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This is the last of the Ok'tarik interlude. I enjoyed writing it, but I know alternate perspectives tend to annoy a subset of readers. I hope you'll understand why this was necessary as the book moves on. In any case, we're back to Elijah and company tomorrow.

Ok’tarik stumbled in mid-air, falling to his hands and knees as his flesh sloughed off his bones.  It fell, but only for a few seconds before the dense and corrosive ethera charred it into black ash that disintegrated almost immediately.  In the end, there was nothing left but the memory of his discarded flesh.

At the same time, his body rebuilt itself in an endless cycle that he knew he couldn’t maintain for much longer.  Despite that, he crawled forward.  Not because he had some destination he needed to reach, but rather, because he saw prey on the metaphorical horizon.

He’d lost track of how much time had passed since he’d set out from that first ring.  Days, at the very least.  Perhaps as much as two weeks.  He’d passed three more rings, and with each threshold, his power became ever more insufficient to the task of keeping him alive.  Facing the energy from the planetary core, his meager advancement counted for almost nothing. 

It could barely even keep him alive.

The only solace came from the grim certainty that the wyrm couldn’t have been much better off.  The trail glowed, bright and unmissable, in his senses.  The signal was strong.  The wyrm was close.

Ok’tarik only needed to keep going. 

What would he do when the confrontation finally presented itself?  He had no idea.  But he could no more stop than he could give up the curse of sapience that dogged him so viciously.

He took one breath.  Then two.  A third, and he heaved himself upright.  He leaned back on his heels, eyes closed as he circulated more ethera.  In great torrents, it flowed through his body, shielding him and mending the damage wrought by the atmosphere.  It required significant focus, maintaining that flow, but it was necessary if he wanted to keep going.

And he did.

After a few more moments, he pushed himself to his feet and forced his legs to move.  One step became a second, then a third.  It eventually turned into a steady gait, barely trembling under the weight of so much corrosive power.

Like that, Ok’tarik continued.  He didn’t allow doubt to creep into his mind.  Nor did he let himself consider turning back and settling for the horn he’d left behind on the first of the inner rings.  He’d already decided it wasn’t good enough of a trophy, and he wasn’t going to turn away from the resolution to do better.

He’d rather die.

Which was a distinct possibility if he kept going much further.  Another ring, and he would be bathed in exponentially more powerful ethera that would burn him, body, mind, and soul.  Nothing would remain.

Still, he couldn’t help but wonder what would happen if he managed to reach the core.  There was so much ethera there, thick and wild.  Combative.  Corrosive.  It was another enemy begging to be conquered.

But Ok’tarik had learned caution where so many of his people had not.  And he recognized a bad idea when it crossed his mind.  The difference was that, even though he saw it as a challenge to his dominance, he could push that aside in service of self-preservation.

Most orcs would have fled.  Others would have forged ahead, their minds entirely overcome by thoughts of the core and all the energy it contained.  Other than Ok’tarik, none could have gone on, their eyes still trained on the hunt.  In that respect – among many others – he was different.

And it was the only reason he survived the ambush.

The wyrm came out of nowhere, its arrival announced only by a subtle ripple in the ambient ethera.  For Ok’tarik, who’d maintained a steady eye on his surroundings, that was enough.  He leaped aside, weakened muscles and bone tearing under the sudden strain. 

The beast crashed through his invisible plane of ethera, shattering it.  However, Ok’tarik barely managed to avoid the thing’s massive claws.

Only then did he truly understand the scope of the thing he’d claimed as his prey. 

The wyrm was massive enough to distort the air around it.  Maybe half a mile long and built like a snake with legs and wings, it was an intimidating presence even to someone like Ok’tarik.  What made it even more so was the oppressive aura of authority and ethera surrounding it.

Sensing that, it was easy for Ok’tarik to understand why wyrms – or wild dragons, as they were sometimes known – were seen through the terrified eyes.  They were often called calamities, and for good reason.  What Ok’tarik felt from that creature harkened back to something primal.  Something that predated civilization to encompass the purest bestial savagery.

He envied it.

He feared it.

And he wanted to emulate it.

The creature’s power washed over him, adding spatial fluctuations to the already corrosive atmosphere to rip Ok’tarik to shreds.  He countered it with a surge of his own ethera, pushed outward to surround him in a cocoon of protective energy.  His soul trembled at the expenditure. His core roiled, and his body miraculously remained intact. 

Then came the next phase of the wyrm’s attack.

Even as it snapped out with massive jaws, the world compressed.  Far away, the rings creaked under additional strain as that power pulled everything toward it. 

A black hole.

That was what the dragon prisoner had called it before he’d lost the ability to properly articulate his thoughts.  Ok’tarik had hoped the onset of wyrmhood would have robbed the creature of that ability, but it seemed that his hopes were misplaced.  If anything, it had grown stronger.

It should not have been a surprise.  The wyrm itself was more powerful.  So too would whatever abilities it could still utilize.

And in this case, it was enough to destabilize the entire system of rings.  They’d already begun to wobble, creating havoc among the native wildlife.  Beasts of all sorts let out panicked cries, and those with wings threw themselves into the air only to find that they couldn’t fight against the pull of the wyrm’s ability in action.

In that respect, Ok’tarik should have been no different.  He had no wings.  He was not a native flyer.  But what he did have was the willpower to force the local ethera to obey his commands.

He flexed, sending out an explosion of energy that slammed into the wyrm’s open mouth.  The blow launched the creature backwards, but that was only a side effect.  The main purpose was to free Ok’tarik from the bonds of the black hole.  And in that purpose, it was successful.

Barely.

He reversed course, summoning tiny bars of ethera beneath his feet.  He kicked forward, pushing himself to previously unattainable velocity.  And when his fist rammed into the wyrm’s tooth, he was rewarded by the sound of cracking bone. 

The wyrm reeled, bucking its head like the wounded animal it was.  Spatial fluctuations erupted in every direction, slicing through Ok’tarik’s ethereal cloud and into his flesh.  It scored his bones, but his time crossing the rings had not been in vain.  It had broken him down, bit by bit, and when he’d rebuilt himself, the results were undeniable.  Not only was he stronger, but he was far more durable as well.

The wyrm was no longer in its right mind, so it couldn’t understand the implications.

But it was afraid.

No doubt, in its devolved mind, it believed that its ambush would destroy Ok’tarik, utterly and without delay.  Yet, it had also already tasted true fear when he’d ripped the thing’s horn off. 

That terror returned in full force when Ok’tarik slammed his fist into one of the creature’s massive fangs.  The wyrm was more than large enough to swallow him whole, but the outsized impact broke its jaw and sent its head snapping backward.  At the same time, a massive crack erupted across the fang, nearly dislodging it with that singular blow.

It hung on by a thread, but the damage was done.

Once again, the wyrm made to flee.

Even as it gathered ethera to teleport to some unknown location, Ok’tarik erupted with ethera, wrapping his energy around the intended ability.  It wasn’t nearly enough to stop its activation.  The creature was well-attuned and powerful, and he couldn’t hope to impinge upon its domain.

But he could delay it.

Which was all he’d intended.

Because while he’d come to kill the thing and take an appropriate trophy, he’d begun to realize that that was the work of years.  Perhaps even decades.  And it would span the entirety of Orveth Kaal, with him slowly chipping away at the creature.  And that was if he could even guarantee success, which he could not.  It was more resistant to the ambient ethera than even he could boast, which meant that it could go places he simply could not. 

No.

His hunt was over for the time being.

The realization came with a wave of shame that he forced away in favor of sheer pragmatism.  Once again launching himself off a plane of pure ethera, he slammed his fist into that same fang.

The crack widened.

He hit it again, and the rift spiderwebbed into a thousand branches that extended beneath the thing’s gums.  Ok’tarik braced himself with ethera, then wrapped his arms around the thing.  The wyrm tried to throw him free, jerking its head back and forth, but Ok’tarik’s grip remained as firm as ever.

He pulled.

It wiggled a bit.

He let out a massive roar of effort, and it shifted a little more.  His ethereal grip on the wyrm’s ability loosened, and the world focused in on a tiny pinprick of existence.  He could see through to the other side, but he knew that he wouldn’t survive the journey.  Vaunted durability or not.

Once more, he adjusted his grip, braced himself on another pane of ethera.  And with everything he had – both metaphysical and otherwise – he heaved.

The fang shifted a little more, but he knew it wasn’t going to come free.  Not unless he tapped into something more.

He reached deep into his core, gathering the ethera closest to his nature.  It pulsed with thick power, domineering and unfettered.

He tapped into it, funneling it through his channels and into his body.  No more was the rage and frustration enough to power him through.  He wasn’t a berserker.  Not anymore.  Not for a long time.  And it was past the point where he should have abandoned that unfitting base of power.

The energy roared through him, nearly bursting his channels before he wrangled control.  Then, he used it.

The resulting surge of strength nearly ripped him in two.  If he’d been any weaker, it might have managed that feat.  As it was, it merely ruptured organs and fractured bones.  But it didn’t stop him from doing what he intended.

The tooth came free with a vicious crack.  Ok’tarik suddenly found himself tumbling through the air and toward the black hole.  Whatever control he’d imposed over the environment had vanished.

Fortunately, that meant the wyrm’s ability finally took hold, and the creature disappeared in a shower of sparks.  For only a second, the gravity well persisted, and it worsened Ok’tarik’s injuries.  Yet, he held himself together just long enough for it to dissipate.

He couldn’t keep hold of the fang, though.  It tumbled free of his broken fingers and into the black hole.  He heard it crunching, but he couldn’t turn his head.  Even had he been capable of doing so, it would have been impossible to see past the event horizon.

Then, suddenly, it disappeared.

The tooth fell.

Or what had been the tooth, at least.

It no longer looked like one, though.  Instead, it had been compacted into a mere splinter.  Maybe ten feet long and six or seven inches wide.  Vaguely curved.  The cracks he’d inflicted upon it were gone, and the pieces had fused together into a unified whole.  Only the barest hint of discoloration remained as evidence of the pressure it had endured.

Ok’tarik summoned a whip of ethera, then cast it out.  The energy wrapped around the shaft and yanked it to him.

By that point, he had fallen nearly a thousand feet.

The dense ethera continued to press in on him, and he knew if he let himself fall much closer to the core, he would succumb.

So, using the last vestiges of energy left to him, Ok’tarik threw himself back toward the ring he’d left behind.  He sailed through the air, barely making it to the edge before his momentum was spent. He rolled forward, not stopping until he hit a massive and ancient tree.

There, he came to a halt.

His body was broken.  His cultivation system burned like it had been submerged in metaphysical acid.  His core roiled, empty and angry.  And his mind was befuddled, lost amidst a sea of pain and a hint of shame.

But he hadn’t lost his trophy.

Hopefully, it would be enough to prove his mandate to the rest of orc-kind.  For now, though, he needed to rest and recover.  Because it would not be long until the beasts recognized his weakness and tried to exploit it.

Such was the way of life in the Ruins.  Predator could become prey in an instant.  He’d taught that lesson to the wyrm, and he would learn it himself soon enough.  So, he turned his mind and his parched ethereal system to recovery, hoping against hope that he would manage it before he was forced to fight for his life.

Still, despite his dire situation, a rare smile spread across his face.

Comments

Maple

Honestly I think it's the amount of chapters in a row that have been the orcs POV that are the biggest issue. I enjoy them well enough but...I just don't care about the orc tbh

Babtain

I don't mind alternate POV chapters generally, but not five to six chapters in a row away from the MC. Didn't bother to read the last three with how bored I was with Ok’tarik POV chapters.

Spacewalker

I usually like the alternate POV, my issue is the length of this one. One chapter is great, two is okay, three becomes too much.

the fool

kind of thinking I wasting my money for this month around 25%/20% filler and you're just raised up the price too........ annoying is the nice way to say this

Davis

I liked reading it! Side perspectives are great, anyone who’s upset about less than a week of alternate viewpoints needs to work on cultivating patience (and maybe a little media literacy) Grow up, children.

NoctisMi

I don't think these are bad chapters or anything. I just can't understand what's the build up for? That orc is already way stronger than Elijah, so no need to see how he gets stronger while he is on some journey about himself and how to "safe" his brethern. I really enjoyed the beginning of this arc, finding these cells, clearing corruption, building a nice foothold and so on. Now it's just some fucked up survival thing against end endless amount of orcs that apparently multiply like rabbits on aphrodisiacs, and have no other predator hunting for them even though there are so many other foretold super strong predators in that world. So far I don't see a good conclusion to this arc. Hope it's not gonna be another near death scenario where that flying underground hideout gets overwhelmed by the orcs, gets almost completely wiped and the rest has to flee either through the gates opening again or Elijah's own portal.

CJB

I like the alternative POV chapters, though I tend to agree that 5 in a row is too much. Maybe alternate them? Especially leading up to a conflict between the two characters.

Sulhythal

It feels like the setup for both retrieving Orveth Kaal from the Abyss, and integrate the Orcs as a sapient race in the eyes of the System/World Tree.

Richard Van Dijk

Thank you for the Wednesday Double Chapters! Copying part of CJB's post... I like the alternative POV chapters, though I tend to agree that 5 in a row is getting a bit too much. Nothing personal!

BeepBoop

Ok'tarik's pov might be necessary, but should it be? Should stretches of a book be considered 'not interesting' to some, because it is worth it in the end? I don't know.

NoctisMi

Can't see that happening, with only Elijah, yes. But with the other dragons, no. Not necessarily the ones that are inside that realm now but all the ones in the politics of the empire will raise hell on those orcs the second they could set their foot on that planet. Dragons are greedy by nature no way they would share their ancestral home with "filthy" orcs even if they reach sapience.

Luis Guerrero

Alternate POVs are not the issue they usually add depth to the story and characters the issues is the amount of them and using a arguably unpopular character

Serdonah

If you think having a difference of opinion in these POV chapters necessitates calling us children and telling us we need to grow up is the right thing to do, you're wrong. Like, what?

Matt

I complained about excessive exposition (my subjective opinion) in the first Oktarik chapters. Should have trusted the author more. Your writing has done justice to the complicated feelings I had about the character from the start. Progressions fantasy is appealing to me because of the strive to better oneself becoming quantifiable. Introducing a character whose success would be apocalyptic for humanity certainly created some conflicting feelings in me. Keep up the good work!

DrDankness

I can see why some people dont like it. I personally like seeing some other characters get fleshed out especially if they are a primary antagonist

Tim Johnson

Going to add my 2 cents here. The people saying OTK boring, pod is actually path of orc, y'all don't understand how to tell a story. It's been 4 chapters of an interlude, that for you, sure it's been 3 days of no Elijah content, but when someone is reading the finished book will be 30 minutes of reading before we're back to MC. The important bit is that it is establishing a counter point to our MC, showing a contrasting perspective of how 2 people are dealing with similar issues in their respective groups and how theoretically they are both working towards improving their situations/societies. Eli dealing with warring dragon clans and bringing them together, OTK trying to unite the tribes against their dragon enemy, the system etc. Everyone is obviously entitled to their own opinion, but at least make an effort in providing feedback and think about the context of the story as a whole. Be constructive, not "orc boring gimme mc."

Davis

No, seems about right, as does this response. If you can’t see how a chapter not starring the protagonist could still have impact on the story, you need to work on your literacy skills. Like children do.

Davis

Literally everything is not for someone. Trying to get broad approval generates lowest common denominator slop.

Wardedwoods

Couldn't read the last few chapters. Ok'tarik is such a bland unlikeable character.

the fool

the ego on you wow

Robert Rosenthal

was hoping the wyrm would kill oktarik here even though I knew it wasn't going to, ah well. Don't mind the alternate chapters in moderation, knowing the dragons are bad but ocs are worse isn't super interesting but getting a perspective of someone with increasing awareness of self who is still ok being evil, not really my cup of tea but it does confirm that even an evolved orc can't be lived with. Ok with destroying a world they are living on, welcoming corruption, extended torture etc

BeepBoop

I never said 'try to appeal to everyone'. I assumed the subset of readers the author mentioned was large enough for him to address it. It's his target audience.

Davis

I have an ego, not all of you crying about how the story isn’t catering to your wishes? Wow

Davis

This is your post, and you accuse ME of an ego? Self reflection is an important tool you’ll develop as you grow up.

izarch

i know I'm probably wrong but i don't think Elijah and Orc Jesus here are going to kill each other

Etez

I have a feeling as well xD you aren't the only one xD

Professional_industrial_man

I personally am not the biggest fan of these long alt povs but if there one thing I’ve learned by 16 books it’s that it’s going somewhere. TFTC!

CJB

That's actually fair. Reading it on Patreon drags it out a lot longer than reading it in a proper book would, and makes minor things like this seem like a bigger deal than they actually are. Compared to 80-100 chapters a book, this is a blip on the radar in comparison.

the fool

The author of the book brought it up I just confirmed they were right also are you 12 or do you just sound like that (also it's not an accusation it's an observation lol)

ReyWargen

Honestly, I don't care about the orc so much. The chapters from his perspective bored me more than anything else in the entire series. For the past three chapters, all I've been hoping for is for that dragon to finally finish off that stupid orc. A chapter or two would have been okay, but this orc marathon is too much. It would have been better to read about the thoughts of prisoners who have been staring at walls for hundreds or thousands of years. Or a chapter or two from Sara's perspective, or even Cyran's.

Tim Johnson

Thank you for understanding my TED talk

Kyler

Honestly I'm one of the many that don't like alternate POV's. If I'm reading a story I want it to be the MC I'm reading about, I don't want to suddenly get another POV, that doesn't build towards a clash with the MC. But with this story, I honestly enjoy the shift between perspectives, especially with its them watching what the MC does and us getting their thoughts. But here a for OT, I like him, I want him to be more, and I was slightly conflicted with him killing the wyrm, only because I want Elijah to encounter the wyrm as well. But having this break from Elijah has been great, as well honestly, Elijah's straight up irritates me with his emotional and mental state. It's been that way since book 1, but then I put it off has character development, for later in the series. Which we are later in the series and he's still the whiny, emotional child he's always been. Yes his classes have grown his cultivation has grown everything with numbers goes up and he's changed that way. But mentally, he's still the same as book one, no emotional growth it feels what so ever. And it's been what 60-100 years for him? I understand Rome wasn't built in a day, and maybe it's one of his many flaws, yet for a book about growing stronger and becoming more, it feels like for someone gifted in cultivation, you'd think they'd understand themselves better. Instincts only get yourself so far, as to prove that point we see it here in the past three chapters through OT's eyes and through the wyrm. They need thought to be more

Tyler Blanchette-Witiuk

I agree man. He's a much more interesting antagonist than some of the other ones we've gotten like. Roman sucked so bad anytime we got his point of view I was struggling

Tyler Blanchette-Witiuk

We all kind of hope that that's going to be the case because honestly Elijah should not be able to beat this guy. If he does, that's crazy

Mega Mike

I don't mind an interlude of one chapter, but this many is annoying.

Mega Mike

Going to play devil’s advocate a bit here. I agree the thematic parallel is cool. Eli uniting dragons while OTK unites the tribes against them is a solid mirror. But I think this defense misses why people are reacting badly. Telling readers they “don’t understand storytelling” is just gatekeeping. Someone does not need a creative writing degree to know they are bored. Their reaction is still real, even if they only express it as “orc boring, give me MC.” Also, completed-book pacing and serial pacing are not the same thing. A thirty-minute interlude in a finished book can still feel like narrative whiplash if it hard-breaks the main plot during high-stakes momentum. And the author chose the web serial format. Four straight interlude chapters can stall daily-reader momentum for almost a

DrDankness

Fair enough. I think there is merit to both just obviously evil antagonists (Roman) and more nuanced ones with their own motives (otk).

Mega Mike

That response is doing a lot of work to avoid the actual criticism. People are not upset because a story dared to challenge them. They are upset because the content felt weak, the timing felt off, or the author broke something that had been carefully builit Calling readers children is not a defense of the writing. It is a way to feel superior. The patience lecture is just tone policing. It does not address whether the chapters were good. It is the audiance that is bad, and once they achieve enlightenment they will get it. Sigh. "media literacy" is not a trump card. Understanding narrative structure does not make a frustrating reading experience less frustrating. Knowing why a joke is constructed a certain way does not make it funny. Knowing how a trick works does not mean you have to enjoy the trick...etc. Get it?

Tim Johnson

Fair points, but contextually, the comments I was seeing were very low effort and just being negative because no Mc = I'm not happy. We are also 19 chapters into what will likely be a 100 chapter book. There will always be people who are upset by decisions an author makes, I just think it's unfair to them or any author, to get riddled with low effort hate by the vocal minority. Nick has 1500 patreon subs and there's been what only 100 who have commented here?

Tm

Hi, where can I find the complete book 15 pdf ? Does anyone have an idea ?

BIGG Chuck

Its the fact his perspective is using up our double chapter days.

Eli

Love to see some critical thinking in this comment section.

Blooper

Excelent discussion. I 'm really liking Ok'tarik's story, and I agree that in a finished book the interlude will seem smaller, though still fairly large by book standards. Though, I must also agree that I missed some story evolution on Elijah's side, and I think it could be achieved by placing something in between Ok'tarik's hunt, it didn't even need to be a full chapter, to be honest. This craving for Elijah's story is actually a huge indirect compliment, just goes to show how immersed in his story we all are.

Cameron Macer

All these pea brain people who can't follow an alternative character arc for a few chapters need to go touch grass.

Cameron Macer

I've enjoyed Ok'Tarik's chapters, really enjoyable seeing the difference in progression and how their strength differs to other races

Cameron Macer

Ser is a pea brain, go write your own book and keep it interesting without adding depth to the universe

Cameron Macer

Bet they end up best buds, transcending the system together.

Cameron Macer

Ok'Tarik is a brilliant antagonist (or potential ally?), the character growth we've already seen is huge, imagine how far Nicholas can push it. I think the unpopular aspect of it is the orcs, they're unfamiliar which makes people dislike it, but something is only unfamiliar until it's familiar.

Cameron Macer

Have you totally forgotten about MC's secret lab where he created the mega fungus ready to annihilate the orcs? This journey is probably prepping our antagonist to resist the fungus' spores and preparing us for his transcendence (so his whinier readers don't cry about it coming out of the blue)

Cameron Macer

How is universe building and fleshing out a likely very important future character in the series considered filler? What kind of pea brain attitude is that? Go continue reading your harem crap

Cameron Macer

Evil is subjective, is doing something others would consider bad evil? Even if it's to save his life? What about his entire race?

Robert Rosenthal

A century plus of torturing someone for conversation, being ok with destroying the world and letting corruption spread, for no positive outcome (his thoughts on orcs on the planet). None of that is about saving himself his people or anyone else. Those are just 2 of things he has done or is ok with doing so far. His issues with the system seem more universal, both the teacher dragon and primal realm djinn hold almost the same views. There is a good chance it’s a prison but can be overcome or influenced by some powerful types like the tree

Stregone

Team Ok‘tarik!!!! (Sorry Elijah...) My gut is telling me we are heading for a Devourer v. World Tree clash, but the naive Horde player in me is hoping for some orc redemption-sapience between our bestest druid and his new orc bff

DeAndrea H

Ok’Tarik vs Elijah feels too lopsided to enjoy but it would be interesting to see the orc vs Mano. If he truly wants to escape this, he’ll have to fight more than Demi-god and deity level dragons. I feel like this bubble world has given him a false sense of superiority in his strength. Having one sapient, deity level is not going to be enough to survive in the multiverse.

Jon Lomax

just to way in here after the fact. reading it all in one go at the moment and stacking the pov chapters together is still a bit much. for me I like it in half chapters, if there doing something similar that works even better

Littleboy3atu

Wow... these comments are baffling. I know I'm late to the party and didn't hadn't to wait but damn, I can kinda understand how Elijah feels about the Empire of Scale. Everyone is in it for themselves, are petty, and have zero consideration for anything but theirselves. Giving off Abyss energy. No cap.

Jaya Flower

I have not been the biggest fan of this pov. But mainly because I don't feel like it's been built up enough to have narrative weight. The orc seems to be doing the same stuff that Elijah did to cultivate. Surviving having his body melt away stabbed with a horn that should have obliterated him (going on the size of the fang) and yet he survives with no trouble at all. Elijah had his healing spells at least and his insane regen. The orcs reason for surviving just hasn't been explained as well. Which caused a disconnect and left me uncaring and uninvested.

Kontinous Gaming

The way I see it it is kinda like watching a documentary about ww1. If a commercial about a wildlife documentary comes on it's a 30 second break. But if you have a 10 minute infomercial come on your no longer watching a ww1 documentary your watching a infomercial at that point.

Kontinous Gaming

Regardless if you like the infomercial or not it still isn't what you set out to watch.

Asterrahl

There is no need to question the value of POV shifts in general. When they are enjoyable, readers enjoy them. I see many enjoyed these. I didn't, and I had to skim ahead, which I never do. I just couldn't get through them though. Going forward, I'll have this suspicion that I might he missing some context from the text I skipped, and as a completionist, it will bother me, but still less than forcing myself to read them word for word. Even as I tried, I couldn't focus, and ended up spacing out so much I had to give up.

granndfunk

I know I'm 2 months late, but I will just add that I think it's more about having multiple in a row. Bouncing off Elijah for a chapter before coming back to him works well and helps break the scenes at different points. But going 50 pages without our MC can toe the line for many.