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The weight of the heavens was crushing all within the room. 

Ouranos's domain of the heavens, the sky, and dominion was crushing the rioting dungeon's wrathful turbulence. But that fury and power was also being directed towards the two divines and their captains that were forced to hunch over under the furious gaze of the Primordial God.

"I am not amused... I am not a kind god... I am not a god who came down to this world to fix mortals heretical mistakes." Ouranos spoke coldly as his glowing eyes glared at Maxim who stood before the god only bowed at the knee as he kept his back straight even as blood leaked from his nose, eyes, and ears at the pressure weighing him down in particular.

"I allowed the Crafting Familia incident to pass by without censure due to your potential Maxim, I allowed you to enrich your Familia and prepare for your great quests... But you have tested my patience for the very last time."

The room remained dead silent as Ouranos chewed on his thoughts before saying coldly. "The guild has two iron-clad rules for the dungeon. Don't feed monsters, there are monster stones to make abberants as that will always lead to trouble as you well know... And lastly don't take divinity into the dungeon due to how it will make the dungeon itself riot."

"I am here on this lesser world to save it from the dungeon... Without my presence, the dungeon would continue to expand, it will continue to send unending tides of monsters into the world through the main entrance and the water tunnel and the entrances I myself was able to block."

Ouranos leaned in and there was a haunting pressure on his old male appearance as he said calmly. "I do not need to do this thankless task, Maxim... You are not special in all reality. With my power, and a couple of others. I could just... Remake the lower world, shatter this one, and let the dungeon's festering hate of dead amalgamated gods and monsters break down in the void of non-existence."

Zeus and Hera were both startled at Ouranos's words but in return, the sky god snorted and said flatly. "What? You lesser gods come down to the mortal world and just treat it as a vacation. While I must spend my every moment fighting the twisted souls of the dead gods and divine monsters that had been cast down to the mortal world during the conflicts between the gods in Tenkai?" 

Ouranos simply said bluntly. "My patience of sitting on this throne for the last couple of millennia... Is wearing thin. Maxim, your actions show a sheer disregard for myself and the other adventurers as well." 

Zeus finally spoke up while grimacing as Ouranos's divine might focused on him. "What will his punishment be?" 

There was a pause as Ouranos considered it before he smiled. But it wasn't a proud, or even victorious smile. It was a smile of satisfaction as Ouranos said. "I considered stripping your Falna from you for a period of time to make you feel worthless... But that is no different from killing you with the number of enemies you have, so I have already decided in either case how to hurt you."

Maxim frowned as Ouranos said 'hurt you'. It was clear that the Primordial God wasn't interested in merely punishing Maxim for his actions. No, this was a direct smackdown that was purely a punch to the nose in order to remind Maxim that he was still just a jumped-up mortal.

While Maxim was also still aware that even should he become an ageless divine after reaching level 10... He would still be laughably weak in comparison to Ouranos so he just squared his shoulders and even as his knees popped under the weight of Ouranos's gaze he said proudly. "Do what you will. I will not shirk punishment for my failure." 

Ouranos's eyes did not show any praise for Maxim's bravery or any positive emotion. Merely bored disdain at the mortal who had caused him so many issues but not enough that the issues had yet outweighed his future use.

"You will be stripped naked in the city square, and then while my domain of the sky crushes you into the pavement. You will be flogged like the man-child you are by the Empress. Who wouldn't have let the Amphisbaena ruin Melen and send four gods back to Tenkai." Ouranos finished Maxim's jaw tightening.

"Why is my-" Hera began hotly before she shuddered as Ouranos's cold eyes laid on her.

And without any inflection in his voice Ouranos said coldly. "Zeus is your pet project, isn't he? Keep him and his mortal toys on a better leash." 

With that Ouranos's voice deepened as he announced with his voice exceeding the meeting room and into the next room where the emergency Denatus was happening. "My patience will childish gods and their arrogant children has reached its end... Perhaps I myself should treat myself to a vacation and you can deal with the dungeon flooding the world with monsters."

Ouranos's form was then shrouded in darkness before the shadows retreated with his old form being gone and Zeus and Hera alike sagged in place as Albion stood up and the elven beauty gave Maxim a bland look and said.

"Well, Thunder of Jupiter. Let us get this show done with. I have better things to do than beat a human child who did such stupid things... But then again maybe there is truth to the worst of the elves saying humanity never live long enough to have any true wisdom." 

Maxim himself stood up with a snort of steam escaping his nostrils as lightning cracking between his hands before he relaxed and said coldly. "I am only fifty years old and at the edge of level nine... You are over five hundred years old and are still level nine." 

An imperious eyebrow rose at Maxim's words before Albion smiled coldly and said. "And yet, I might as well be putting you over my knee like the disobedient child you are with how you are a tenth of my age. Come now little Maxim, I have to play at being your disciplinarian in front of all of Orario." 

Comments

Dat Man

Jake better kill that bastard! He deserves much worse!

juugo

Am just worried he might just be into that shit

placid

Really? That's all the punishment he got? Weaksauce

Orchamus

Truth, but then Sky Daddy don't got time for this stupidity as he said, so he's gonna humilate him then move on.

andrew rousseau

Yeah, quite frankly thats seems like a slap on the wrist considering the lives lost, damage done and gods sent back to tenkai

Azazyel

Other than utterly humiliating Maxim what greater punishment could Ouranos give him?

SilverWolf

Thanks for the chapter

placid

All you have to do is look at myth and divine punishment. Athena turned Medusa into a gorgon because posiden graped her. The cain and able story, Adam and Eve being thrown out of paradise. Being stripped and whipped in public after the destruction of a city and FOUR gods returning to heaven... Do you see why we think it's weaksauce now?

Loghead101

Heh, that just gives Jake the opportunity to actually punish Maxim. I’m thinking Rulebreaker to completely destroy the Falna of another so they all have to start from scratch.

Abyss458

Cripple him de level him by a level something that actually matters something that would count as a true punishment

Hmm is it time

Thanks for the chapter looking forward to more.

Azazyel

All those biblical curses also run the risk of making Maxim un-usable for Ouranos's own goals

Monkey

Crucify that Maxim bastard and mating press the arrogant elven queen into oblivion. Bitchslap that cuck Zeus and backhand the control freak Hera. You can do it Jake I believe in you :P

placid

Right now, maxim is basically the primary antagonist, even more than the dungeon. I get it's good for the story, but this punishment has so many negatives it's crazy. Punishments are made so the guilty party and society as a whole learns a lesson. Tools(adventures) are only useful if they do their job. Maxim hasn't ended any of the three great beasts yet, so the only thing going for him is being level 9. His actions caused the end of the posiden familla, which while not as strong as Zeus or hera, was still a powerhouse.

ZeroLink21

Have to agree with azazyel trying to take away a level up or something of that nature would probably be like trying to peel a grape with a bastard sword from across the room considering how I think the falna works so if you can't take away his levels then the next best thing would be humiliation especially someone as prideful as Maxie boy

DNAjester

50 is a tenth of 500 not a fifth

Iori Daemona Angel

Just kill the fuck up, it's gonna bit them in the ass.

Evilhippy

Jake: You think I want that mess?

RiZan

Probably a time out from accessing the dungeon would hurt more. From my reading, Maxim is in a hurry to level up and that's driving his decisions. Trying to make the Crafting Families in line and making a powerful monster by feeding stones to fight is all in service to that goal, by restricting his access from those strong opponents would be devastating compared to this public humiliation. Like what is showing off his level 9 Greek muscles and being Whipped by an Elf is supposed to be for the public? That would rather be demotivating then be cathartic.

Daniel Foley

He didn't just end one Familia, he ended four Familia's with four Gods being sent back to Tenkai, and I think Maxim is still a Level 8, close to becoming Level 9.

LT_Ryuu_X

Fucking stupid punishment. Would think that he would actually punish him not just make it an embarrassment day for him.