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UnderToker

I realize it has been more then a year since this was posted but i REALLY don't understand why Alex would think about using Aether to open a portal but Korsa who has already on several occasions healed people using Aether just treats her like a normal doctor.. This makes no sense to me at all!!

C. H. Darkstrider

Thanks for pointing that out! I will make and additional explanation and expand upon it in the next chapter.

Tor Einar Johansen

That was really shocking chapter to read in more ways than one. Prodosia joining the USA was something I expected to happen, but I did not see Zuzanna gjetting shot the way she did coming. It's going to be interesting to see the outcome of the trial against her father, for trying to kill her. I do hope he get's his more than Just fate in the end. Now we'll just have to wait for our band of intrepid heroes to gather the rest of the materials needed for the Prometheus, and hopefully gain even more allies in the near future.

Michael56Smith

OMG, and yes you Are a cruel Ass**** to leave us hanging by a thread like that, ... but a wonderful chapter otherwise, ... well done, ... ;-) TTFN

Cornbread

You evil writer for leaving a cliff hanger. A damn good chapter, you hit all the good points in this one.

C. H. Darkstrider

Well, since this chapter was supposed to be released last month, do you know what that means? Double chapter month!! Am I less evil yet?

Cornbread

Well played Sir, two thumbs up

Michael56Smith

Hip-hip, hooray! for that less evil Asshat, .... and yeah, now that I look back, that #48 teaser was almost a month ago, ... September 27th, ... so Double chapter month, a big dropper, woo-hoo! ... ;-) TTFN

Michael56Smith

.007: ... and the less evil, cliffhanger writing Asshat, has said the magic words, "Double Chapter Month", hallelujah!

Michael56Smith

.08: ... just quick question; it has been two months since the last Free site updates / chapter drops, ... you have made the two-month thing a pattern, ... so might the freebee's see a chapter or two in the next day or so? TTFN

C. H. Darkstrider

It's been submitted. It just takes Lit anywhere from 2-5 days to get it up there. Their average is 3, but they really need to learn to speed things up. Storiesonline had my new chapter up within a matter of hours!

Cornbread

I like the free sites for the old stories, but I would not be happy waiting for current stories to upload. I like how CH does it (have to keep the Evil Writer happy)

Michael56Smith

Be careful Cornbread, you might make him Cackle again, ... happy Halloween! -- Oh, and I just checked (10/28/22 afternoon PDT) and the #37 chapter is now also on Literotica, ... Yay! C.H. is like clockwork, ... ;-) TTFN