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Tales of the Wastelander Ch. 43 (Patreon)

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2025-05-05 03:04:52
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2026-09
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JeanMartin Freites

After all this time and buildup, Ben is officially a regulator. And not just that, Ylva and Byanca also had some much deserved recognition. After seeing justice being delivered it's hard not to think that this is very much the ending of something as well as a new beginning. However there are still a few cracks which Ben can't help but notice not to mention how he feels as if they were still things that could have been done since quite a few people escaped before they could get captured. It is understandable why he would feel this way considering everything that he's seen and done. But at least he is able to appreciate what was already done thanks in no small part to his women. Speaking of women, it was nice to catch up on Samara and her group. Catching up with her while she's taking a bath was much appreciated and it seems like she's really starting to feel her pregnancy even if it's pretty early on. She Khara have a rather nice time after she catches Samara up on some events. That's something that certainly took up quite a bit of time but I'm not complaining since I enjoyed it. But I have to agree with Chelsea with her assessment that she was tempted to check in on them in case they drowned. She and Khara most certainly have something forming between them and Samara tries to apologize for stepping in on it but Chelsea is quick to remind her that she doesn't mind sharing and even suggests doing it pretty soon. No surprises there but their time at sanctuary is coming to a close since they have to leave in a few days. And it seems Khara has her mind set on something as well.

Jon

I really enjoy this story, it's a great alternative while I wait for the other stories to catch up. I do have some major constructive criticism: Do you have an editor? If not might I suggest you get one. I have on more than one occasion been confused due to some parts in the story to me seemed rushed or mixed up. One point Gertrude was a regular human than the next she's Meludgen. Which one is it? Then there are the spelling errors, they aren't story stopping but they do distract from the immersion. Again I would like to say I love the stories, I came for the sex scene but now I find myself rushing them more often than not to get back to the story lol. So please take what I say with a grain of salt. I'm not a writer I don't understand the stress and obstacles that come with that profession. I also understand that you have a new born on the way or already here I can't remember lol. Well other than that enjoy your time writing and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

C. H. Darkstrider

Thank you for that. Small details sometimes get away from me and when I see them or someone points them out, I correct them. I don't use an editor, as I don't trust easily, considering more often than not, people have tried to steal my work and pass it off as theirs.