Andrea wearing [Knight's Vow] (First Sketch) (Patreon)

Many things to correct here. The anatomy is wrong, the face is a bit wrong, and the hair is also a bit wrong since it is not that curly. She looks like a dwarf instead of a tall woman, haha. But, the steps are in the correct direction aesthetic-wise. 

I've already pointed out most of those things, and I'll work with the artist to create our tall and heroic Andrea.