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I'm moving Sunday's double chapter to today. So, we're getting a second chapter today (to help with the cliff), but we won't be getting one on Sunday.

The unborn child writhed in pain.

Makit screamed, her face a rictus of agonized fury.  Her every muscle remained taut as she fought against the dull-eyed laborers.  It was a useless endeavor. She couldn’t hope to escape their firm grips.

And yet, she did just that.

Elijah barely noticed as she pummeled his head.  He hardly paid attention as she tried to rip his hand free of her belly.  In fact, he was so engrossed that he didn’t even recognize when Ok’tarik stepped in to hold her down himself. 

He took one side.  Two laborers took the other arm, while two more corralled her kicking legs. 

Through it all, Elijah focused on Dictate of the World Tree, and to the exclusion of all else.  If he’d tried, he might’ve been aware of his surroundings.  However, he barely had the wherewithal to think about such things. 

Because he wasn’t certain if he could make the spell work.

Like always, it had lashed out from his fingertips and grabbed hold of the unborn orc.  It cut through Makit without any issue at all.  That part was absurdly easy.  Yet, it failed to find purchase.  The tendrils of power – not unlike mycelial hyphae – wrapped around the deceptively large creature, penetrating deep into his flesh.  But it wouldn’t go any further.

Elijah used every tactic he’d discovered while growing Treebie.  He heeded every lesson he’d learned from ushering Fungee into a new realm of power.  He employed a similar strategy to what he’d used to transform the crab from a mundane beast into a guardian.

Nothing worked.

Not even when he wrapped his soul around the spell, weaving an intricate pattern of runes that should have lent it the penetrating power it needed.

Still, nothing.

Elijah began to despair, but he caught himself well before he let the frustration take hold.  Instead, he forced himself to look at it from the perspective of a scientist. The first step was to find the problem.  The second was to test various solutions.  And the final was to employ whatever fixes he discovered.

Easier said than done.

The orcish child was unlike any other creature upon which he’d ever tried to use Dictate of the World Tree. More vibrant than Fungee.  More enduring than Treebie.  And with far more potential than the lowly crab.

It was as if the unborn infant was already sapient, just that something kept it from realizing his promise.  Elijah didn’t need to be a Scholar to recognize the culprit, either.  It had already shown its hand when it prevented Ok’tarik from leaving Orveth Kaal.  Doubtless, the system had put some sort of limiter in place to hinder the growth of the orcs.

Knowing that, Elijah pushed his senses deeper into the orcish child’s metaphysical system.  The first few layers looked no different than any other orc’s.  The pieces of cultivation were there, but they were weak.  Barely perceptible. 

Elijah pushed past them.

Layer after layer, he delved – until he finally found a wall. 

It was inviolable.  Thick enough that Elijah couldn’t see past it, and more than sturdy enough to prevent Dictate of the World Tree from taking hold.  Instead, the ethereal hyphae crawled up the edifice like vines, creeping outward until they encompassed the entire thing. 

Despite finding purchase, they couldn’t overcome the system. 

The impossibility of that concept glared at Elijah, almost tauntingly.  Certainly threateningly. 

He refused to accept it. 

In his experience, impossible was just a word people gave to situations they lacked the power to overcome.  What might qualify for that label for him might just be a little difficult for others.  And for people like Kirlissa?  Barely an inconvenience.

If Elijah was ever going to transcend the system, he needed to stop playing by its rules.  If he failed, then it would be on him.  Not some arbitrary limit set by the system. 

So, he hit the wall even harder.  Dictate of the World Tree flailed.  It battered.  It tried to slither through the cracks.  Nothing worked.

Elijah dug deeper into his own soul. 

The second he delved below the surface, he recognized the inherent danger.  He’d experienced the repercussions often enough that he knew just how badly things could for him. 

He didn’t care.

He had set a task for himself, and he wasn’t going to let anything stand in his way.  Not the system, and certainly not his own fear.

Elijah went deeper.

And finally, he found something new.  Something unexpected.  Metaphysically, he stood beneath the branches of an enormous tree.  He didn’t need to be a genius to recognize it as the imagery he’d used for his cultivation system.  The ethereal organism was equal parts fungi, arbor, human, dragon, and beast – all held together by some unknowable factor that Elijah could only refer to as his spirit.

It was beautiful.

Terrifying, too. 

Those things shouldn’t have all existed in a single entity.  And yet, they did.  They represented every part of Elijah, with his spirit functioning as the connective tissue. 

He stared at it for a long time, unsure what to do.  Unknowing what it meant that he could finally see it in person, rather than as something imagined or a simple projection.

At the same time, he remained in that bedroom, his hand on Makit’s writhing stomach.  Chaos abounded.  The laborers struggled to keep her still.  Aside from Elijah, only Ok’tarik remained unwavering.

He wore his worry plainly upon his face.

He plainly didn’t fully trust Elijah, and for good reason.  The entire premise might’ve been necessary, but it was far from ethical.  Even success wouldn’t change that.

But it would help.

Elijah kept that at the forefront of his mind, dragging his actions to their inevitable conclusion.

Looking at that tree, he couldn’t help but despair.  Partly at his own ignorance.  Partly because it was so magnificent.  But mostly, because he feared failure.

Then, he saw it.

High in the branches, a single fruit glimmered, golden and powerful enough to outshine even the tree itself.  It reminded him of the apple he’d taken from the tree in the Hollow Depths.  Back then, it had played host to a giant spider, the off-spring of which he’d befriended.  He’d named that one Peter. 

That fruit had been a natural treasure, but this one was something else entirely.  Elijah could feel bits of his cultivation system embedded in it.  The flesh was his body.  The core – like an apple – was predictably his core.  The seeds were his mind.  And through it all ran his soul.

Just looking at it filled Elijah with need.  It was a perfect encapsulation of his progress, and he knew – he just knew – that if he took it for himself, he could discover something wonderful.

On the other side, if he left it where it was, it would serve to bolster every part of him. 

And then there was the final option.  He could take it, but not for himself.  Instead, he intuitively recognized that he could use it to help the child. 

Elijah knew precisely which choice he would make.  In a lot of ways, he’d already made it, and from the moment he’d suggested the strategy to Ok’tarik.  Going back empty-handed just wasn’t an option.

But what if it didn’t work?

What if it was too weak?

Elijah couldn’t accept that risk.  So, he decided to change the paradigm.  It was still a plant, after all.  And if nothing else, Elijah knew precisely what flora needed to flourish.

The first step was to shift part of his focus to a different aspect of Dictate of the World Tree.  Not the part that imbued an organism with a piece of the World Tree, but rather, the bit that held over from its previous incarnation and allowed him to manipulate plant growth.

He embraced it. 

And an instant later, a massive presence descended upon him.  The mere weight of it nearly drove him to unconsciousness, but he barely held on.  Soon enough, he realized the truth – he’d nearly knocked himself out by perceiving the full breadth of his own cultivation’s potential.

Humbling.

Terrifying, too. 

Elijah ignored it.  Instead, he went to work, weaving his power through the glimmering fruit.  As he did so, he climbed the tree.  He wasn’t certain if proximity was necessary, but he wasn’t going to take any chances.  By the time he reached the glowing, apple-like orb, he’d completed his task. 

It pulsed with potential, just like his cultivation.  But he’d tied it all into a knot so it wouldn’t be released all at once. 

That choice had been driven by pure instinct, but when he examined it, he knew it had been the right decision.  However, he also recognized that he wasn’t finished.  Far from it, in fact.

He had two more all-important steps left before he could use the fruit. For what, he still wasn’t sure.  He was flying by the seat of pants, acting as much on instinct as conscious thought.  He could guide the process, but at times, the implementation left him feeling like a passenger in his own mind.

Elijah also didn’t stop to question if what he was seeing was real.  It felt like it was, even if he knew it was only metaphysical in nature.  But he also knew it was a separate place from where he knelt next to Makit.

It existed, though.  Elijah was certain of that, which was enough to drive him forward.

After he’d finished with Dictate of the World Tree, Elijah cast Wellspring, twice in succession.  The first incarnation came in the physical world, targeted toward the child in Makit’s swollen belly.  The wave of vitality washed over the unborn infant, funneling straight into the baby’s unformed core.

Next, Elijah cast the same spell on the fruit, with surprising results.

Both drew against the Well of Life, but the pair of spells – one was physically represented, while the other existed in that strange world of spirit – connected to one another as well.

That connection quickly became a funnel, dragging the fruit’s essence through the Well of Life and into the child’s core. 

The system’s barrier shattered.

In the physical world, an explosion erupted, the shockwave destroying the walls and vaporizing the laborers.  Makit was spared that fate, but she couldn’t remain conscious.  As she went limp, Ok’tarik held firm.  Even as the explosion ripped the flesh from his bones, he never wavered.

Elijah was entirely unaffected.

Physically, at least.  Spiritually, it felt as if someone had ripped his soul away from his body.  The tree’s branches withered, almost as if they were dehydrated. The leaves fell.  The trunk became desiccated. 

Elijah shifted.  Not in the real world, but rather, in the metaphysical space.  He became an emerald-scaled dragon.  His wings of branches, leaves, and moss spread from his back, and he let out a roar.  Vitality flooded from his throat and enveloped the tree as he employed the Breath of Life.

The tree drank it all in.

And somehow, it survived.

Gradually, the fruit’s golden skin lost its sheen.  Then, it began to pucker.  It shrank in on itself, becoming smaller with every passing moment.  With that went a piece of Elijah that he barely knew was even there. But now that he did, it felt like cutting off both his arms.

Or having them ripped away and consumed right in front of him.

He wept.

He trembled.

He gritted his teeth at the pain.

Yet, he never let himself look away from the task.  He continued at it until the fruit was no larger than a raisin and twice as shriveled.  Only then did it fall, the remains disintegrating the second it hit the ground.  The grassy meadow trembled at the impact.

Elijah almost lost consciousness.  Every nerve in his body wanted to shut down.  But he pushed that away, resolving to finish the task.

With the system’s barrier gone, he could now do what needed to be done. 

And the bare hint of a core within the baby’s chest now felt like something far more solid.  Elijah embraced it, driving Dictate of the World Tree inside.  There, he imparted the tiniest sliver of the World Tree’s essence. 

But it didn’t go alone.

Instead, every single ounce of power derived from that fruit took hold of the core as well.  And before Elijah’s very eyes, it transformed, taking a rudimentary shape. 

Just as the transformation solidified, Elijah fell backward.  His hand burned with the knowledge of what he’d just done.  He barely had time to acknowledge that before unconsciousness swept over him.

It only lasted the barest of instants, but when Elijah opened his eyes, he saw only ruin around him.

But only a few feet away, Makit was still alive.  Her swollen belly was unmarked.  And Ok’tarik, stoic as ever, remained by her side.

More importantly, it only took Elijah a few moments to recognize two all-important things. First, the child growing inside her was strong and healthy.  Second, he pulsed with a level of power that should not have been possible. 

That was all the confirmation Elijah needed to know that what he’d done had worked.  Now, he just needed to figure out exactly what had happened and what it really meant.

Comments

Lucas Troyano

Did he just bestow a Dragon Core to the child?!

Demi

Did he just grant the orc baby a dragon core? Or maybe an Elijah core?

DrDankness

Wait... did Elijah just impart a dragon core on an orc?

Summas76

Pseudo-Transcendance?

Kevin Kruzan

Well, that's certainly going to have long reaching repercussions.

Mack

Definitely worried about the repercussions to Elijah from this! In terms of his cultivation / potential.

Dylan Smith

I think he just gave a baby orc a dragon core!!!

Moonstar Domas

Elijah gave a dragon core ( Elijah druid nature variant)

wollomollow

I wonder if the Orcs will be "The people of the dragon" in the future 🤣

Stregone

Baby Thor we already love you!!!!!!

Tsuris

I am probably going to get a lot of flak for this, but am I the only one who doesn't like these orcs? Elijah is going above and beyond, now to the point of literally giving bits of himself, to a group of sapients that neither care nor are remorseful of their warlike way of life and the utter consumption it turns into. "Beat up his former torture victim to be cool" Ok’tarik has yet to do ANYTHING redeemable. I felt more sympathy for the chained transcendent in book 6.

H R

Yep looks like he gave the baby a dragon core. Maybe druid version. It will have repercussions for his own cultivation system but I think it'll heal and become more strong eventually. Also that would be a hell of a feat for his legacy. Not to mention, the system wouldn't like him much now.

KyoDaDungeon!!

I shall wait and have a grand feast on Sunday

Flakes

Druid Core

thomas johnson

I think we all know this has nothing to do with orcs. Elijah instead wants freedom, he wants to choose to do whatever he wants. Just like the previous chapter. Remember Elijah beating cancer was considered impossible for him. Now with the system and magic he can or tries to accomplish the impossible. Touching the dragon tooth. The Gorveth pseudo world tree. The whale stomach. Elijah imposes his will on all let’s just be glad he is nature attuned instead of pain or war. Elijah is the guy in hp Lovecraft novels who survives an eldritch horror and gets curious instead of afraid.

Dastardly Daoist

Curious if the system will accept this as a feat of strength, or if the system will be pissed and punish him

Flakes

Irony of Irony the system recognizes the new Orc Species as an "Elder race" possessing a "Norm-core" verging on "Cottage-core"

kolberg

I am a bit confused as in who pulsed with power: ". Second, he pulsed with a level of power that should not have been possible. ".

Mr,Snowy

I personally LOVE cliffhangers so i was like "ok" with the advanced chapter but with this ending... GOD i love how you're doing this, the need for the next chapter is boiling inside of me, it feels like i'm about to pull of my skin AND I LOVE IT cy next chapter🫰🫶❤️‍🔥🥰😘

BIGG Chuck

I totally agree. Its hard to enjoy it when you don't believe in what the mc is doing in a story.

Tsuris

Its the baby pulsing with power.

BaguaBrady

He'll be fine and maybe even better off long term, fruits are meant to be spread

Midas

Yes I can understand him working with them so he can take the planet from the dragons but there has been nothing I have seen from them to give this level of himself. It feels like the Author really like Ok'tarik and so is forcing us along as we side with him.

Djfunfu

Yeah elijah is like : "hi most invasive and destructive specie in my part of the multiverse that everyone has warned me about and has never ever done anything even remotely positive I have come to sacrifice myself so you can continue to destroy everything for no reason except that guy there is sapient. This is totally something that will turn out well not like that time THAT EXACT SAME PLANET got destroyed for the same reason. Take everything I have and when i can’t defend myself and have nothing to give you anymore you will definitively help me instead of just killing me." The one singular time in his life that he does anything good for a sapient being has to be the orc that he just met and fought a few times. The entire planet is filled with beasts that he could maybe help but the druid decides that the orcs who by the way had already been defeated before the planet fell and were probably just spawned back by the system for the ancestral world are the ones he should help. Their entire culture revolves around "do things that any druid would hate". He keeps talking about the war elves like they are the proof that orcs can somehow become something good but war elves are probably the one race elijah dislikes the most after the wasps. But sure make a smart dragon orc it will turn out great.

BIGG Chuck

You forgot the one thing that will make that not happen... plot armor

Ryan

No, I agree. I feel like this is forced, especially with how tied to the tree that Elijah is. I feel like there is a missing chapter that adds context on this choice like contact with the druids from the nature gate or potentially loss of Elijah's side without the Orcs. Just something to justify all of this.

Davis

Nothing about the way these creatures are obviously enslaved and kept infantile by the system gives you pause? They are brutish and violent as a consequence of their enslavement by the system. I doubt this is intentional, but it’s a pretty good metaphor for the American Prison Industrial Complex. Abolish the System! ASAB!

Moonstar Domas

Elijah is that person so rarely asks or even cares if he should. His biggest question is, "can I?" And follow that with "what's stopping me? And what right does it have to tell me I can't" simply followed by " hey world tree hold my beer and watch this" lol

Moonstar Domas

The answer here is simply..... " Yes" lol

Dastardly Daoist

I wouldn't like it, but I could see it denying Elijah access to the system for going against it. Especially because it failed to kill him earlier.

thomas johnson

A habitual line stepper. My only issue is that he does not worry about these consequences until after he attempts something. The chapters of him regretting his actions or crying to others about how sad he is about what he did. I know this is a written character, but I believe that deep down Elijah does not care; he just wants someone to tell him it's okay. This whole taking over a world plan is nice and all, but he really is stealing the ancestral world of the dragons. Then whining about "Is this a problem? Did I do something wrong? Did I start a war?". All I am saying is if you are going to be a selfish asshole, then own it; make sure you are strong enough to fight anybody who has a problem with it. Like Imal referenced, "Who is strong enough to hold you to a standard?" I almost wish we had a scene where he was chastised or told no by prosperity. What would he do? Or is she afraid of Elijah transcending and the havoc he could create if she does not build an alliance now with him while she can sweet talk him?

thomas johnson

I think it is something similar to what prosperity did. Also remember the gnome that promised Thor a core from a long time ago. I hope the tree can grow more apples, as this seems to be how cultivation works. Maybe some members' cultivation systems are pushed in a different way. I would think Benedict's cultivation, which is a series of ritual circles, would mean that giving a core would be a s a result of a blood sacrifice; Elijah requires his tree to grow an apple. The fire dragon's cultivation would be similar to plucking a star from her solar system cultivation.

Tsuris

Yeah not really. While I completely agree that IRL the judicial system is f'd, I'm not going to project that sympathy onto a fantasy race in a litRPG story where everyone is shades of grey evil. We've already seen orcs that were free of the system's direct involvement. Elijah killed them in book 2 before they became a world-ending plaguehorde. You say the system enslaved them, but they are the ones choosing to do battle and be warlike, or their nature is. Ok'tarik didn't get himself democratically voted to ork warleader, he literally killed and absorbed the opposition with a tooth-spear he took from his former torture victim. Oktarik hasn't once sympathized with Elijah, only been browbeaten into an alliance. The closest IRL example I can think of is a bacteria colony. We don't kill bacteria for fun, we do it because too many bacteria kills everything else. The ability to talk doesn't establish the ability to be peaceful.

Zeteri

Ain't no way he GAVE A CORE as a demi god! That's got to be a unique feat! Krislissa will be dumbfounded. Beat chapter of the book so far!! Poor Makit 😭😭

James Faulkner

This kinda seems to imply that Elijah could single-handedly bring back the emerald Draconic druids over time right?? His core is still touched by his mom’s attunement, so if he gifts cores to members of his Grove then that combo should result in more emerald dragons.

KyoDaDungeon!!

He can't have given a core isn't there supposed to be weakness after if something

Lux Novels

Aren't remorseful? They literally are not sapient enough to register their actions so to blame them is like blaming an animal. And yeah they are warlike but so were/are orges, hobgoblins, trolls, war eleves, dark elves or drow or whatever they are called, and dragons too. And most of those are pretty aggressive and assholey as well so orcs would not be alone. The question is will they help in the millenia long struggle against the abyss while also not completely wiping out the other races, which is not a question of how warlike they are but rather how fast they breed which could be adjustedone way or another. If they don't breed so much as to literally wipe out tons of galaxies worth of other races, considering the dragons are just one race and hold at least thousands if not more, then they are not really any different from all the other races. Also considering the fact some elder races are dead the fight against the abyss seems to be one they are losing so an extra race to help against what seems to be the possible annihilation of the nine realms isn't the worst thing. If phoenixs and other races as strong and big as galaxies existed previously and are now gone I doubt one race no more powerful than dragons or hobgoblins will be that big of an issue in the grand scheme of the multiverse and its insane size and timescale.