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Spartan 52

Chapter 50! A great achievement and the story continues to develop. Many thanks for this and your other creations.😀

JeanMartin Freites

It was nice to catch up with Samara and her group even if it mostly consisted of a threesome between her Chelsea and Khara. It certainly took its time without feeling like it dragged And it seems like Khara is now able to pick up on Chelsea's pheromones in order to get a better read on her than she otherwise would. Samara is certainly craving some physical action at this point in her pregnancy and thankfully her friends were more than willing to give it to her. That being said, was she really craves is Ben's presence and I can only imagine how much more determined she is going to be to find him after this chapter. This was a rather small thing but I really liked The last part in her section, particularly when her belly reminds her of that life keeps moving forward. A pretty simple line but I really resonated with me for some reason. As for Ben's group , we certainly got to see the aftermath of his gamble and it certainly seems to have paid off in big ways. But also it seems like it was a bit of a double edged sword since anything that could be potentially useful was pretty much destroyed to the point of not being recognizable. At least the six of them and the reunited and Ben catches on to something that manages to survive as well as its weaknesses. Too bad that he was right when he said that what they would find was terrible. And don't get me started on what they may have potentially found since this may a very well overhaul their understanding of the world they find themselves in. So yeah, Ben really made good use of mob mentality in a panic to get rid of a genuine danger but the cost was certainly a bit high from what I can see. Not immediately mind you but that line you dropped after the end makes me think that this particular Gambit may not have a very good payoff in the grand scheme of things. Hopefully I'm wrong though. And before I forget congratulations on hitting 50 chapters on this particular story. Not much to say considering how you've actually gotten further in some of your other stories but this is the only one I really care about following so it's meaningful to me.