Narration Changes? (Patreon)

So, I was thinking about changing up how some of the narration is done in the novel.  For example, if someone were to present you with an item, I would use internal dialog with him speaking of obtaining said item.  For example..

You - "Oh, he handed me some money."

Instead, I was thinking about just adding some third-person narration so it would really just say...

"You received some money."

What do you guys think?  I feel like adding some extra narration instead of having it be just internal dialog could add some extra... meat to the story.