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JeanMartin Freites

Bro'khail certainly left quite the impression in this chapter. I am definitely interested in seeing what you have in mind for him. It was also nice to see Elyse have some decent direction for her life now that she's free. And while I definitely liked what she did with Magdalena I felt like it went for a bit too long. Also Jarx and his group are finally here and after some interesting interactions not only do they have a plan or at least the beginnings of one but Magdalena is also on to them even if she doesn't know what exactly they're up to.

Wesley Bauer

First let me start by saying I really like this series. I’m glad you are aware that Ben’s story has been diluted by all the side stories. The start of the series was more action driven but has lost steam with all the little character stories.