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The follow-up to https://www.patreon.com/posts/what-should-i-do-78439984

The goal here is to develop a way of succinctly describing a story. Better communication, better awareness of context, better content.

Theme

Exploring the line between pleasure and death.

Premises

Premeditated - a girl ideates/fantasizes and plans for her own consumption.

Spontaneous - a girl encounters a situation where she can choose to be eaten, and being caught up in the moment, slides on down.

Self damnation - a girl could be facing a deadly peril, but after experiencing it she grows to like it so much so when a solid chance at salvation occurs she would either sabotage it or willfully ignore it.

Seduction - an innocent woman learning, throughout the story, about her masochistic and depraved side and willingly succumbing to her newfound desire for pleasure, knowing it will lead to her death.

Dispositions

begrudging - hates how much they like it

disbelieving - can't believe it's happening

fearful yet convicted - the fear adds to the arousal

enthusiastic - loves that it's happening

fulfillment - loves that it's finally happening

Tone

Casual - it is an accepted part of life

Silly - nonsensical

Ritualistic - there is a serious, intoxicated 

Dark - there is a wanton feeling

Setting

Fantasy - dragons, huntresses, and other medieval elements.

Modern day - inside, outside, the world as you know it.

Futuristic - Unreal elements in a modern setting.

Sci-fi - full on space travel, aliens, etc.

Angles

Perma vs revival

Legal vs illegal

Solo vs group

Gratuitous elements

Incest

Sex

Power dynamics  - master/servant, professor/student, etc

Drugs/mind control - they make you feel good!

Cooking - dolcett elements

"Final meal" - like the end of aunt cass

Character

Curvy - tarisa

Hourglass - most of the recent characters. believable, but mwah

Petite - skinny and oh so delectable

Hair - this surprisingly affects render times, a lot.

Personality - how they should be written

Digestion

Pleasurable/Painful/Mix

Graphic

Implied

Immediate/Progression

Comments

Sithlord-666

Premeditated, enthusiastic, Sci-fi, Perma vs revival, Cooking, Hourglass, Implied

John Miller

Spontaneous, fearful yet convicted, casual, modern day, perna, legal, soloish (one at a time in a group of volunteers) Sex, incest, final meal, Hourglass MILF with auburn hair- indulgent mother or aunt with a hidden kink, immediate progression (as in melting away)- pretty much my take aways from Dunk Tank 1 and a request for Duink Tank 2, Thanks.

Him Dellen

Orgiastic sacrifice themed, Premeditated, fulfillment, ritualistic (ie giving themselves up in a sexually charged sacrificial ritual), fantasy, perma (with emphasis on the finality of it placed on the act), legal, group, sex, petite, black or red hair, submitting willingly and ethusiastically, mix, implied, progression

FootFeetSoles

Premeditated, fulfillment, ritualistic, modern day or fantasy, solo vs group, INCEST PLEASE!, petite and pleasurable playful mix

pino

Spontaneous ;begrudging ;Casual ;Fantasy ;Solo vs group; Lesbian Incest;Petite ;Pleasurable then Painful .

Shadow Arxxy

Premeditated, fearful yet convicted, casual, modern day, perma, petite, redhead, pleasurable then painful.

Tarvear Indoril

sponataneous, enthusiastic, casual, modern day, perma, final meal, mix, personality, graphic

hunnter

Spontaneous, Enthusiastic, Casual, Fantasy or Modern, Permanent, hourglass figure, graphic digestion. Also incest - particularly sister/sister or mother/daughter - is always a favourite! Also, more panels for the digestion scenes would be ACES, with more shots showing the girls slowly dissolving away, but I realise detailing digestion in 3d must be really difficult/time-consuming with all the muscles and bones and stuff ^^; Honestly though, everything you create is absolutely fantastic :D

gentleman_sinner

self damnation, fearful yet convicted, dark, futuristic, perma illegal solo, cooking, petite, graphic digestion with mix of pleasure and pain, progression. Hoping for a snake, it;s been awhile since we've seen a snake. Thank you for your marvelous sexy art!

TSG

Premises: Seduction by powerful sexy monster Dispositions: fearful but aroused Tone: Dark Setting: Modern day Angles: Permanent, solo or group Gratuitous elements: sex stimulation with tongues and tentacles Character: Thick or Petite Digestion: Pleasurable/Painful/Mix, Graphic, Progression

Observant Fox

I'm a huge fan of willing, but with a little bit of fear to add spice. I feel the best state of a lady getting eaten is arousal mixed with desperation to best wring every ounce of pleasure from her frame. As such: Premise: Seduction/Self Damnation. Also spontaneous, but the first two are my faves. Disposition: fearful yet convicted/enthusiastic. Tone: Ritualistic/Dark Setting: all four Angles: perma, group Gratuitious elements: sex/cooking. Not all the time, but these would be my choice. Then again, all these options are delicious when applied properly. Character: Personality/hourglass/curvy. As for hair, ever considered a bald character? Digestion: pleasure-pain mix, progression. Thank you for asking these. Looking forward to your future work! You are seriously fantastic.

Red Dog

Premediated, enthusiastic, casual, modern day, revival, sex, hourglass, long hair, pleasurable.

bored one954

Incest, rape, premediated, enthusiastic, casual, modern day, revival, sex, hourglass, long hair, pleasurable, mind control

EliteVorrior

Hi there! I'm a bit late responding to this, but I love your work and I figure it couldn't hurt to give some input. Seduction, fearful yet convicted, casual on the part of the pred, but ritualistic on the part of the prey, fantasy and modern day. I love revival stuff because I feel like it lends itself to really fun repeated willing prey characters, but you really have a knack for drawing me into your perma scenarios. I really like group vore, and especially prey fucking each other or their pred at various points in the process. I love sex, power dynamic, and drugs. I like for digestion to be slow and pleasurable.

Klaven

Spontaneous/self damnation/seduction, begrudging, ritualistic/dark, any setting, perma death, solo, incest/sex/final meal, petite, pleasurable/painful/mix.

Greenbagger

competition between preds with the willing prey choosing who gets her, and/or pred contest for "pred I'd most like to get eaten by" with 2 (or more) preds showing their most enticing maneuvres. Winner gets, you guessed it, the girl.

pino

I really need a story with two girls where one wants to go down and the other doesn't. but in the end he is seduced by the other girl into letting himself go down. and the two console each other kissing insade the stomac

655321

Love all of the works - especially feet-first please (love watching the look on their faces as it happens), but here's my answer to your question: Spontaneous, begrudging/disbelieving, dark (but more light in images please), Settings - any, group, incest/cooking, petite, Pleasurable/Painful/Mix. Oh and one more Gratuitous element if possible (as my member name implies) please add rape.

Jason S

Premeditated, spontaneous and Self damnation. Enthusiastic and fulfilment. So long as they are willing and enjoy it. Ritualistic and Dark. Final meal. Curvy, like the girls from alien culture and summoning area. Pleasurable/Painful/Mix but please show more with aftermath instead of just a splorch if it's not to difficult to render. Delicious Conceit comes to mind

Olias T. Olias

I'm less keen on the "splortch" sound and more keen on the "muffled screams" that turn into "horrified and frantic screams" as the victims willingness becomes a dawning realisation of impending slow death and agony. Implied horror seems to have a more lasting effect in the mind. Some of my favourite stories visually, have included a voyeur element with someone watching. Backroom, Decision (i particularly liked that one), Dorm Room Dessert (would be cool to see a follow-up of that, where the TA is watching the video of Ali being eaten then deciding that's what she wants, too), Off The Street and finally Eatright 3 (which brought me to your webpage on Dev Art and i hope you'll finish one day. I'd love to see the twin finally pushing her sister forcefully into the plant and watching her be digested. maybe taking some sexual gratification from it. Would also like to see some Dolcett oriented stories every now and again. A cookery show....? Maybe a willing/sedated victim watching parts of their body being eaten in a spin-the-wheel competition... A little Hannibal style... Thanks for reading. It's always good to see what new and fiendish ways you have found to devour people =)

Chezzer McCloud

Yeah...pretty much exactly what Olias said above. Would absolutely love to see a Dorm Room Dessert - Part 2. Eatright 3 from Deviantart was also how I first discovered your works and became a fan.

ReaperLoveArt

I think they should touch themselves more when they are being digested in the stomach

Sporf

I actually have something else I want to add. One of my favorite interactions is when the girl was not planning to let the predator finish her, but then decides that for whatever reason, it deserves to have her. Maybe because it managed to get her ass all the way in, or just because it worked so hard. So, she lets it swallow her and finish her off. Preferably slowly.