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Escape, imprisonment, or death?

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Randy

Thank you

JeanMartin Freites

The focus of the chapter was entirely on the events and that was a good thing. I especially enjoyed seeing the different perspectives of the players and how they reacted to a different events, especially the horde which Ben ended up unleashing on them. The dark wolves are some of the most important characters on this chapter considering the intelligence and loyalty they displayed by not leaving Bellona on her own while still making sure Ben and the others were informed of the situation. Safe to say that if it wasn't for that decision then Bellona would have been dead. And even if it was not perfect, Ben made a good call when it came to communicating telepathically with Bellona. The stash of weapons and grenades Ben found certainly were a bit convenient considering what he and the others had to face and I'm not sure how to feel about that. But at least he made goodies of the flashbangs and grenades. And the flashback with Samara was a nice way to end things off after a harrowing ordeal.

C. H. Darkstrider

Your analyses of my story chapters are as always, a delight to read. While the finding of the weapons and the like might be considered convenient, stranger things have happened in other circumstances.