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The crew has returned and finds that much has changed...

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Michael56Smith

oh yeah, ... "The crew has returned and finds that much has changed..." ;-) ttfn

Jon

I definitely read that too fast, because it didn't feel like enough. Regardless amazing chapter. Not going to lie totally forgot about the explorers. I wish we got the other crew's perceptive but I'm assuming that will come later. By any chance will you make a list of characters at the beginning of the chapter? I'm starting to have a hard time remembering all of the characters if not that's understandable. I figure it would help with the story retention of other characters. Anyway regardless great chapter, and as always I request a SFW pictures of the species like you've done with your other stories.

Michael56Smith

In one story that I read a few years / decades ago, the Author routinely started one of his chapters, skipping this every few chapters, he began those chapters with a long list and description of all the story's key characters, ... to help keep the many, many characters straight in the readers minds, ... you are getting to that point / need in your lovely AU, ... making a list and checking it twice, ... keep up the fine work, ... -- OH, and I was feeling a little bit short-changed regarding the Darkstrider's return to the Talemkha system, ... we never even got to go down to the planet, ... and the introduction of Dagan Min all around, ... oh well, next chapter for that stuff, ... ;-) ttfn

C. H. Darkstrider

Well, seeing that people are wanting overall descriptions of the various characters at large, how would everyone feel if I were to say... create full profiles, complete with a picture, of each and every character in my stories?

Michael56Smith

.... SWEET!! thank you, ... -- so, who else besides the O'Neil's have I forgotten? ... -- Picture laden Profiles of all of your delicious lady characters, great idea, ... -- okay, you can include Alec, Mathias, Dagan Min and Stanley too, ... :-) ttfn

Jon

Let's gooooo!!!! Whooooo!! Huzzah!

Jon

Ok see I'm glad I wasn't the only one. Lol

Cornbread

I am happy for a updated profile of the characters. But, Please satisfy my imagination and make an image of the ships. Also, please think about improving to either a destroyer or cruiser. Everyone else has grown, I think the Darkstrider should too 🤩

Big Dude

Called it on the O'Neils' a few weeks back and I remember your response. I always stay tuned. Thanks for closing that story arc. I liked 👍 how 🤔 you worked the wife's historical memories into the thread. Wait... wut...? You are him?

Big Dude

I look forward to Dagen Min, his men, Solaktha (?), and her lover's reaction to this ship. BTW, how fast will this Perseus travel? Warp 6, 8, 10, 23?

AzureReader

I’m surprised that a few paragraphs were not dedicated to the shock and awe the other crews must have had landing on a prometheus class ship. I’m sure we will get to that, but by now the novelty must have worn off. There is so little mention of the other crews I’m not sure the main crew remembers them. It is a big ship but…