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Cornbread

A well done chapter. Too bad there is no way to do a three part crossover.

C. H. Darkstrider

Nope. Though it would have been fun if I could manage it, but the universes are self contained entities. That doesn't mean I don't have other ideas in which I could do that!😉

Pat White

Loved it. Nice work

JC Armstrong

You need a character like Access from Marvel.

JC Armstrong

Now I am caught up here with all three stories, I'll be waiting for the next chapter to all three.

C. H. Darkstrider

Glad to hear you are enjoying the stories! Just so you and everyone here is aware, this is just me clearing my throat. I haven't even begun to truly sing yet!

Cornbread

Stop singing in the shower and get to it Sir :-)

prsstarid

I was reading the chapter thru again and came across some questions that I was curious about. When Ben's group is at Tired Grove, they talk to the gate guard. The guard mentions Gertrude and Bellona by name. Why was there not any reaction from Ben's group? Even Ben and Ylva know Tasya's story, so I was have expected some kind of recognition from their names being mentioned.

prsstarid

So this tonic that Trahl'khan is going to take will give him the same mental abilities as Gertrude and Bellona? Is the ability temporary or permanent?

prsstarid

Still wondering which direction you will choose for Ben and Samara to finally connect. The story is not clear on how far apart they presently are and the girls have not run across anyone that knows been or his exploits. They are only heading in the direction of the facility that he was in. But based on what we know based on the clues given... 1. Samara, Chelsea and Markie finding Ben on their quest since he does not know they are in his timeline. 75% chance. 2. Both groups crossing paths by accident. 20% chance. 3. Ben seeing the painting done (possibly signed) by Samara and starts searching for her. 5% chance.

prsstarid

One last question for you. Is Ben more of a Machinist or Engineer? The reason I am asking is that you said his classic car would come into play later in the story and there are two major problems with that being used in this timeline. Rubber tire replacements and fuel. If he was an Engineer, he could possibly convert it to solar but possibly not if he is only a machinist. Still not sure how they are going to make replacement tires. Possibly switch to tracks like a tank? The other option would be to salvage tires from somewhere.

JeanMartin Freites

Nice to see Zahn reunited with his family after all this time.