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JeanMartin Freites

Quite a lot gets done in this chapter. On one hand we have Jason fulfilling his promise with Mina and also meeting Ema and that results in him having anal sex with them both. The tiger spider that he used as a lookout is going to be having a more permanent position and I have to say that Jason wanting to keep a close eye on things a good call. Elizabeth extending Amy an offer to live with her was certainly a logical next step in the relationship and extending that invitation to her mom was even better. Looks like the church really is starting to make itself known in this chapter with the introduction of Chad. Jason definitely handled that meeting pretty well. That and I do like the introduction to Amy's mom and even if she was hoping to leave eventually because of the satisfaction with her life I still think that she went a little bit too quickly in my opinion.

JeanMartin Freites

Wasn't expecting a response seeing how long ago this chapter was supposed to.

C. H. Darkstrider

I am making a point of going back to my older work and cleaning it up, so it's up to today's standards.

JeanMartin Freites

That makes sense. I have to agree with this because while I do still like some of the stuff I'm seeing, I certainly have this feeling in the back of my mind that some things could be done better and I'd be lying if I said that I'm not hoping that the story gets better the longer goes on.

Warren Thomas

Seem like I have to send u a message to awaken the file