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Tor Einar Johansen

Hmm an unexpected but enjoyable read this chapter aswell as the rest of them so far. Makes me wonder about the possibillities for the future of the story, and what twists and turns are coming along later on. I do see a few possible plot lines opening up for the future indeed.

C. H. Darkstrider

A thinking man who sees the broader picture that is the story ahead! Good eye sir!

Michael56Smith

I enjoyed the multiple scallywags, and even the new Pirate Queen, ... missed our heroes in this installment but you gave us a whole lot of newer stuff to think over, and many story threads to exploit in the future, well done sir. ;-) TTFN

Splutty

Small tip/suggestion/question? Include the last paragraph of the previous chapter as the first one in the new chapter. With the time between chapters and most of us probably reading a ton of other stuff, that should be enough to give a little memory refresh on where in the story we are.