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Project Prometheus Ch. 40 (Patreon)

Published:
2021-10-15 03:30:40
Edited:
2021-10-26 18:15:21
Imported:
2026-09
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Michael56Smith

.1: Excellent chapter, loved it!,.. and with that said, let me ask you if you might have dropped a word or two in one sentence, about halfway through the chapter (in cyberspace), It was on page 16 of 32, in PDF, about 2/3 to 3/4 down the page, and the sentence was written a little like this,..: "The sheer (?) among (?) of data overload(ed) the pair of them, and they slump(ed) in their seats as they processed it all." And depending on the way the sentence reads with the word(s) plugged in, then you might need an 'ed' suffix or two as well,.. sorry to pick a nit on this wonderful installment, it was a lovely read,.. Thank you muchly! Also I wanted to say how extraordinary I found your Cyberspace 3 sum, with your sexy AI and VI babes making a Stanley sandwich,.. now that's great writing! send more soon, thanks! ;-) TTFN

Tor Einar Johansen

Great story and I have had a great time reading it so far. I also see the misspelled sentence that @Michael56Smith points out. Looks to me like it should read " The sheer amount of data overloaded the pair of them, and they slumped in their seats as they processed it all." Instead of how it reads at the moment like this "The sheer among of data overload the pair of them, and they slump in their seats as they processed it all."

C. H. Darkstrider

Problem has been corrected. Thank you both for the kind words and comments! More to come soon!