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Gaia's Champion Ch. 06 (Patreon)

Published:
2019-07-04 03:43:38
Edited:
2021-01-25 04:00:55
Imported:
2026-09
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JeanMartin Freites

The moments between mother and daughter were pretty good. Easily the best part of the chapter. Not sure how to feel about Luke's skill set because it feels like a little bit too convenient. I feel like Jason also having thieving skills also for the convenient where I felt like maybe improvising something with his powers would have been better but that's just my opinion. Having said that, I am glad to see that you're wasting no time and getting Eva into the swing of things. And now we also got to find out just what it is that Brad has on Carlotta. And that certainly is a big one. My favorite part of that chapter has to be the way that Jason eavesdrops in the conversation between aunt and niece. How many times do you wish to be a fly on the wall for a conversation and only to see something like that happen in a story.

C. H. Darkstrider

I may do something along those lines in my improvement of this chapter, when I get around to it.