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So, I wrote this story last year and Gavel drew one of the characters for me.  I finally got around to revising it, and it's ready to share!

Follow a short story of our dragon, Prince Aetrian, and his human servant, Jarrod, as they are put through a tale of trials and tribulations. 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/17hBUKzeEMQ-2DxJzHD8hmWleSjfbvCLokr375vvDnbs/edit?usp=sharing

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Mooncactus

This was a really great fantasy/love story Dyne. I loved the world building elements throughout the story that give hope for the characters continued story.

ReddPanda

I loved it! I'd actually wouldn't mind to read a full book about these main characters and then some! I was engrossed by the world alone in the story. And even the side characters were interesting! I already have a few ideas of what could happen next in the near and far future for this story. You've really inspired a fella!

Adam Even

Hmmm, I know this story was made over a year ago, but would you be open to hearing some critiques I have with it?

Rookieblue

I agree with PolarPanda, I would absolutely pay for a full book based off of this story! The characters are so well written, excellent work!

Damian Andrew

The story was great for a one-shot. If you were to make it a full book I would like some characters and events more elaborated on but otherwise, it was a great read. 9/10

Assistant | Adventurer

About to sit down and read through this, but before I do, I have a question. Extracurricular Activities is AMAZING, and I can't imagine the work that has gone in to making it what it is. Some time ago, I saw an update schedule showing which route would be updated on which date, and I noticed that Richard's route wasn't mentioned. Since you're so busy with a lot of things at the moment, I was wondering if Richard's route has been put on the back burner for now...? Dozer will forever be my all-time favorite, but I'm excited to see what Richard's route might bring... Keep up the great work, Dyne! Can't wait to see what 2020 will bring!

Sebastian Serigne

It left me wanting more!! It feels like it shounldnt have been a short story ! I really hope to hear more of this tale!! I want to know so bad what happens next!

Arthur Charles (edited)

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2026-09-06 00:00 I've only just glanced at it, but as a fellow writer and someone who wrote his own stories for many years (alas, IRL fairly crushes the motivation right out of me, these days), I wholeheartedly approve of sharing this, and I know how much time and work goes into writing!
2020-02-12 03:35

Nox

You're such a good writer! I hope we get to see some more of these two in the future.

Jhon

Literally the best story I've ever read, I would love to play this in a visual novel