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Cornbread

I enjoyed the chapter, I am looking forward to learning more about the war.

C. H. Darkstrider

Which war? The war between the Fairies and the Pixies, or the Godswar?

Cornbread

Good evening, I was speaking of the Godswar. I did not want to put it out there and spoil somebody else reading the chapter.

Cornbread

I was always a fan of Greek Mythology and Apollo,

Brian

I haven't been enjoying this story much as of late. It seems to have taken a large turn around Chapter 31 with a huge influx of characters and massive info dumps. It feels that it is getting away from the MC with all these new people to flesh out. As I read this chapter there were many characters that I not only couldn't recall who they were, but didn't have the interest to go back and check. I hope it turns around in the future because I really enjoyed this story.

C. H. Darkstrider

I noticed this as well, which is why I have been taking steps to have certain characters/character groups fade into more of a background setting. The MC and his ladies will always be at the forefront, but others will simply come and go/fade into the background.