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Page 205 (line-work). (Patreon)

Published:
2023-06-16 13:48:17
Edited:
2023-06-16 13:50:52
Imported:
2026-06
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Deicide claims his new title!

phewm I said down a lot of marks with that first panel 😅 I’m really happy with how it turned out though. There will be additional lettering coming along with the colour-work explaining what exactly happened in that first panel and also what is happening in the last.

The colours for this one will be coming Monday 😁have a great weekend everybody!

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Planetace

Love the ariel shot of the womb-world! Those gothic looking HG.Greiger cities are rather interesting, I always assumed that droned would just relentlessly toil in optimised womb chambers or be put into stasis. But it appears they have a culture? Also, what are those giant bulbous structures that are firing at the 'planes'?

Fruit hat

I know over Father's have their own speciality in terms of fighting but do some over fathers have their own special unit or vehicle that they only have ?

CallumStephenDiggle

Ah cheers, that one took a while to plan out! they’re basically just surface structures for fully developed/hatched drones to take shelter/be stored in until they have another function to fulfil. I figured those incubation pits would constantly be being emptied in order to produce the next batch, surface structures offer necessary storage space. The aesthetic dimension to the buildings are purely for the Over-fathers and the All-mothers enjoyment. Oh I think you misunderstood what’s going on there, things will become more clear when I add the colour. The Imperium Wasps are firing missiles at the ground and that thing behind them is the exhaust plume.

CallumStephenDiggle

I haven’t designed or written that into the story yet, but there’s no reason why not!

Justin Huynh

And so... The Overfather... Cast out and left for dead... Returns as Deicide!! Our Deicide!! Ha-OOH!! Ha-OOH!! Ha-OOH!!

CallumStephenDiggle

Haha, he certainly has quite the origin story, I think he’s going to be peoples favourite character when we finally come out of this flashback.

Justin Huynh

I'm a fan of Uthipidus and am looking forward to seeing more of him as well! I also saw on one of your IG posts what looks like a beefed up Loste (with his hair grown out and armored up). Is that him in the future?

Fruit hat

I know its probably to late for Jaramacus but since he seems to be really into melee maybe he would have a unit of drones with shields and swords fighting next to him like praetorians. Instead of fighting by themselves they are more like an extension of his body with specialized legs in order to close distances faster, in order to parry and block faster. For the other overfather that decide captured in the previous volume he could've had drones that are more priest like as he seemed to really like his space magic, that channel his psionic power so he could use it from different angles or something. Not complaing about your superb writing or the already unique and amazing designs you made but it would further add flavor to the story. I want to empathize you are already doing amazing work and your what made me want a patreon account as I adore this work.

Miningation

Deicide saying that is totally badass, you can tell how much he despises the All-Mother after that well-written speech.

Erika Spooner

The All-Mother is probably rethinking her whole strategy, do you think she tightened her grip on the other Overfathers to keep them from rebelling like Deicide?

CallumStephenDiggle

It was already pretty tight but you’re right, she’s going to be cracking down hard after this.

CallumStephenDiggle

Thanks, Miningation! I’m pleased that came across in the writing ☺️ He’s got plenty of badass moments coming up, he is to become the leader of the resistance after all. I was going to add this additional bit to the speech, but I took it out. I could always add it back in with the coloured version of the page. Here it is: “you have made of me a nemesis, consider this my formal declaration of war on the Imperium and your monarchy over it.”. I wasn’t sure if it was too much and if what he has already said sums it up much to the same effect. The speech bubble would be in the point where all three panels meet so it really doesn’t eat up much of the illustrative work.

Miningation

I think it sounds good as the audience turns their attention to the bottom panel with the Imperium units flying overheard as Deicide declares war

Shawn Bond

Freakin’ biomechanical Pteranodons!?! 😍😍😍😍

Captain_Torres

What was Deicide's original name, though?

Ryan

Bob

Davide

That delivery from Deicide was Metal! Very good the landscape in the last panel

CallumStephenDiggle

Im glad you think so! Thanks very much, a lot of planning went into figuring that one out.

CallumStephenDiggle

Wodenisis, he told Losté his old name in issue 6 in order to comfort him whilst Losté was going through his own identity crisis.

CallumStephenDiggle

That’s a really brilliant idea! It’s too late to add in now, but I’ll have to incorporate something like that in later on in the story. Thanks for the input, that idea is gold!

CallumStephenDiggle

Uthipidus will have his time to shine coming up. And yes, that is indeed Losté, though his design will be slightly altered from that now, as I drew that a good while back. He’s going to have white hair when his hair grows back, something to do with the affect that stasis had on him.

Gabu

Such great graphics with the black in the lightning and Deicide standing resolute! Is he aware of all the other reasons to kill All-mother because of his experiences on the moon? Like does he know her “attitude“ towards other life, and how she manipulated life on earth? Or is he mostly caught up in the emotion of revenge for her trying to kill him right now?

CallumStephenDiggle

Thank you Gabu! Right now his motives are survival and betrayal, he is questioning her true nature but he doesn’t know the facts. There are things that he is going to learn over the rest of this flashback that will fervent his conviction to dissent against her. But you’ll see all that soon enough ☺️

Gabu

Fighting fire with fervent fire!