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Maiden of Milk: Clara Side Story Update Surprise Week 9 (Patreon)

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2022-09-27 14:28:26
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2026-06
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Everything here is a curveball ! Everything! I know I said Maiden of Milk was going to be the next release, but actually it's an extra long week for Clara.

This one was a bit of a rush job, so bare with me. I hope it's enjoyed, let me know what you all think.

I know it's been quite a bit of time so I hope this is enough to make up for it.

IT WAS ME CLARA

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dan

i'm a bit... disappointed?

Varlin

Decent but a bit saddened no BE in the last 2 updates.

dawnbreaker

Ok so first off some issues I ran into while playing. During week 4 when Clara asks you about what you do with your free time if you answer seriously once that conversation is done it jumps into the silly response conversation. Seems odd to me to have that happen so perhaps that’s a bug? You could have intended that but it doesn’t seem like it. Next in week 5 after Clara comes back from her first bathroom break there’s some dialogue that’s referring to her leaving to the bathroom even though she’s coming back. Which I assume was supposed to play before she went to restroom. Also starting in week 5 till the end of the game Clara’s top remained permanently see through. Which I’m guessing is not intended. During the conversation with Clara where she asks the MC questions about himself I find it odd that if you tell her you grew up in a posh part of town she refuses to let you help her at the end of the night. Despite the dialogue from that choice suggesting nothing off about it and the rest of the responses being to her liking. So not sure what the intent here is. Lastly there were some grammar mistakes throughout that made sentences be slightly off since there would be a word here or there that was incorrect Now for my thoughts, I’d have to say I’m disappointed and confused. The first 5 weeks are fine outside of the problems I mentioned before. Don’t have any real issue with them and honestly my problems kind of center around Mahi. Firstly that out of nowhere Clara has a crush on her that she mentions during her second trip to the bathroom. Which at best comes off as out of place or at worst makes Clara come off as if she’s toying with the MC and leading him on. Which doesn’t seem like the intent especially when the MC is told not to toy with Clara’s emotions. Next is the fact that during the mall chapter the MC is seemingly in love with Mahi and even fuck buddies it seem from my understanding. Despite the fact that there’s been barley any interactions with her. Even when Clara couldn’t make it and you’re left just to chat with Mahi nothing happens to seemingly suggest this change. Again it’s mainly her just asking about your relationship with Clara and to not toy with her. Outside of that I rather liked the mall chapter. It was cute and sweet. The follow-up date with Mahi and Clara however made no sense. It’s out of place and feels like you had 2 different stories in mind and they somehow got merged with each other. Since based on what’s been established it just made Mahi come off as an asshole. Since from your few interaction with her she’s playfully teasing the growing relationship between the MC and Clara and again saying not to fool around with her. Only for Mahi to ignore her own advice and give the MC the middle finger. Sorry for the long post but I wanted to give all my thoughts since it left me confused on what exactly your trying to do with the story.

159qto

It wouldn't even load past chapter 6 for me...