it. Perhaps how her daughter and son died is not valuable to Elijah. Still, it could be to the leader and could go a long way to her letting go of information that his other, more methodical compatriots (Isiah and Gunnar) could latch onto. Also, this is a woman who clearly does not feel that death threats are really that big a deal. He literally mentioned in this chapter how the guild leader sacrificed his guild to kill Elijah. Does he think reminding her that he is a mass murderer will make her more likely to help him? If anything, she will see the group's deaths as a small sacrifice. We also do not know how big the organization is. 1000 dead might be inconsequential. Elijah is playing Texas Hold 'em blind. He should respect his enemies more. Daughters=wasp while Elijah=dragons.

Blackking👑

I'm pretty sure he knows it's a trap. He just didn't care.

DrDankness

I mean i highlyyyyyyyyy doubt anything outside of a Primal Realm can even dent Elijah’s scales. That some random org of thieves think they can mess with him is hilarious

Robert Rosenthal

is this another reminder tyhat elijah is not invulnerable? Or a show of force by him as he crushes the explasion? Or the double where he is fine but thousands die? Inquiring minds want to know

Tragic Hysteria

All ill say is, please don't pretend like Elijah has to struggle against literally anything these people could possibly through at him. Its just not believable.

Onyinye Onyeka

I don't think Elijah should explain himself. When someone already hates you they take the worst interpretation of your words and actions. Explaining himself is futile and a parents grief isn't rational.

Dan K

He’s going to snuff it out with his mantle most likely. Or just be completely unfazed. I doubt there is any amount of explosives that the daughters can gather that can threaten him at this point. Not after he’s fought and killed Demi-gods.

Nick P

These cliffs are getting really annoying.

thomas johnson

You got a point did not look at it that way.

Davis

And yet somehow repeatedly filled with incomplete actions and stories. Deliberately, you might argue

Mega Ampharos

I'm about to start stacking chapters as I feel the same lol

Xavier Tademy

I really like this book but at this point i might abandon it. Too many chapters of basically fluff and a quarter of depth

NiceTryMate

I kinda expect the first chapters of any book to be fluff-like. It sets the scene and is the foundation for the buildup and climax later on. Do you know many books where there is a climax around chapter 14?

Corey S

You described it well. Dragons and their pride are typically a double edged sword in myths and fantasy

Luciaron

One of the things I like about this novel is how the powerful cores actually have side effects, his dragon's pride is one of them

thomas johnson

Hmmm interesting still his recent cultivation dream/primal realm specifically told him to be wary. I guess him addressing the daughters now is his version of that rather than get swept into the primal realm run. Hoping Isaiah can also grow. I would think if he could do the chimeric forge maybe Isaiah could gain insight. It seems being versatile is an important aspect of that race. Perfection through any means. Hopefully he can grow from this insight. This recent series of partnerships has the chance for Isaiah to maybe broker a ticket to that primal realm.

Etez

How cool would it be that Elijah just transforms and everyone sees a dragon rising out of the fires and piles of broken house that just exploded And he only utters for everyone near to hear " so you have chosen death" XDD

Etez

You can go read for free like anyone else can xD why is it a cash grab? And he literally has more chapters ahead than any other author I follow with the same price...

Samuel Davis

Climax ? No one is asking for climax, how about functional progression of the main plot. Which typically gets discarded for at least 10-20 chapters in a row and then all of the sudden WE MUST SAVE the world. Its weird and makes no sense

Samuel Davis

Nope hes gonna be horribly injured or something and magically heal via Shape of Spores and then everyone is gonna ooo and ahh over it. But afterwards we will get a chapter of him talking to himself about how he needs to be careful because hes not immortal even if he feels that way.

Francesco M.

If you want only plot progression the quality is going to go down. Quality writing means making space other things like descriptions and characters thoughts.

Francesco M.

In one chapter you can only write so much.