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Sorry for the delay, I had something come up which sidelined my writing so here it finally is, again both versions, this one has a picture of the main character.

The picture was generated by Novel AI so it is in a Manga style but still thought it was pretty good so I added it. I'd love feedback on what version you enjoy more obviously

I am writing Chapter 4 now and I'm going to say that this will be out tomorrow or Monday so keep an eye out :) 

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killfrog

What I like about your previous work was how effectively descriptive and I feel the pictures on their own are nice but may end up a crutch for lazy writting. My suggestion would to write as if you do not intend use the pictures and afterwards add them in.