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Martinowitsch

"Her arms were loaded with more plates of delicious food, and everyone stepped aside to let her bass." Shouldn't that be pass? Another one with an missing word i think: “Your will be done, my queen!” Captain Ahrsenen responded, bowing with his fist on his chest before the line went dead. I think "Your command will be done. "

Cornbread

It was an informative chapter. I was happy to know that Donkey Kong was still around in the future. I can hold on to my Nintendo 64.

GsG3n

I think the worst part is having to wait for the future chapters. Loving the arc of the story and the writing.

C. H. Darkstrider

Well, I will make my readers here a promise. Once I am able to take up writing full time, I will start cranking out double chapters of Project Prometheus every month, as I will have nothing but time to do so!

GsG3n

Speaking for myself can not wait for that to happen. Really do love your writing and story lines. I can wait, just keep up the awesome writing...

Michael56Smith

-- hurray for end of month stories! thank you, ... I guess you were just too busy this month for a teaser, ... oh well, we've got the chapter now, ... and yay for Donkey Kong still being around in the Darkstrider's time, ... i;-) ttfn

Jason

"Your will be done" is correct. It's just formalized religious phrasing. It means "Roger, I will comply"

Pat White

I think 2 people are going to find a really big ship. And then all he'll is going to break loose

Tom Ray

next chapter please...............................................................

Don Garnett

Loved the chapter it just felt a bit quick