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Cornbread

So, there's a job opening for mayor? NICE I will give others time to read and spot the 4 errors :-)

JeanMartin Freites

Looks like the people in the forest have some complexity to them instead of just being murderous. Ben's group had quite the hurdle to overcome but they did so successfully and even saved a few innocent people. The coupling was nice and I appreciated the moment of peace Samara and her group have. I also liked the mention her pregnancy got. The ending was certainly a bit open since we had three of our newest characters start off to an adventure of their own. I hope they find some good stuff.

prsstarid

Well I got my answer as to how the town took four regulators down. Didn't say they were all there at the same time but poisoning would be effective singlely or as a unit. If this becomes known, it would be smart to train future recruits to prepare their own food and drink in unknown towns so this can't be repeated in the future.

prsstarid

I liked the way you did the battle against the screamers in this chapter. I was thinking of ways to deal with a screamer issue in the future when their numbers would be to great for this type of battle. I know Ben is an engineer but does he have any knowledge about the chemicals/materials to make explosives? I could see setting up a scarecrow that you could give some movement too and perhaps something like a whistling Pete firework that makes a noise to drawn a horde near and them blow them up with IEDs.