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Tales of the Wastelander Ch. 28 (Patreon)

Published:
2023-03-01 04:51:44
Edited:
2025-07-13 05:30:13
Imported:
2026-09
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JeanMartin Freites

I'm happy to see this story being updated even if the chapter ends in a cliffhanger. Jarx and his group finally hit their objective and encounter quite a number of surprises. Ben's group is a lot of doubt doing the best out of the three so far and our protagonist has quite the good time too. Samara's group on the other hand had the good fortune of increasing its number by one and the unfortunate circumstance of having to go into the unknown to escape a clear and present danger.

Tor Einar Johansen

Hmm anothe good read this chapter too, looks like there is some unanticipated beings coming into the storyline soon. Going to be fun to learn who the residents of the black forrest is in the future.

Cornbread

Do not encourage him with supporting cliff hangers, it uplifts his evil writing skills :-)

Splutty

Cliff Hanger Darkstrider is at it again, as usual :)

prsstarid

1. What new info I got from this chapter is that Ben and his company are only a couple of days travel behind Jarx and his crew. Visiting that corrupt town may cause some delays and widen that gap (time will tell). 2. The town that killed the four regulators needs to be brought to justice. So in this chapter Dohlrak says “Everyone knows that if a Regulator goes missing or is accosted, then other Regulators will come to handle things.” So how long ago were the four murdered and why has there not been justice? Dohlrak does not mention knowing about their deaths. What do Regulators carry, six shot revolvers? I am wondering how the town members managed to take out four armed regulators at the same time unless it was an ambush where they didn't get much of chance to defend themselves or maybe poisoned perhaps when they let their guard down and killed when they were unable to defend themselves? Are the weapons that the girls have capable of full auto? I know ammo needs to be conserved, but I would think the option to rock and roll would be exercised under life and death circumstances. You wouldn't want to get captured and the bad guys get the guns AND ammo that you conserved. 3. Ben now has the ability to block his thoughts or allow them to be read. In the previous chapter Gertrude and Bellona could not see into his mind. I will have to say I am anxious to have the groups merge and cross that plot point off the list. There are so many interesting possible story threads to explore and the story pace is a little slow right now to me. Things I hope you explore… 1. Bonding with new adult Dark Wolf's and the pups to grow into more of a threat to their enimies. They are a little to small to be considered a threat right now. 2. Taking out the Slavers in Detroit 3. Taking out the guy hunting Gertrude and Bellona 4. Ben and Ylva becoming Regulators 5. Visiting the Expanse 6. Visiting Vaults 7. Ben going back for his vintage car (not sure how you plan to solve the rotted tire issue or the gas/oil to use the car. BTW, it would be a travesty to convert it to an electric version. Just saying. What is the point of having a classic muscle car if you can’t hear the vroom. 8. Ben to start using his engineering genius to create devices to solve issues using from the before knowledge to solve problems for the friendly towns they visit or to defeat enemies. 9 Getting to know more about the mystery group the other regulator saw entering Detroit. Are they good or bad?

Cornbread

ok. You have put some thought into this and are valid observations. Let's see what happen doing the year.

prsstarid

I went back to read a couple of chapters back. The Merc's took the Southern route that bypassed the town and is little used (only know to the locals). I would imagine Ben's group will know nothing about it and will use the Northern route, which runs thru the town so will not run into the Merc's until they reach Detroit. So right now the three main groups are all heading to Detroit and seem to be on a collision course with fate. What about the bro's and girl that escaped the wild boys group before they were taken down? they were not planning to stay at their old home and I figured they would join Ben's and Samara's groups ? It's been a couple of chapters since their story arc was update and the distance between them and the two main groups are growing.

prsstarid

Can you please describe the size of the Dark Wolf pups in the story? I only recall you saying Adult Dark Wolves are huge in the story. So can you give us some scale? For Example, Adult Dark Wolves are the size of horses. The pups are the size of a full grown German Shepard. How long does it take the pups to reach adult size?