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Cornbread

Very nice chapter, I think there is a word missing in this statement: “Time to take these kids to school,” Alex growled, his voice echoing with Aetheric power. Dagan and his men stepped aside, knowing that to get in this man’s was suicide. Also, I was happy for that last scene because I was starting to think that Jenque was a sleeper agent.

Tor Einar Johansen

Hmm looks like things are heating up fast now on Prodosia and in the story in general. Will be interresting to see the future unfold when it comes around.

Michael56Smith

Yeah, Cornbread, I was worried when the Sheriff locked up his office to make love to his wife, that she would then do him in... thank goodness she was just being a horny mate and Not a cold-blooded spy/killer! And we got a sweet little erotic scene out of it too! ;-) TTFN

Dominic Janning

I love this story!! My only thing is it feels like it is drag along. Been on this planet for ever. Or It just feels that way. Could be just me. Just wish it word progress a little faster. Love the story otherwise.

JC Armstrong

Well after a few months I am all caught up and still amazing, as for the cliffhanger ending ... I'm used to how you write and its like watching old Batman reruns, LMAO