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DeyCal1

Yes!! First!

C. H. Darkstrider

You beat out Cornbread and Michael! First person to do that in.... I don't know how long!!

Joe Topp

Thank you another great chapter

Michael56Smith

Yeah!!! ... I was beaten out, but I am still enjoying a delightful pre-election read, ... thank you! ... ;-) ttfn

Tor Einar Johansen

Another great chapter in this saga. And it looks like we get another plot twist again as well. All the twists and turns in this story has me on the egde of my seat every time a new chapter is released.

Michael56Smith

-- that nasty, piece of work, Charity has a sister, ... Lirianne, who works at a truly awesome club, .... I couldn't afford the establishments' cover charge let alone pay for anything else in the club, but I'd still love to go there, .... very descriptive, ... loved it, ... and while it was not covering our heroes, I found it quite interesting, ... ;-) ttfn

C. H. Darkstrider

Says who she works there? As far as being tied into our heroes, it will become clear soon enough.

Big Dude

Excellent chapter DarkStrider. Nice set of intrigue with the news on the FSS screw-up. Too bad there weren't any Jaesa bots that could have captured the wiping.

Cornbread

Another informative chapter and I appreciate grabbing the generator. I am hoping the Prime Technology has some nice advances to enhance the Darkstrider and Perseus. Also, it's been four years since we have seen the Perseus and the planet Talemkha. I am getting homesick.

Michael56Smith

yeah, I am curious as to whether Luminia has become a big sister yet, .... Can you say Surprise! ... ;-) ttfn

Michael56Smith

Well, ... when the couple offered to pay for Lirianne's missed shifts it was implied that she worked there, or somewhere, ... just my assumption, .... -- Oops, I reread that part, and it was the sexy Futa dancer that they offered to pick up the tab for, ,,, so it was not Charity's wonderful sister, ... my bad, ... ;-) ttfn

C. H. Darkstrider

It's Xylenne who works there. I thought that was how I had written that passage, but since there's a typo, I will be correcting that.

Michael56Smith

I really hope that Dagan Min's ships make it to Talemkha and the Perseus, along with the Darkstrider's crew, ... I am hopeful that those rogues and scoundrels too can get some sweet upgrades like the one that the good ship Darkstrider received, ... but without any 'Big Honking' Hades cannons, ,,, but with improved shields, comms, armor, a few somewhat better guns and more powerful engines, and possibly including a quite helpful AI, Jaesa or an upgraded Stanley, copy for each vessel, as well as a few squads of Sentry Bots for each ship, ... and maybe a set or two of those awesome remote controlled drone fighters for each of Dagan's vessels, .... yeah, that's the ticket, ... ;-) ttfn

Michael56Smith

--- Also, I wouldn't mind seeing a few more Allies jumping into the Telemkha system alongside of Alex and the Darkstrider crew, ... besides Dagan Min, perhaps a ship or six from the Khontarans (filled to the brim with lots of science types and engineers to study all the new tech), ... and perhaps a partial military Fleet (of older ships) lead by Commodore Ana Williams (with her hubby Engineer Graham Williams) of Veldhern's 2nd fleet, ... and also, maybe by the time of the gangs return, (with many months having then passed) they should find that many of those bright Artrucians, with Jaesa's help, could be flying a few new Corvettes and Frigates, as well as a couple new dropships all made from mined asteroids, and a few wrecked ships, ... making food deliveries planet side and also mining asteroids for more raw materials for Alex and his crew to build with, ... -- Commodore Tomisic might just end up with a powerful fleet to accompany his repaired Dreadnaught out into known space, ... ;-) ttfn

Michael56Smith

-- writing this on 11/28/2024, ... still about 10 to 20 more days until chapter #66 drops, .... maybe we'll get a teaser in a week or so, ... we'll have lots of fun times ahead, as our intrepid Darkstrider crew is garnering way more unwanted attention than they'd ever wish for, ... many intrigues and battles coming up, .... -- but soon they'll make the return to Telemkha and the Perseus, .... what wonderful things might have occurred during the crew's months away, ... while they were busy gathering supplies and materials to fully repair the mighty dreadnaught, ... -- those incredible survivors on the icy world of Telemkha, ... now had the time, knowledge and materials to do so much more than just make it through another day, .... they have both super-duper AIs, Jaesa (on the Perseus) and Ylena (aboard the recovered Ark), .... what might those Billiant Artucians have done during the Darkstrider's absence, ... -- Jaesa might have trained a few dozen of the Artucians into some support positions aboard the Dreadnaught, jobs like hydroponics, ... and some to pilot a few new mining vessels to bring in more raw materials for the ship and for the planet (domes), .... new Libraries and Schools run by the AIs to restore so much of the Ark's previously lost knowledge, .... and with the added / shared knowledge from the Perseus, the next generation of Artucians will have lots of hope and more options for their future, ... as well as having full bellies, ... yay! ... -- Welcome back Darkstrider, ... Happy Thanksgiving! ... ;-) ttfn

Don Garnett

By far my favorite of your stories. Can't get enough of this crew. Can't belive it's taking this long tonget back to the main ship. And once tthat happens an entire new story begins lol

Don Garnett

Especially once the queen finds out about the main ship and of course protecting her daughter and ththe baby

Tom Ray

Next Chapter please..............................................

Michael56Smith

... or come on teaser! ... please, .... ;-) ttfn

Tom Ray

Next Chapter please.....................................................

Tom Ray

Next Chapter please...............................................................