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This was the second story I had written with my exercises.   I finished it a few days ago, and had started it right after the minotaur one.  The art here was done by Ghangaji,

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rrHip9x9yD5_0rgZw64MKj-1DkjIbL6kidYcvJxN-ps/edit?usp=sharing

Let me know what you guys think!

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Vaegr

WEREWOLF DATING SIM WHEN??? That aside... Gorgeous work!

Macavity1103

Yet another super cute story:D I really enjoy these! Good work

phillip lynes

werewolf dating game could be fun and great story and great art to go with

Nox

Aww, what a wonderful cute story Dyne! I hope you make a pt 2 :)

Koko

Was pleasantly surprised that you posted another short story! These stories and the updates for the Extracurricular Activities made it worth my while in this Patreon. Thanks for the short stories!

Adam Even

While the overall story was good and I liked the characters, some moments aren't given the set up, time and appropriate atmosphere to really drive the story home. The main issue I think is we're being told a lot, but shown little, like the werewulf husband is a complete surprise, but not in a really good way. And the build up to the reveal was so quick, no suspense, or real mystery, just having them ask him if he's his husband and him saying yes doesn't invoke disbelief, I was just left thinking wait he had a husband? I liked the story, but I was left a little dissatisfied with how it was told. But I know that you can do better with time and I'd love to see where this is going

Team WOLF

A werewolf tale! Somewhat biased towards those and once again you created a unique and interesting world that for some reason made me imagine a steam punk world similar to WoW. Advanced yet still knights and swords etc. Love the werewolf take on giving him his sanity back and reclaiming his life rather than being a monster controlled and lost to his new self.

Timothy

Yass!!! Loved the story, need to read more. I'm with Daryl in the whole I won't be sleeping until my husband returned hehe.

Serph

I really enjoyed the story, my only complaint comes from the switch in perspectives. I felt unsure frequently about who I was in the story due to the switching of characters having no obvious transition. Other than that though it kept me engrossed the entire time. It would be nice to see a role reversal for your next story. The monster topping is fun, but it’d be nice to see the human top.

RTK Wolfy 94

I'm enjoying these short stories Minotaurs and werewolves are some of my favorite mythical creatures. If you don't have an idea for your next story WolfBite how about a Dragon I like to see what kind of story you can do with that, just throwing out ideas for ya you can do what you want. Also these first two shorts deserve a second part they end on a cliffhanger just a thought to keep in mind for the future.

Myneghon

Honestly loved both this and the Minotaur story. You managed to make me feel a lot of empathy for the protagonists and the love scenes had me drooling all over the keyboard. I was left wanting more and with a lot of unanswered questions at the end of both, which is always a good sign of a compelling narrative. If you were looking for some constructive criticism, I would say the pacing is a rather brisk and the world-building is a bit too vague to provide the story a rock solid foundation, but this is understandable to prevent a short story turning into a novella. Please keep up the excellent work, the writing and characterisation is one of the things that makes Extracurricular Activities really a hit with me.

CosmicNoodle

Another fantastic short story! Keep them coming!

Dan Away

Well written and imaginative short story. Looking forward to your next piece!

phillip lynes

Here's a thought I had Extracurricular Activities werewolf style