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Release Day!!! (Patreon)

Published:
2017-12-13 18:31:03
Edited:
2019-05-04 13:11:04
Imported:
2026-06

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I'm so happy today to be able to release Chapter 1 of my new game "The Adventurous Couple".  

I've worked hard on this game and I'm pretty proud of how it is shaping up so far.  I hope that all of you will enjoy it as much as I do.  

I look forward to hearing from you and getting some feedback!

PC Link - https://mega.nz/#!x3hzUKSa!ajhnrzSz7AAChE-XittJ_DlGgxdQuOIj-htQ_q2gQ_I

MAC Link - https://mega.nz/#!Y6hlBaLJ!HQZLwSqd_Vovq3NSDe2kEUk24lHh62iawSlfOkVt3dI

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Hatchetman

There's a lot of good things about this game but the pacing of the story is way too fast. I love the "texting your wife at work" part of the game. Honestly the entire first chapter could have just been about that. You could be working from home and have to decide between texting your wife, working on your work project, and doing "research". Your wife works late most nights of the week and the texting can build up paranoia by making you think she may be cheating with her boss (perhaps there could even be times when your texts just aren't answered and you can choose to confront your wife about that or let it go (with consequences attached to each choice). If you needed a sex scene or two you could throw in some porn you find while doing "research". On the first week you may have to really badger your wife for sex and at the end of the week you may finally convince her if you play your cards right. That sex could be determined by how well you played the rest of the chapter. You could get just a handjob, a blowjob, or full on sex depending on the decisions you made during the week. Then perhaps next chapter could just be about the public displays and voyeurism. Also your research could play more of a role in this. Perhaps while looking online, you find a site for people who liked to be watched and they give times and locations where they will be having sex in public and asking people to come watch them. One of the places could be a hidden area of a nearby park, so you convince your wife to take a walk with you in the park one evening and "accidentally" stumble upon that, which could be what triggers your wife's interest in voyeurism. You two have a conversation about it when you get home and start doing more voyeuristic things. Perhaps you then convince her to go to the mall with no panties, then perhaps you two decide to check out a strip club together and there is an "amateur night" and you convince your wife to dance on stage...I think you get where I'm going with this. Then Chapter 3 could be about dinner at your wife's boss, or about a friend staying over for the weekend or whatever. Right now you have great ideas but because you pace the story so fast they don't have time to be fully developed and a lot of them are being wasted. Instead of progressively building tension, you build a bit of tension then diffuse it right away with an almost instant payoff. Give your story room to breathe and develop your concepts more and I think you'll be very happy with the results.

mircom

Great feedback, thank you. I will work on building tension and developing each scenario going forward. I truly appreciate your input and ideas. Thank you!

Cloud Strife

I don't think paranoia would work, he wants his wife to be with other people so paranoia wouldn't fit in the game. I think it's pretty great as it is, maybe slow down her willingness to do public things, and have it where if you pick the right choices in the right order through the week it can give you the option for her to be more daring

Cloud Strife

I like this game because it's different from all the others, most are NTR ones, and that gets really boring after a while. A story about a guy who wants his wife to have sex with other people is an interesting and brilliant change of pace

Cloud Strife

But I do think that if you want your wife to do stuff with other people then she should be happy for you to do the same, but if you don't tell her about what happened then that could build up paranoia because you're doing things with other people but not telling her about it, so she could start doing the same. But maybe have it where you have to pick the right choices for her to be happy about you doing stuff with others. Sorry for swamping you with comments haha

Cloud Strife

As an example SPOILERS when you get the blowjob from fernanda and get back home, when your wife asks you if you had a massage you can tell her the truth or lie, lying could increase paranoia and maybe lower her trust in you, telling her the truth if your score with her is low will make her angry. But telling her the truth when she's happy could get you an extra scene where she takes you to the sofa and asks you to describe what happened and while you do she copies what fernanda did. The same with Nicole when you go to check on her, if Anne is mad at you she'll shout and ask Nicole to leave, lying increases paranoia and lowers trust. Happy truth could get Anne a little jealous and curious and ask to see Nicole's body for herself. Stuff like that. Right I'll stop bugging you now haha

mircom

Great feedback, thanks. Lots of great ideas here.

Cloud Strife

Oh and I've got to say fernanda is really really really hot 🔥 😁😍

Hatchetman

Marina's Cuckolding Report is a relatively famous Japanese game in this genre (well, it's more of a visual novel, calling it a game is a bit of a stretch) where the MC asks his wife to sleep with another man yet almost all of the tension is built through paranoia and anticipation. Fantasizing about your wife sleeping with someone else and it actually happening are two very different things.

Hatchetman

If stealing from one source is plagiarism but stealing from multiple sources is inspiration, here are a couple of games you could try and perhaps get ideas from (also some spoilers for the games I talk about): "Living with Temptation 2: Foreign Affairs" from Lesson of Passion has a subplot where you discover hidden cameras by sneaking into someone's office and guessing their password. Something like this would be preferable than having your wife's boss just show you the hidden cameras the first time he meets you. "Working Man" by ICE has a subplot where you could catch your wife cheating by checking the GPS data on her car and then watch her. While this may not seem to apply for a swinging game, it may give you ideas how to create events for watching your wife when she doesn't know you're watching. "Art With Carla" by Chapters In Love has very good use of a cell phone mechanic to build tension (although I think it's overused to the point of being boring later in the game). A more conservative use of a similar mechanic may help put some tension in the cell phone scenes.

mircom

Food for thought, thanks. May implement something like this in future chapters.