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Elijah landed smoothly, already running at full stride.  A few other dragons tried to stop him, but he was past them before they could react.  After all, he had no time to waste – especially on people who were ultimately unimportant. 

Okar fell in beside him, trotting along and bearing a stern expression that didn’t really fit him.  Elijah understood it.  After what they’d seen, it was difficult to find a reason to smile.

Impending doom had a way of doing that.

Soon enough, he and Okar reached the closest hatch and descended into the mountain.  There, they found a hive of activity that had erupted when the threat became public knowledge.  The alarm had faded, but the results were still in effect.  Everyone wanted to be ready for the orcs’ arrival.

Fortunately, they still had a little time to prepare.  The fleet was at least two days away, which had initially come as a bit of a surprise to Elijah.  However, once he got a little closer and saw the breadth of the armada, he’d realized that been a trick of perception.  The fact that it stretched across the entire horizon was just evidence that the enemy was far too numerous to fight.

Of course, Elijah didn’t think it would be easy to convince the others of that.

Because he knew dragons.  He knew that, of all their negative traits, pride was the most prevalent.  Hubris came next.  It was rare to find a dragon – especially one born to that race – who looked at situations realistically.  Most of the time, they functioned under the unassailable assumption that they could meet any foe on equal footing and emerge victorious. 

The details didn’t matter.  The enemy was irrelevant.  Numbers were just a gauge of how much experience they could expect as a reward.  They struggled to imagine a situation where they lost a single battle, much less a war.

And that should not have been the case.

After all, almost everyone there had been beaten by orcs.  Most of the clans had been forced into retreat.  They should have known just how dangerous the natives to Orveth Kaal could be.

Yet, they had all forgotten just how close they’d come to the ultimate loss.  Instead, they had reverted to their original attitudes, reembracing the pride that characterized their entire race.

The serpentors and drakes were just as bad.  Some were even worse.  As they strove to emulate the people they considered their betters, they adopted the worst of their traits. 

Elijah knew that convincing them to flee would be an uphill battle.  But he also recognized the necessity.  The incoming fleet made the others look sparse by comparison, and if he had to guess, the entirety of the orcish population had come to take vengeance from the dragons. 

He and a few others had volunteered to scout it out, but Elijah was the first to return.  Soon, the rest would arrive to confirm what he intended to tell the leaders.

“Do you think they will listen?” Elijah asked when he and Okar reached a deserted stretch of corridor. 

“They’re dragons.”

That was the only answer Elijah needed.  He knew what to expect, even if he hoped for something else.

It took a few minutes for them to reach the command center, where they found their way blocked by a pair of guards.  Elijah didn’t recognize either, and he assumed that they belonged to one of the clans with which he wasn’t familiar. 

Thankfully, Elijah and Okar only needed to identify themselves before they were allowed inside.  Otherwise, Elijah might’ve had to force the issue, and he wasn’t really in the mood to hold back.

Upon entry, he was surprised to find more than a few faces he didn’t recognize.  That was not unsurprising.  Over the past few months, three other clans had arrived.  Ky’hrin, Umbranix, and Soryn.  The remaining clans – Ignara, Orvex, Tharys, and Veklarin – remained uncontacted, but not for lack of trying.  The communication systems within the Vengeance were as advanced as anyone could have expected, but they were incapable of covering even a small sliver of Orveth Kaal.

As a result, those other clans were still out of reach.

The K’levehar leaders, including Lirakir, were currently engaged in deep and somewhat heated discussions with the others.  Elijah looked past them to lock eyes with Imal, who seemed more frustrated than usual.

And there was a little fear there, too.  Some excitement as well.  She gave him a small smile, which he returned.

A couple of the leaders noticed Elijah’s approach, and they turned in his direction.  That caused a ripple effect that ended with everyone facing him, expectant expressions upon their faces.

“Report,” commanded one.

“I don’t really like your tone,” Elijah responded. 

“Insolent –”

“Enough,” cut in Cyran, who had been at the center of the discussion.  “We mustn’t fight amongst one another.”

“I won’t stand here and –”

Elijah had had enough.  In less than a second, he had his hand around the dragon’s throat.  No one had even seen him move, much less had time to react.  He squeezed, lifting the dragon from the ground.  His feet dangled, kicking back and forth as he clutched at Elijah’s wrists.

Elijah ignored the resistance.

To no one in particular, he announced, “I think some of you have forgotten your place.  Since our last war against the orcs, I’ve been ostracized or ignored.  Underestimated and dismissed.  I’ve endured attacks, both verbal and physical.  Not long ago, six assassins attempted to kill me.

“And I’m tired of it,” he growled, finally looking from one stunned face to another.  “I don’t intend to put up with it any longer.  If you take issue with that, I’ll be happy to put you down.”

“If you kill us, there will be consequences,” said Lirakir, who’d progressively changed his tone as they put more distance between their rescue and the present.  It seemed he had forgotten the part Elijah had played in their survival, replacing it with ire.

Imal had tried to explain it to him.  The K’levehars and the Vyrins didn’t really get along.  They weren’t enemies, but they were a long way from being allies.  Often, they clashed over one thing or another, and at times, their enmity had resulted in physical violence.

“I’m good with that,” Elijah said. 

He’d passed the point where he was willing to step lightly.  He had long since left that behind, and he just didn’t care if there were consequences waiting for him after they exited the ancestral world.  If that happened, he felt comfortable being able to protect himself and those he cared about.  And if he couldn’t?  Mano and Kirlissa would step in. 

Probably.

Either way, he had no intention of putting up with the disrespect.  Hating him was fine.  Acting upon it was something else altogether.

He released the dragon, who fell to his knees, gasping for air. 

“This is not the time for pettiness,” he pointed out.  “Once we’ve dealt with the orcs, we can handle our differences.”

Imal cut in, “What did you find?”

Elijah didn’t hesitate to launch into an explanation of the orcish fleet.  There were dozens of pyramid ships, each one manned by more orcish shamans than he could easily count.  They continuously funneled their power into overlapping domains that would prove to be a major problem. 

“And the rest of the fleet is uncountable,” he said.  “Hundreds of thousands of ships.  Maybe millions.  Some are small, with only a few dozen acting as crew, but there are others big enough to house entire armies.”

“You make it sound insurmountable,” Cyran pointed out.

“Because it is.  If we fight, we’ll probably lose. And even if we win, at least half of us will die.  There are just too many,” Elijah responded.

“What do you suggest?” asked Lirakir.

“Flee.  Use every engine in the Vengeance to keep moving until the end of the trial,” Elijah answered without hesitation.

“Flee like cowards?” scoffed one of the other dragons.  By his grey scales, Elijah suspected he belonged to the Umbranix clan.  That alone was reason enough for Elijah’s disdain. 

“Flee like people who want to live.”

“They’re just orcs!” shouted one of the Ky’rhin leaders.  She was small, but Elijah suspected that she was at the peak of the demigod tier.  As such, she had plenty of power.

“There are orcs in that fleet that can stand against any one of us.  Deities.”

That didn’t get the reaction he expected.  Some of them looked eager to challenge such deities, and Elijah understood that.  After all, demigods defeating deities usually resulted in a significant Feat of Strength to add to a person’s Legacy.  But one needed to survive to see those benefits.

About halfway through Elijah’s explanation, the other scouts arrived, and their reports didn’t really help his cause.  Most of them grossly underestimated the orcs’ power, even if they accurately reported the numbers.  As a result, they made the threat seem a lot less dire than Elijah knew it to be.

“This is an unprecedented situation,” said Cyran, who’d somehow managed to weasel his way into leadership.  The Vaels followed him for obvious reasons, but the others had ceded authority because he was one of the few willing to take control.  At least of the people who could back it up.

He continued, “The deities failed us.  They left Orveth Kaal unconquered, putting us in danger.  However, we have responded to their failure with a unique alliance that has never before been seen.  Multiple clans working together.  Living together.  Fighting together.

“Alone, we would have no choice but to run.  Even the strongest dragon can be overcome by numbers.  One need only look at our ongoing war against the wasps to recognize that simple truth.

“However, unity has given us options.  Together, the strong can only grow stronger.  For what it’s worth, my advice is to meet the orcs with the full might of the Empire of Scale.  The Vengeance is a uniquely powerful asset that will make the difference.  We can defeat them.”  He slammed his fist into his hand, declaring, “We will!”

The other dragons didn’t cheer, but they did stand a little straighter.

The little speech made Elijah want to punch Cyran in the face.  He contained his hatred, though.  Not because he agreed with the declaration.  He most assuredly did not.  If they fought, they would lose.  There was no doubt in Elijah’s mind that, even in the best case scenario, they’d only achieve a pyrrhic victory.  He wasn’t willing to trade so many casualties to win a battle they didn’t need to fight.

But he held his tongue.

For his part, Cyran continued, hyping the other dragons in a way that Elijah never could.  For all his good qualities, he wasn’t the inspirational sort of leader.  Even in the best of times, he was reluctant to take the point position.  He was a good fighter.  Maybe even great.  But leadership had never come easily to him.

Because of that, he knew he couldn’t hope to counter Cyran.

So, he remained silent as they worked themselves into a frenzy.  Somehow, they managed to convince themselves that they could win.  But if they had seen what he had seen, they never would have believed that.

How the other scouts didn’t recognize the inevitability of it, Elijah had no idea.

Perhaps it was just the pride of dragons at work.

Or maybe they were just delusional. 

Whatever the case, by the time the meeting ended, they had committed to a course of action that would soon see them clashing with the orcs.  As Elijah resignedly left the command center, Okar and Imal followed.

“What do you want to do?” asked Okar.

“We could lead the others away,” Imal suggested.  “Some of them will follow us.”

“It’ll weaken the Vengeance even further,” Elijah pointed out.

“So, you want to stay?” Okar asked.

Elijah shook his head.  “It doesn’t matter what I want.  All that matters is that this is the reality of the situation.  The fight’s coming.  If we want to help the others survive, we don’t have much of a choice.  We have to do our part.”

He stopped briefly, then looked back and forth from Okar to Imal.  Then, he said, “But I’m not sacrificing myself or anyone I love just because they’re too stubborn to see a lost cause.  If it comes down to it, we run.  And we survive.”

“I’ll spread the word,” Imal said.

“And I’ll start preparations,” Okar added.

Elijah nodded.  “Good.  We’ve got a little time left.  We need to use it appropriately.”

After that, they all set out on their tasks.  For his part, Elijah headed toward his first mushroom cave to check on its progress.  It wasn’t as evolved as Fungee, but it was still enough to make a difference in the coming fight. 

Even so, Elijah could only hope that he had enough tricks up his sleeve to save as many dragons as possible.

Comments

dave hutch

guess we have learned why wyrms exist. The noped the fuck out of dragonhood after realising how precious there braincells were.

Onyinye Onyeka

IS CYRAN SMOKING CRACK 😂😂😂😂😂 the brainwashing must have given him brain damage too

Harshdeep singh

One thing that always disappoints me in dragon stories is how dragons are often reduced to a single trait: pride. The problem isn't that dragons are proud. Dragons should be proud. If a creature can shatter mountains, live for thousands of years, and stand at the top of the food chain, pride is natural. The problem is when pride becomes their only personality. Human characters can be proud, but they're also afraid, hopeful, curious, lonely, loving, angry, protective, wise, etc. Yet many dragon stories reduce dragons to little more than children with unlimited power. And then they get outsmarted by the protagonist five minutes later. For a race that's supposed to have ruled worlds, survived countless ages, and stood at the pinnacle of creation, that's fucking disappointing. Their power should come not only from strength, but also from intelligence, wisdom, experience, and understanding. A dragon should be terrifying not because it's arrogant or powerful, but because it's also intelligent. It should recognize when to fight, retreat, negotiate, or wait. One cannot survive for so long by being stupid. The most memorable dragons in stories aren't memorable because they're strong. They are memorable because they feel like real characters. A dragon might hoard gold because it reminds them of things they lost long ago. Another might isolate itself because it has watched everyone it cared about die. Another might obsess over knowledge because memories are the only thing immortality cannot replace. They can be loving parents, ruthless rulers, philosophers, scholars, wanderers, or monsters. They're still proud. They're still powerful. But they're more than that, with their own desires and dreams. I don't want dragons to be just these one-sided creatures. I want them to be beings with flaws. I want them to feel like dragons, as they should be: ancient, mythical beings with depth and personality, not just prideful obstacles waiting to be humbled. I started reading this story because I love dragons. So far, I've mostly been shown how terrible they are and why they supposedly don't deserve the power they possess, but I've rarely been shown the qualities that allowed them to reach such heights in the first place. Maybe it's just me, but it's becoming tiring to see one of the most magnificent and mythical creatures in fantasy reduced to another one-dimensional race whose only purpose is to be humbled.🫩 A dragon should feel like a entire civilization contained within a single being, not just a powerful lizard with an ego.

Kyler

I'm really, really, hoping they just leave. Take his crew, head to the dolmen and arrive at earth. Make it seem like the trial had no survivors, so when they go back in for the deity tier they return to the empire with true power to back their words and actions

M

100% agree @Nick

Richard Van Dijk

Thank you for the Sunday Double Chapters!! I guess we must be getting to the end of this particular story. Hopefully it will have a good ending, and NOT the end of the entire series! AND, I agree with Harshdeep Singh Ghuman's diatribe on dragons.

Brisingaer

Hmm. Cyran's now in a leadership position. Elijah is pissed off to the point of seeming like an uncontrollable madman. Cyran has successfully whipped the rest of the dragon clans into a suicidal frenzy. All the while he gets to continue playing at being this noble, upstanding and powerful dragon king. Maybe just a bias from Elijah's POV. But I don't buy for a second that Cyran is continuing to be decent for the sake of it. Skahan mind controlled one of the only good dragons into a massive bully and nobody cared either way? Nah.

Aaron Kibby

I think Nick does a pretty good job of what you said though. What I think you are forgetting is pride corrupts. Generational pride is one of the worst forms of corruption when not properly addressed.

Ullmo

TLDR: while i don't disagree that author could always do better .. I think your presentation of dragons if played out would feel as one dimensional as the one you posit presented by the author.. if too the other extreme I think.. that these arent the droids you are looking for lol These aren't apex predators ascended to the pinnacle of their environment... In this particular iteration, a lot of them are spoiled younglings who have grown up in a system that teaches them they are inherently superior to everything and everyone just by virtue of existing. Or old (near eternal) monsters ascended through the aforementioned process to the peak of their current environment, with no way or will to move higher. And who compensate for it by vying for space with and competing with their peers.. and or punching down when the occasion allows. I don't see how they could anything but what they have been presented as. I also thing your idealization of dragons as an archetype is a little one dimensional . This story isn't portraying how dragons would exist as monolithic archons or as an idealization of natural power... But how they would present as one incredibly potent race among many others. A people in close proximity to each other I'll add. Personally, while I'm not particularly happy with Elijah deluding himself into thinking dragons would be particularly different than the other sapient/sentients en mass he knew back home (it feels a bit maliciously naive), I generally like the the authors characterization. I think he has mapped out pretty well how "dragons" would function in his universe. They, like everyone else, aren't paragons of power and virtue or wisdom.. they have good and bad apples .. some at the extremes and some of more balanced persuasions. I would also argue that he has shown dragons that buck the trends and go against the flow. The sage at the tooth, the mountain druid, Elijah's tutors... I also may have overeacted to your post so I apologize if this came across as obnoxious. I am deeply frustrated by the current push by a lot of readers in a lot of the books im reading for more serious, edgy, lone Wolf, solo_leveling-esque aura farming main or otherwise characters. While I have my quibbles with Elijah he has been pretty consistently well characterized. I generally find him frustrating and satisfying in equal amounts. This goes for the author's other characterizations.

zalex101001

you got to remember the lore a little bit, you speak of pride, but you missed the other side of the coin. Arrogance! Remember the talk Prosperity had with Elijah before the tournament? She talked about the flaws of dragons society as it currently is. A society on decline. I feel she is preparing for this and is working to preserve or restore dragon society after the massive implosion that occurs. As for the current situation in this chapter, you got to remember those in that room are the arrogant young leadership of the clans, not the general footsoldiers who will be dying in droves for said leadership. I am fairly sure the majority of the regular crafters are not happy with the decision nor some of the actual combat classes/hybrid classes. In short, it is not the flaw of pride, but the upbringing of arrogance, that is applicable in this situation. Plus, they do not like how Elijah is the strongest there. They probably expect him to do his fire burst thing again to wipe the orks out when things turn out to be more than they can deal with.

Harshdeep singh

I actually agree with some of what you're saying. I'm not arguing that dragons should all be wise sages or flawless apex beings. Arrogance, corruption, decadence, and decline are all perfectly valid flaws for a dragon society to have. In fact, Prosperity's conversation with Elijah is one of the reasons I'm still interested in seeing where the story goes. My issue isn't that dragons are flawed. My issue is that, so far, the flaws have received far more focus than the qualities that supposedly allowed dragons to become the dominant race in the first place. I don't need dragons to be perfect. As you said, these are spoiled young leaders, and that's fair. But when a large percentage of the dragons we see are arrogant, short-sighted, and constantly proving Elijah right, it becomes harder to care, y'know. Maybe the story is building toward that, and maybe Prosperity's concerns are setting up exactly that decline. If so, great. I just hope that alongside showing why dragon society is failing, we also get to see why it succeeded for so long in the first place. Maybe it's me being biased, as I'm kind of a dragon fanboy. But I'd love to see where this develops, as long as it doesn't continue down the path of reducing every dragon we see into a mindless being with only one personality.

Robert Rosenthal

So Elijah previously came to terms that he cares mostly about a small group. All dragons are expected to put family/ clan ahead of the species. He knows that staying is dying for list of them. From his description 50% seemed extremely generous. After he was ambushed he broods over unfinished business and what’s important to him. Then chucks all the progress he has made and introspection to stay when he knows it’s the wrong decision and needlessly endangers those he cares about? Maybe I should skip anytime we get his internal dialog. This is extremely frustrating he seemed close to leaving before, and now he has much better reason to do so. That’s without him knowing that it’s probably much worse odds than he thinks based on the other pov. I know interpersonal stuff has been bluster, maybe deflect not back up what he is saying then get pissed when people think he is not serious and go extra brutal. But usually that’s in service of protecting or avenging those he cares about. If any of his friends who would have him out of the situation are killed, captured and tortured or something it actually would be his fault and he is aware of it. He considers a bunch of them himself shortly before this sudden reversal to staying and fighting when he knows it’s dumb

BaguaBrady

Lol! For real, who knew sapience actually lessened IQ

BaguaBrady

Harshdeep you're describing the exact motivation behind the EoS plotline- dragons are a caricature of their former selves and in danger of self-destructing as an empire and species. Kirlissa sees this trend and Elijah is her tool to address it. The one tone stupidity we have seen so far is a sign of a crumbling empire - think the fall of Rome vs. The legions at their prime. Basically, you're supposed to be disappointed with dragon culture.

BaguaBrady

It's intensely frustrating but also believable. Lord only knows how many times I've committed to changing in my mind only to regress under pressure. I somewhat hope he loses a close friend because he refused to follow through on his demand to flee and instead is sticking around to save others.

Etez

What brain, it's all crack by now obviously

Bakerbob

Pretty certain generationnal pride destroyed the empire in the past. Survivors rebuilt it knowing that once pride becomes arrogance, it all fails. Then proceeded to grow old or die, then younger generations forgot. It's important to remember that the empire of scale is past it's golden age. That hard times have bred hard people that have worked to create a softer world that then create weak people

Zeteri

Frustrating. It feels like Elijah needs to do more introspection if he really wants to protect those he cares about... But, we're finally to a point where I can enjoy the conflict and anticipation now that we are at the precipice. I want to see the payoff and consequence after so many chapters of doing "nothing" despite being told, shown, and already experiencing the events he's been warned of. I hope Elijah will suffer. And the deaths of those he chose not to lead will bite him.

InLucidReverie

Should have just said that either they run pr he kills everyone who pushed for such a suicidal decision and then they run anyway. What are they gonna do, risk their necks over it? Not 10 chapters ago he had seemingly decided he would take responsibility and nring the council to heel. The fuck.

Corey S

I think the issue is you’re comparing these dragons to dragons from different stories. They’re not the same and it has very clearly been explained in this story that these dragons are far from perfect. Also all of these dragons are demigods and basically children in the grand scheme of the EoS

Samuel Davis

TO me this is nothing more than young Nobles. We have had our share in our own world in old Europe. Literally the aristocracy would allow thousands to die over a perceived slight, its documented and verifiable history. If you dont wanna roll with "nobles" think billionaires son that was given everything and just doesnt understand that losing is reality .

Samuel Davis

But to address the concern of one-dimensional , I think many many dragons in the story have depth, Mano being one and others, just as a nation , they are prideful and dont believe they can lose . Sound like the old Roman empire to anyone ? It grew vast, but ultimately destroyed itself.

BIGG Chuck

Yeah this is being very flip floppy. Hes going to lead, now no one listens to him? Make up ur mind

Jon Lomax

I know it how you want the story to go. but why didn't elijah put his foot down more. without him they have no chance.

Jon Lomax

elijah should of just killed him ages ago. no one would of minded for that long

Littleboy3atu

These dragons are children. Even if they've been alive for thousands of years, compared to someone like Prosperity, they are no different than a baby. Take any human child and raise them in an environment of wealth, power, influence, and they'll end up the same way as these dragons. They need something like this to humble them, which is the entire point of Elijah's character. Someone that embodies what you described as a true dragon to show the others an example to follow after. As of right now, he is still seen as just an outsider half scale, but over time as he proves himself over and over again, he will have a very big influence on the Empire of Scale and hopefully bring the core values of dragonhood to fruition.

RonGAR

They are all dead ... just let them die. IDK what Elijah means by 'do our part' smh. Ahhh nope. Not gonna have it. I would be like "COoL, do as you please, You were warned"

Charles Nichol

First off, I've been enjoying the story. Thanks for the work. However, that was a very whiplashy chapter. First you make Elijah righteously angry and willing to crack skulls to force the dragons into line, but then, in literally the span of a few sentences and for no actual reason might I add, you have him do a complete 180 and act like he didn't just threaten to kill them if they did the very thing they proceeded to do... it's exhausting. Come on man, you can't have your cake and eat it too. Either have Elijah, the veteran survivor of countless unspeakable horrors, commit or don't. The dissonance breaks reader immersion.

granndfunk

Nick writes too fast to remember what he wrote lol

BookDragonling

"If it comes down to it, we run". It's obviously going to end that way. They should have run from the beginning.

Moses

What is this man. People trying to kill you and you’re still here helping them. And now he’s pretending like he won’t risk his life and sacrifice himself. What’s the point with the act of strangulating one guy and saying he won’t be dismissed anymore and they do exactly that and he says yes master and gets to work.