my fanfic pet peeves (Patreon)

hey hey, in case you can't play it here, this is the video on youtube <3 just want to note that i'm not bashing anyone because everything I say is something I have done so really this is all a big self-roast *at some point I'm talking about how sometimes if the mc needs crucial information you can cut the conversation short, I think I didn't explain it that well, I meant to say that you don't always have to write an entire conversation from start to finish (regardless if it's crucial info), you can just omit the more on the nose parts like 'hey how are you' etc, and cut to the 'so what happened?' if you want to get to a certain part of the conversation.