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Hey all!

One of my original goals on Patreon was to improve my writing, but a visual novel is mostly dialogue.  This means I miss out on other stuff in regards to writing!  Starting in January this year, I told myself that I would write a minimum of 250 words a day in some other story, and the first one I did was based lightly on an idea I had for a little RPG visual novel type game (which, coincidentally, is what Chester uses as assets for his project!).  

Since it happened to involve a Minotaur, I figured this month is a good time to share it!  So, here's a little story I wrote through January.  My end goal is to write a handful of adult short stories like this and publish it as a collection one day.  Definitely NSFW!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1viYn95CjcUZ47yASposQ_y-91ik1RZl7dMZDUQNFpco/edit?usp=sharing

Art done by my man, Wolfstar.

If you guys enjoy it, let me know.  If you hate it, tell me why!  I have a lot of work to do in regards to improving my writing, so all feedback is welcome.  I've already moved from this one to another about a Werewolf, so I'll post that one when it's done, if there's interest in these.

Thanks everyone!

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Brian Damiani

I LOVED IT!! Despite some spelling errors, it was very well written! Thank you for this wonderful surprise!!!

Damian Andrew

I love it! Its not to cheesy and just the right amount of sexy. Can't wait for the werewolf one now.

Koko

Really good story tho, would like some stories like this from time to time, nsfw or sfw

Cuddlepaw MAL

hmm i don't have any issues with the story, wording or pacing. i was hooked from start to finish 10/10 Just super jealous reading all of that wishing it were me as i scrolled with one hand >:P can't wait for the werewolf story next :3

Macavity1103

haha, hot dayum!!! I need more of this in my life <3 Really great story!

Funnyguy1995

I’m so jealous, why can’t I have a Minotaur lover. This was very interesting and I would like more please and thank you.

timothy ballard

It was good, honest opinion though, one thing I like about extra carricular is that it's not about the sex its about the relationship. So this leaves me wanting more of the in between, after they decide to get along and before it turns sexual. I know it's just a short story but it "felt" like it could have been more so the fact they get right to it disappointed me

Davy Bogaerts

I LOVE IT! i need me one of those baths XD

Lord Memnar

Always enjoy your work. Spelling aside isn't that big a deal with me so much until the final product.

CosmicNoodle

I loved this! Honestly I wanted more! You add enough details that I felt like I was experiencing the labyrinth but not too much to where I was bored. The sex scene was very hot and the magical bath was a perfect touch. I got hard so mission accomplished right!? 😂

Jim

Really loved that story.

jay

It was very well written indeed. There were a few errors here and there, mild spelling and grammar issues, but the story flowed nicely. Your writing shines through as it does in Extracurricular Activities. As a writer myself I can relate to not writing much and needing to keep at it. The thing is, it's like riding a horse. You need to keep at it, exercising the muscles or you'll get stiff. Keep up the excellent work!!

Gaffgarion

This one pushed some nice buttons! <3