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A day of rest and discovery!

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Michael56Smith

oh wow! ..not an awful cliffhanger to be sure, ..... lots of spas, barbers, and shopping for fancy clothes, this chapter, .... and Doc Zuzie is definitely up and about, ... fun, but no fighting, so this chapter was a little different, ... and Captain Min's she-wolves got to experience a few upscale things for the first time too, welcome to the larger galaxy, ... -- This chapter showed up in the late evening hours in my time zone and it wasn't until about 3 hours later that I saw that it had arrived, ... so you and the Darksrider crew kept me up really late, ... but then, what's a little lost sleep compared to a wonderful story, ... thank you! ;-) ttfn

Tor Einar Johansen

Wow that was quite an unexpected cliffhanger in a rather calm and entertaining chapter indeed. I wonder how the Khontharan Empress will react when she finally learns the rest of Khorsas secrets too. Keep up the good work and continue to give us unexpected surprices along the way.

Cornbread

Michael do not encourage him with these late-night chapter drop. It is part of the plan for us to lose sleep on another fun reading. I am happy that you are keeping to monthly schedule with everything else you have going on.

Rene Bongers

Thank you for the story. This chapter has a strong cliffhanger. your evil side is showing. Have nice day.

Jay Emberhowl

Great chapter looking forward to the next one and great cliffhanger , curious how the others will take her secret when it comes out, also hope you had a good thanksgiving if you celebrated it

Tom Ray

More Please.......

Tom Ray

Next Chapter please..............

Tom Ray

Next chapter please........................

Tom Ray

Next chapter please.................................